2023广州二模读后续写写作学案写作指导逐句翻译

2023广州二模•读后续写第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OutsidetheBoxTheHarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirself-madecostumes（装扮）andawinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?Aliceasked."Pmgoingasachocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek”Yeah,Ihaveacostume/9saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaitedfbrhisdadtopickhimup."Butit'sboring."Why?Whatisit?Aliceasked."MaxMagthesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo."Jordanshookhishead."That'stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.Hewavedtohisdad,whohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.Jordanrolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan（小货车）.Maybeyoushouldgoassomethingelse.”ThecontestisFridaynight."Jordansighed."It'stoolatetochangecostumes.”"Jordan,youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems."Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolate-barcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet,HekeptthinkingaboutAlice'swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismumhandlingwithsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadcomein.MomsmiledatJordan,pointingatthedesk/Whatdoyouthink?^^注意：.续写词数应为150左右：Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"Itsperfect...withmywheelchair.SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume1.情节分析：characterA：Jordan,Alice,Mom（主要人物）Danny,Tom,Izzy,principal,Dad（次要人物）Object物：costume,MaxMag（superhero）,chocolatebar,emptycardboardbox,wheelchairtime时间:Harvestfestcontest（Fridaynight）location地点：schoolconflict冲突/问题：Jordan想赢，但目前的装扮与其他人雷同，无胜算消极，认为时间太短无法改变装扮Event(隐藏事件)：awinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.情节设计Para1：Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."一Mompuzzled—>Jordanexplain一theprocessofmakingMaxMag(combinetheboxandthewheelchair)一theworkwasfinishedPara2：SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn/twaittoshowhiscostume.一Jordanwheeledhimselfwiththecostume(nervous/excited)一others'reaction(Danny,Tom/zzy/surprised一meetAlice(chocolatebar)andthankher一thewinnerchosenbytheprincipal—theme:thinkoutsidethebox.Usefulexpression:①情绪迷惑的confused/puzzled兴奋的excited/thrilled/wildwithjoy自豪满足beproudof/feelsatisfied自豪感与满足感asenseofprideandsatisfaction②动作剪cut贴paste/glue叠fold展开unfold挖dig贴stick上色color设计design发现spot推wheel移动moveforward停stop接近approach猜测guess前往headfor③说补充道add解释explain宣布declare/announcePara1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."一个有创意的想法在他的脑海中闪现。Acreativeideaflashedthroughhismind..意识到妈妈很困惑，他很快补充道：“妈妈，那是一张很酷的桌子。但我能把这个大盒子给Harvestfest比赛吗？”RealizingMomwasconfused,hequicklyadded,"That'sacooldesk,Mum.ButcanIhavethebigboxfortheHarvestfestcontest?".然后他兴奋地解释了如何把它变成超级英雄MaxMagoHethenexplainedexcitedlyhowtoturnitintoasuperheroMaxMag..她微笑着向他竖起大拇指。“没时间等了！我们开始吧！”Shesmiledandgavehimathumbsup."Notimetowait!Let'sgetstarted!".两个晚上，他们把盒子剪、贴、叠、展开；他们在上面画画并上色，使其看起来像一辆真正的汽车，并将旧的MaxMag服装粘在上面。Fortwonights,theycut,pasted,foldedandunfoldedthebox;theydrewonitandcoloredittomakeitlooklikearealcar,andtheygluedtheoldMaxMagcostumeontoit..当新服装终于准备好时，乔丹试了几次，并继续进行必要的更改，直到满意为止。Whenthenewcostumewasfinallyready,Jordantrieditonseveraltimesandcontinuedtomakenecessarychangesuntilsatisfied.Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn/twaittoshowhiscostume..当他把自己当作一个移动的MaxMag推进来时，他听到了钦佩的惊叹声。WhenhewheeledhimselfinasamobileMaxMag,heheardadmiringexclamations..每个人都在猜测会是谁。Everybodywereguessingaboutwhoitwouldbe..乔丹感到越来越自豪和满足。Jordanfeltanincreasingsenseofprideandsatisfaction..当他发现一块巧克力棒时，他迅速向它靠近，在前面几英寸处停了下来，然后迅速打开了门。Whenhespottedachocolatebar,hequicklymovedtowardsit,stoppedjustseveralinchesinfrontandquicklyopenedthedoor..“乔丹，是你！”爱丽丝喊道。“我之所以能做到，是因为你的鼓励。谢谢你。”'Jordan,it'syouiAlicecriedout."Imadeitbecauseofyourencouragement.Thankyou.".到了宣布获胜者的时候，乔丹毫无疑问地赢得了比赛。Wh