英语作文中的典型错误.ppt

作文中的作文中的 典型错误典型错误 分析分析 一、词的用法与句型搭配不当 1. an englishman teaches our english. 一位英国人教我们英语。 2. just like bees produce honey teachers produce knowledge. 老师生产知识就象蜜蜂产蜜一样。 an englishman teaches us english. teach, give, pass, show, buy, sing, send, borrow, lend等有时跟一个宾语、有时须跟双宾语。 just as bees produce honey teachers produce knowledge. like不是连词，不能引导主谓结构。 3. because in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, so the atmosphere is very dirty. 因为我们城市有许多工厂和车辆，所以空 气污浊。 because in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, the atmosphere is very dirty. in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, so the atmosphere is very dirty. *because引导从句，连接主从结构，表示主从 关系；而 so 连接并列结构, 表示并列关系， 所以不能同时出现在一个句子里。 e.g. although in poor health, but she continued to carry out her duties. 尽管她身体不好，但她仍继续执行任务 。 although in poor health, she continued to carry out her duties. she was in poor health, but she continued to carry out her duties. 4. i hope some chance to improve myself. 我希望有进修的机会。 i hope for some chance to improve myself. 英语中只有hope +宾语从句 或 hope for sth 没有hope sth的结构。 5. her husband changed rude and selfish. 他们变得自私和粗暴。 they became/turned rude and selfish. change 不是系动词，不能直接跟形容词。 7. he decided to put his energies to write. 他决定把精力投入写作。 he decided to devote his energies to writing. *英语中没有put ones energies to do sth的结构。 *it is one thing to have theories, and another thing to put them into practice. 有理论是一回事，将它们付诸实践是另一回事。 8. if we want to construct our motherland to be a developed country, we also need money. 如果我们想把祖国建设成为一个发达国家 ，我们还需要资金。 if we want to make our motherland a developed country, we also need money. 英语中没有construct sth to be +形容词的结构。 the teacher asked me to construct a sentence like this. they wanted their buildings constructed in a way to look unnatural. (p.19 b.2/s2) 9. i will furnish my new house to be more beautiful. 我将把我的新房子装饰的漂亮一些。 i will furnish it and make it beautiful. *英语中没有furnish sth to be + 形容词的结构 。 10. studying history needs that you go over it every day. 学历史需要每天复习。 studying history, you need to go over it every day. *need不能跟 that从句。 11. on the weekend my children would take my grandchildren to see me. 周末我的孩子们往往带着孙子们来看我。 on the weekend my children would take my grandchildren to my place （and see me ）. 英语中没有take sb to do sth的搭配 * we took flowers to our sick friends. 我们给生病的朋友带花去。 12. we will change our country into big and powerful. 我们将要把我们的国家变成强大的国家。 we will make our country into a big and powerful one. *英语中没有change sth into+形容词的结构。 *但可以说change a into b,其中a、b都是名词。 * the witch changed the boy into a dog. 巫婆将那男孩变成一只狗。 13. i often dream to be a college student. 我常梦想成为一个大学生。 i often dream of becoming a college student. 英语中没有dream to do sth的搭配， 但可以说dream of doing sth / dream + that 从句。 * she dreamed that one day she would be famous for her novel. 她梦想有一天她能以她的小说而出名。 二、结构错误 1.there are many meaningful things that we cant buy them with money. there are many meaningful things that we cant buy with money. 2.some people in order to get money, they sold their souls. in order to get money, some people sold their souls. 3.some people who enjoy singing and dancing. so they often go to clubs with their friends. some people who enjoy singing and dancing often go to clubs with their friends. 4.she is always warning me, telling me dont do this, dont do that. she is always warning me, telling me not to do this or that. 11.money cant be instead of everything in our life. money cant replace everything in our life. 12. as when lifestyles change, humans are increasingly living longer. as lifestyles change, humans are increasingly living longer. 15. on arriving at the railway station, my friends were waiting for me there. on arriving at the railway station, i found my friends waiting for me there. 16. the car ran to the direction of the square. the car ran in/towards the direction of the square. 三、表达方式不够地道 1。回家的感觉真好，可以吃到妈妈亲手做的 家乡菜。 i feel good to be at home. i can eat the hometown dishes my mum makes. its great to be home. i can enjoy the local dishes my mum makes. *at home是物理概念，指具体的存在; be home是抽象概念，指家的感觉与气氛。 3。 家里呆的时间长了，有时我也会想 念学校的生活。那里没有妈妈的唠叨， 自由很多。 i sometimes miss the school life when stay