定语从句在基础写作中的运.ppt

定语从句在基础写作中的运用,Chen Xudong,Oct 24th, 2013,Lead in He, who knows nothing but pretends to know everything, is indeed a good-for-nothing. 不懂装懂,永世饭桶。,Lead in No man or woman is worth your tears, and the one who is, wont make you cry. 没人值得你流泪，如果有，他/她不会让你哭。,基础作文的潜规则 fewer sentences, but more information. 句子个数少，信息量大。,写好基础作文第一神器 Attributive Clauses 定语从句,实战 一个最古老的故事 从前有座山，山上有座庙 Do you know the story?,故事精简版 从前有座山，山上有座庙， 庙有有俩和尚，一个大和尚， 一个小和尚，小和尚要大和尚讲故事，故事里面说,生词提示 和尚 monk 庙 temple 要求: 一个英文句子写完这个故事。,One possible version Long long ago, there was a mountain, on which stood a temple, in which lived two monks: an old one, a young one, who asked the other one to tell him a story, which goes like this,Put it back into Chinese Long long ago, there was a village, in front of which stood a big tree, in which lived two birds, the young one of whom asked the old one to teach him a song, which goes like this 从这里，你可以体会到定语从句不愧为第一神器的称号。,Time to have another try!,【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，介绍一位热门人物。,姓 名：莫言（管谟业） 出生日期：1955年2月17日 出 生 地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家 兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy) 性格特征：开朗、幽默 教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院（ PLA Academy of Arts） ；1991年毕业于北京大学并获文学硕士学位（ Masters Degree of Arts ）。 主要成就：2011年凭借蛙获中国最高文学奖“矛盾文学奖”；2012年获诺贝尔文学奖。 评 价：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家，被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。,1.审：时态_ 人称_,2.抓：抓要点，定表达。,3.合：整合信息，连词成句。,4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。,Basic writing,一般过去时一般现在时,第 三 人 称,2.抓：抓要点，定表达。,be born in Gaomi on February 17, 1955 , show great interest in , graduate from, obtain a degree /receive a degree , win the award of/ obtain the prize of, the first person to do， be honored as , make great contributions to,姓 名：莫言（管谟业） 出生日期：1955年2月17日 出 生 地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家 兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法(calligraphy) 性格特征：开朗、幽默 教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院（ PLA Academy of Arts） ；1991年毕业于北京大学并获文学硕士学位（ Masters Degree of Arts） 。 主要成就：2011年凭借蛙获中国最高文学奖 “矛盾文学奖”；2012年获诺贝尔文学奖。 评 价：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家，被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一。,3.合：整合信息。,3. Mo Yan, originally named Guan Moye, was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955.,2. Mo Yan, whose original name is Guan Moye, was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955,1. Mo Yan named Guan Moye firstly and he was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955.,句型多样化、高级化,1. Mo Yan has been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood and is outgoing and humorous.,2. Mo Yan, who has been interested in reading and calligraphy since his childhood, is outgoing and humorous.,句型多样化、高级化,3. Not only has Mo Yan been interested in reading and calligraphy since his childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous.,2. Mo Yan, who graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later.,1. Mo graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986 and went to Beijing University to gain a Masters Degree of Arts in 1991.,3. Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later.,句型多样化、高级化,Mo Yan, originally named Guan Moye, was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955. Whats more, not only has he been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous. Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later.,4.连：连句成篇，注意连贯。,With a talent for literature, he won Chinas highest literary prize, Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011. To all Chineses excitement, this year he became the first Chinese