《2015年武汉教师招聘英语写作之润色提升 》李旎 20150105

2015年武汉教师招聘英语写作之润色提升 李旎 英语写作就像女人的身材一样曼妙，不能从头到尾都是一样的形式，得有起伏，开头 要醒目，吸引考官眼球，中间内容要充实，有理有据，结尾要全面概括，总览全文。因此， 今天华图老师给大家分享如何在英语写作当中做到润色提升，写出一篇好的文章。 一、巧设开头和结尾 1开头 常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出 问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格，不能千篇 一律，要因不同文章的需要而各异，但又有其共同遵循的原则：开头多是通篇文章内容 的摘要；开头常能展示文章的主题；开头应能抓住读者的注意力，引导读者读下去。 用于文章开头的句型有： (1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of.；Those who object to.argue that.； They believe that.；But people who favor.，on the other hand，argue that. (2)Faced with.，quite a few people argue that.；But other people conceive differently. (3)Currently there is a widespread concern that. (4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that. (5)Now it is commonly held that.；But I doubt whether. 2结尾 结尾的方法有很多，如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。 结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳，也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读 者共鸣，深化主题，给人回味，引人深思。 用于文章结尾的句型有： (1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that. (2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on. (3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of. if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in. (4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way. (5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of., but. might be helpful/beneficial. (6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of.，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of. might be the first step on the right way. (7) There is little doubt/denying that. (8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of. require immediate attention. (9) As far as.be concerned, I believe/think that. 二、准确地道的英美式表达 1. 注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异 a little boy 小男孩(有可爱之意 ) a small boy 小男孩 (强调身材瘦小) 2. 注意词语的习惯搭配 用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义，还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配，一定要避免 受汉语影响而出现错误。 Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F) Nobody is to blame for it.(T) 3. 避免口语化 高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体，因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。 This is the best hotel you can find here. You cant find a better hotel here.或 Nowhere else can you find a better hotel. 4. 避免赘言啰嗦 赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只需要一两个词，却用了冗长的词组或者从 句，如 repeat again，return back ，still remain，very perfect 等。 三、提升表达结构 格言警句的套用 (1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。 (2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。 (3)No pains，no gains.不劳无获。 (4)Its never too late to learn.活到老学到老。 (5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 (6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。 (7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。 (8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 说了这么多，最重要的还是希望广大考生能够将这些技巧巧妙地运用在写作当中，久 而久之就会变成自己的东西，最后希望大家都能在 2015 年武汉招教考试中取得优异的成绩， 争取早日成为一名