高考英语书面表达训练-选好词写好句.ppt

书面表达训练,如何算是一篇好的文章？,1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】） 3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,书面表达六步法,书面表达,审,抓,遣,连,查,抄,1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态 文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文 要求：（见试题） 人称：第一、二、三人称 时态：过去式或者一般现在式.,2.3： 抓、遣： 列要点（关键词动词或动词词组） 4. 连： (1) 扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。 (2) 组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。,5. 查：复查全文 （1）体裁格式是否正确； （2）内容要点是否全面； （3）全文的行文是否通顺、连贯。 （4）句子的时态、语态是否正确； （5）主谓是否一致； （6）标点符号与大小写有无错误； （7）字数是否相符等。,选好词，写好句,一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。,指点迷津,你将很容易找到我的家,You will find my house easily.,-,-,-,S,V,O,时态：一般将来时。S+Will +V原形,1、You will find my house easily.,have no difficulty in doing sth,Youll have no trouble/difficulty (in) finding my house.,她很喜欢运动。,She likes sports very much.,-,-,-,S,V,O,1.Be fond of 2.be into 3.be interested in 4.enjoy,She is fond of sports. She is into sports. She is interested in sports. She enjoys sports.,我们将尽力学好英语。,Try to do sth,Well try to learn English well.,do everything sb can to do sth make every effort to do,Try to do sth,1.I hope to receive your letter soon. 2.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.,Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.,Because of/Thanks to/Owing to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.,二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词,短语选择使用其他恰当的同义词、词组来代替。,1.He learns English well,he learns maths well ,too.,do well in be good at,三、学会套用句型,1.He was very tired. He couldnt walk any farther.,tooto,He was too tired to walk any farther.,Because people communicate in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English. With so many people communicating in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.,With+宾语+宾语补足语 （doing/done/adj/to do/adv）,1.Because he has a lot of homework to do, he doesnt watch TV. 2.Mr.li came into the classroom, he has a book in his hand. 3.The farmer sleeps, and his window is open.,With+宾语+宾语补足语 （doing/done/adj/to do/adv）,With a lot of homework to do,with a book in his hand,with his window open.,2.If you study hard, you will make great progress.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,祈使句+and/or+陈述句（陈述句要用将来时态）,I was late for school because I got up late.,The reason whyis that,The reason why I was late for school was that I got up late.,四、通过合句，将意义相关的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过收缩，去掉一些多余的成分，或无意义的重复，避免冗长累赘，松散无力，以增强句子的连贯性，达到更好的表达效果。,I am seventeen years old this year,that is to say,Ill be eighteen years old in 2011.,Ill be eighteen years old in 2011.,The school is surrounded by many green trees.It looks very beautiful.,The school surrounded by many green trees looks very beautiful.,Surrounded by many green trees ,the school looks very beautiful.,The school looks very beautiful with many green trees surrounding it.,Our class is a big family ; It consists of 12 girls and 50 boys. Most of them are mainly from the countryside. Zhao Qiang is a kind-hearted boy. He is always ready to help others. He is such a good boy that we all like him.,Our class is a big family which consists of 12 girls and 50 boys, most of whom are mainly from the countryside. Zhao Qiang is a kind-hearted boy, who is always ready to help others. He is such a good boy as we all like.,五、定语从句的运用,1、你们已经取得了很大的进 步，这使老师非常高兴.,You have made great progress, which makes your teacher very happy.,Practice,2.北京是中国的首都，它是一座美丽的城市。,Beijing, which is the capital city of China ,is a very beautiful city.,3.鲁迅的原名(real name)是周树人。在他的一生中他写了很多小说。,Luxun, whose real name is ZhouShuren, wrote many novels in his whole life .,六、强调句、倒装句的运用,Only by working hard can you succeed. 只有努力工作你才能成功。,只有当我们有足够的睡眠时才能有足够的精力去学习。,Only when we have enough sleep can we have enough energy to study.,Practice,正是乐观精神让我们更好地应当生活中的问题。,It is optimism that helps us better cope with the problems in life.,1 正是老师无私的爱指引我成功。 2 当时我突然病了，正是你背我去附近的医院。,1 It was my teachers unselfish love that led me to success.,2 When I suddenly fell ill, it was you whothat carried me on your back to a nearby hospital.,Practice,七、有效的使用句子间的连接成分，使句子间的逻辑关系更加明确，使整篇文章条理清楚，连贯流畅。,Cellphone is popular among teenagers. Cellphone makes it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. Cellphone makes teenagers feel cool.,cellphone is popular among teenagers. cellphones make it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. cellphones make teenagers feel cool.,As we all know,On one hand,On the other hand,I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks. We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get much information. We can send E-mails or make phone calls to our family.We can attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. ,In my opinion,rather than,As we all know,is playing,a more and more important role,Use better phrases to replace the common ones.,Practice Improve the passage,not only,but also,Besides we,八、但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。,1 汉式英语 2 句式单一 平铺直叙 3 基础词汇掌握不牢 4 书写不规范,Common mistakes,8-9分,5-6分,12-13分,Practice,假设你是校刊英文版的编辑,近日,你校针对许多高中生不吃早饭这一现象展开调研,请根据下面的表格写一篇题目为“Top Meal of the Day“的英语短文,将调研结果刊登在校刊上。,Top Meal of the Day Nowadays its common for high-school students to go to school without having breakfast, which leads to both poor school performance and damage to their health. When asked why they skip breakfast, some students say they regard breakfast as the least important meal of the day, and think it unnecessary, while others say they have too little time in the morning to have breakfast. And a third grou