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2019/7/19,1,四级考试作文总结 (阐述型),司选海 QQ:332567896 Tel:2019/7/19,2,（一）阐述型,论说文/议论文,因为论据，所以论点。,文章主题句,文章重点发展部分,2019/7/19,3,两种形式： 一、,说明这种现象的利或弊,提出一种社会现象,说明你的看法/你认为如何发扬/杜绝此种现象。,例1：Email 当前越来越多的人使用电子邮件 电子邮件给人们的生活带来哪些便利 我的看法 例2：Traffic Jam 交通堵塞已成为一个严重的社会问题 交通堵塞给人们生活带来的影响 如何解决这一问题,2019/7/19,4,二、,例3：Lucky Numbers（9806） 有人认为某些数字会带来好运 我认为数字和运气无关 例4：Is Money Everything? （9501） 有人认为钱是幸福之源 有人认为钱是万恶之源 我的看法,阐述/表达自己的看法,两种完全相反的观点,2019/7/19,5,写好第二种类型的作文,重新设计,重新设计,重新设计,重新设计,2019/7/19,6,套用模板： 阐述型模板（一）要点： 提出 阐述 看法,2019/7/19,7,It is universally a fact that （社会现象）. (展开一、两句). （主题句）Communicating via email is very convenient / not advisable. Firstly, （好/坏处之一） . Secondly, （好/坏处之二） . Lastly, （好/坏处之三）. Therefore, (自己的观点). （展开一、两句）.（套入标题的结尾句）.,2019/7/19,8,It is universally a fact that more and more people are communicating via emails. People send emails to their relatives abroad on New Years time, job hunters apply for new job positions via email, and university students even hand in their homework via email to their teachers. Communicating via email is very convenient. Firstly, it is very fast. It reaches the reader in a minute. Secondly, it is cheaper. You have to pay nearly 5 to send a letter abroad while sending an email costs nothing except the fee for the use of the internet. Lastly, its easier. You dont have to go to the post office or search your drawers for an envelop or stay at one place waiting for the reply. So long as you can find a computer connected to the Internet, you can get the email. Therefore, its really a good way to communicate via emails. In a time when efficiency is one of the most important factors to success, communicating via emails certainly will play a more and more important role in our lives.,2019/7/19,9,第二种形式套用模板：,阐述型模板（二） 要点：提出两种观点及自己的看法 说明自己的理由 重申观点，点题,2019/7/19,10,2019/7/19,11,A public debate has arisen as to the phenomenon of the importance of money. Some people believe that money can bring people happiness. With money, they can get everything. Other people, however, insist that money is the source of evil. They believe that people can commit crimes for money. From a personal perspective, money is a good thing if it is used in a right way; otherwise, it is not. There are three reasons for my opinion. First of all, money can bring to the poor daily necessities when they are in difficulty, especially after a disaster, such as flood, drought and earthquake, etc. Furthermore, money can make our life more comfortable. So long as we use it in a right way, it really makes our life colorful and meaningful. Most important of all, the development of our society and of science and technology all point to the indispensability of money. Every year, the government put considerable amount of money in developing our countrys education, industry, and agriculture. In a word, money is a good thing if it is used in the right way. It can brig us not only happiness but also fast development of our country.,2019/7/19,12,策略：九句话作文模板,2019/7/19,13,九句话模板 要点： 第二段（主体段） 第四句主题句（提出论点） 第五句论据1 第六句论据2 第七句论据3,2019/7/19,14,第三段（结尾段） 第八句总结句（概括全文） 第九句结束句（重复主题）,Example： Stop Smoking 吸烟问题越来越受到人们的关注。 吸烟的害处 你的想法,2019/7/19,15,套用九句话模板： There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question. They have realized that smoking does great harm to health. The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. First, it can cause cancer. Second, it pollutes the environment. Third, it causes great waste of money. In short, smoking does great harm to people. Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking. (78 words),2019/7/19,16,在九句话的基础上扩展（斜体字部分）： There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this issue, and some even write to the government calling for policies to ban smoking in all public places. They have realized that smoking does great harm to the health of smokers and non-smokers as well. The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. First, it can cause cancer. A recent survey by the WHO shows, of the diseases which cause deaths every year, nearly one third has to do with smoking. Second, it pollutes the environment. Cigarettes ends make dirty our air and water. Third, it causes great waste of money. Is it wise to spend nearly thirty yuan every day for something which will kill you eventually? In short, smoking does great harm to people. It is high time that effective measures be taken to stop smoking.（150 words）,2019/7/19,17,Class Work,Directions: The following are the writing tasks in the previous years. Scan them quickly and decide which one of them is the type of composition we have discussed today.,2019/7/19,18,1993年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport. You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.运动的积极因素 2.运动的消极因素 3.你的体会,2019/7/19,19,1993年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Most Favorite Program. You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 我最喜爱的电视（或无线电）节目是 2. 这类节目的内容和特点 3. 我喜欢它的原因,2019/7/19,20,1994年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.现代的交通工具越来越发达 2.人与人之间的交往越来越频繁 3.结论,2019/7/19,21,1995年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Advantage of a Job Interview. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.现在找工作一般都要面试，通过面试，面试者（interviewer）和应试者(interviewee) 可以互相了解情况。 2.面试者可以向应试者介绍情况如工作性质、条件、待遇等。 3.应试者也有机会给对方留下一个好印象，如可以表现出自信心，可以介绍教育背景，工作能力等。,2019/7/19,22,1996年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。 2. 双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。 3. 我应当怎样过好双休日。,2019/7/19,23,1996年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Global Shortage of Fresh Water. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 人们以为淡水是取之不尽的 (提示：雨水、河水、井水) 2. 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 (提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染) 3. 我们应该怎么办,2019/7/19,24,1997年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes tow rite a composition on the topic Practice Makes Perfect. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 怎样理解“熟能生巧”？ 2. 例如：在英语学习中 3. 又如,2019/7/19,25,1997年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 大学生了解社会的必要性 2. 了解社会的途径（大众媒介、社会服务等） 3. 我打算怎么做,2019/7/19,26,1998年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Harmfulness of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品（fake commodities）。为什么会有这种现象？ 2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。,2019/7/19,27,1998年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Luck Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below. 1. 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。 2. 我认为数字和运气无关，,2019/7/19,28,1999年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Dont Hesitate to Say No. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说不 2. 为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不 3. 该说不时不说不的坏处,2019/7/19,29,1999年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择 2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的看法,2019/7/19,30,2000年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 上大学的费用（tuition and fees）可以通过多种途径解决 2. 哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）,2019/7/19,31,2000年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The first sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 100 words, and base your competition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是 2. 也有人持不同意见， 3. 我的看法和打算 A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).,2019/7/19,32,2001年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 面试在求职过程中的作用 2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是,2019/7/19,33,2001年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write a t least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 1. 表示欢迎 2. 提出对度假安排的建议 3. 提醒应注意的事项 A Letter to a Schoolmate,2019/7/19,34,2002年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼有而有之。,2019/7/19,35,2003年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 100 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2. 诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实,2019/7/19,36,2003年6月 For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1. 车祸发生的时间及地点 2. 你所见到的车祸情况 3. 你对车祸原因的分析,2019/7/19,37,2003年9月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况 2. 同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的 3. 人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,2019/7/19,38,2004年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friends inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 建议报考的专业及理由 2. 报考该专业的基本条件 3. 应当如何备考 A Letter in Reply to a Friend,2019/7/19,39,2004年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: Your role: a tour guide Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: some welcoming words the schedule for the day a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.) You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.,2019/7/19,40,2005年1月 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Campaign Speech. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 你认为自己具备是什么条件(能力，性格，爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作， 2. 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？,2019/7/19,41,2005年6月 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Teachers day. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 向老师致以节日的问候 2.