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最新六年高考英语满分作文及评析04-092009高考英语满分作文全国卷I海南宁夏 ks5u试题回放假定你是李华正在英国接受英语培训住在一户英国人家里今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家你准备外出请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条内容包括 Ks5u1外出购物 Ks5u2替房东还书 Ks5u3Tracy 来电话留言1咖啡屋Bolton Coffee见面取消 Ks5u2此事已告知Susan Ks5u3 尽快回电 Ks5u注意1 词数100左右 Ks5u2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯Mrs Wilson Ks5uIm going out shopping and wont be back until about 500 pm I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library At about 1 oclock this afternoon Tracy called saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to She felt very sorry about that but said that you could set some other time for the meeting She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home She has already told Susan about this change Ks5uYoursLi Hua Ks5u名师点评 Ks5u本文属于提纲式要点作文是学生比较熟悉的题材体现了英语学习应该注意实用性生活型的原则行文人称时态运用恰当准确各个要点间逻辑连贯行文通顺提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句因此要仔细组织语言合理安排结构在语言方面要特别注意简洁明了开头要开门见山 北京卷ks5u试题回放情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华为响应绿化祖国的号召你班四月十二日去郊区植树请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序介绍植树活动的全过程给某英文杂志的绿色行动专栏写一篇以Green Action in Our Class为题的英文稿件注意词数不少于60提示词郊区 suburbs April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day In the morning we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees talking and laughing all the way Upon arrival we began to work immediately Some were digging holes Some were carrying and planting young trees Others were watering After getting the work done we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action Seeing the lines of trees we all had a sense of achievement We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment名师点评本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文与环保结合立意较好文章思路清晰要点连贯在语言的表达上选词新颖同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达北京卷ks5u试题回放开放作文请根据下面提示写一篇短文词数不少于50In your spoken English class your teacher shows you the following picture You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it What an interesting picture A western young man sitting at a table is ready to eat a bowl of noodles He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot At first glance I think its a bit funny for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles The man in the picture is trying to copy us Obviously he is doing it the hard way Maybe using one fork will do a better job In my opinion we dont need to copy others ways of thinking Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way名师点评本文是开放性作文要求考生把握好图画内容发散表达考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性行文结构十分明晰同时句式使用得熟练而准确江苏卷ks5u试题回放鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作但是过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响请你以鼠标为切入点根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文鼠标的必要性对多数人来说操作计算机上网冲浪鼠标的便捷性点击移动插入拷贝删除编辑文本搜索信息收发邮件选购商品点播音乐下载电影如果过分依赖鼠标 请考生结合自身感受列举两到三点注意1对所给要点逐一陈述适当发挥不要简单翻译2词数150左右开头已经写好不计人总词数3作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computerFor most people its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse let alone surf the Internet A well-chosen mouse is really handy flexible and convenient in controlling the screen With the functions of inserting deleting moving and copying it enables us to edit test browse web page and download what we want It can even bring us a flood of music movies and PC games Just imagine all this can be done with a cute mouseA convenient tool can certainly make our work easier but it doesnt always help in a positive way Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically名师点评本文为提纲式说明文体裁所选内容与我们生活相关考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述适度发挥不要逐条翻译即可文章说理清楚语言流畅句式表达多样用词恰当准确不失为一篇满分作文2008高考英语满分作文全国卷ks5u试题回放假定你是李华从小喜爱大熊猫panda一直通过有关网站 website 关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫苏琳和她的母亲白云现在苏琳即将三岁请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信1 自我介绍2 祝贺苏琳生日3 感谢工作人员4 索取苏琳三岁生日照注意1词数100左右2可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯3开头语已为你写好例文Dear SirMadamGreetings from ChinaIm Li Hua a student in Sichuan Ive been a panda lover since I was a child About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website Now shes going to be three Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the USBy the way could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday Thank you very much in advanceYours trulyLi Hua名师点评本文写作的内容要点如下1自我介绍2信息来源3祝贺生日4感谢照顾5索取照片6合适的结尾这封信格式正确行文规范描述有条不紊称呼正文中的开头及结尾结束语均表达到位文章行文活泼感情真挚语言表述准确洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情以及希望自己愿望成真得到照片的希冀之情长短句运用合理结合了简单句和复合句流畅自然不露痕迹的确是一篇佳作积累卡片英汉互译好词1delighted adj欣喜的快乐的 2express v表达 3give birth to v产生生育好句Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活评析定语从句的使用北京卷ks5u试题回放假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华为校刊英语园地写一篇题为Our Spring Outing 的英文稿件 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程 注意 词数不少于60 提示词 游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin Last Thursday we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing We came up with several choices such as going boating climbing a mountain and going to an amusement park Finally we decided to go mountain climbing The next day we set off early in the morning While climbing the mountain we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view However when we reached the top we were shocked to see litter here and there such as bottles and banana peels Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectivelyWe were tired but happy名师点评 本情景作文的内容要点如下1讨论2爬山3检拾别人的垃圾4投放垃圾内容要点可用不同方式表达本文覆盖了所有内容要点较好地完成了试题规定的任务其中写作主题突出详略得当应用了较多的语法结构和词汇而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分使全文机构紧凑本文叙述清楚描写细致准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型例如set off earlyenjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view were shocked to see litter here and there 等将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来积累卡片英汉互译好词1 set off 出发 2 litter n废弃物 3respectively adv分别地好句1While climbing the mountain we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view 在爬山时我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景However when we reached the top we were shocked to see litter here and there such as bottles and banana peels然而当我们登上山顶被眼前的一幕惊呆了瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是评析细节描写生动形象shock一词也用得生动传神江苏卷ks5u试题回放实现有效的沟通建立良好的人际关系不仅要善于言表更要学会倾听请你根据下表中所提供的信息写一篇题为 Being a Good Listener 的英文演讲稿为何倾听表示尊重增进理解建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子消除代沟老师倾听学生了解学生满足需求同学相互倾听增进友谊互帮互学怎样倾听请考生联系自己拟定内容列举两至三点注意对所给要点逐一陈述适当发挥不要简单翻译词数150左右开头和结尾已经写好不计入总词数演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名Good afternoon everyoneThe topic of my speech today is Being a Good ListenerGood listening can always show respect promote understanding and improve interpersonal relationshipMany people suggest that parents should listen more to their children so they will understand them better and find it easy to narrow the generation gap teachers should listen more to their students then they can meet their needs better and place themselves in a good relationship with their students students should listen more to their classmates thus they will help and learn from each other and a friendship is likely to be formedWhat I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them In a word good listening can really enable us to get closer to each otherThank you for your listening名师点评这是一篇感情真挚热情洋溢的演讲稿文中大量运用排比句型不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力 积累卡片英汉互译好词1promote v 促进 2 interpersonal adj人际的3 generation gap 代沟 4 open-minded adj 虚心的好句students should listen more to their classmates thus they will help and learn from each other and a friendship is likely to be formed同学之间应该互相倾听这样他们可以互相学习和帮助也会形成友谊评析复杂句的组合被动句的使用What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人评析复合句的使用湖北卷ks5u试题回放假设你是卜曼宜你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机因有质量问题要求该公司更换请根据下列要点用英文写一封电子邮件要点1 问题手机不响铃不能发短信该产品已售完无法更换型号新无配件无法维修 2 要求公司应尽快予以更换 注意1 词数为100左右 2 参考词汇配件 spare part 3 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好不计入你所写词数 4已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡Dear SirI am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan PR China Ten days after that it didnt ring and send short messages Then I took it to the seller but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one I had no choice but to go to the repairman To my disappointment he said since it was a new model in China it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long Therefore I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a monthThank you for your considerationSincerely yoursBu Manyi名师点评本文内容要点齐全语言丰富结构合理如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委最后明确提出自己的要求明白流畅将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚较好的完成了任务全文以一般过去时为基调结合主动语态与被动语态并使用了so but therefore 等连接词使文章结构完整严密固定短语如be sold out at least had no choice but to go to my disappointment on hearing that 等的使用使文章的语言显得地道而精炼积累卡片英汉互译好词1 disappointment n失望 2desperate adj绝望的3 consideration n体谅好句To my disappointment he said since it was a new model in China it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts令我失望的是他说因为在中国是新款手机所以没有配件来修理评析复杂句的组织 to my disappointment 常用短语2007高考英语满分作文全国卷IIks5u试题回放一家宾馆新开业为吸引外国宾客希望在互联网上进行宣传请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍主要内容包括1地点距白山入口处500米2房间及价格单人间共20间100元天双人间共15间150元天热水淋浴3餐饮餐厅中西餐咖啡厅茶咖啡4游泳池全天免费开放 5欢迎预定注意1词数100左右开头语已为你写好2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯Welcome to Baishan Mountain HotelBaishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain it provides singleperson room of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20 and 15 double person rooms with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day It also provides hot water bath service You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe The swimming pool is open for free the whole day All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable So come to enjoy yourselfWelcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain名师点评本文开门见山首先点明了主旨本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式使文章比较出彩开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确总地来说文章句式精炼是篇不错的满分作文积累卡片英汉互译好词1 provide v提供2 convenience n便利好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable所有这些服务都会给你带来便利并且非常的愉快评析bring great convenience带来便利安徽卷ks5u试题回放假如你是李华美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物该校格林先生来信询问有关情况请你给她写封回信假如你是李华美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物该校格林先生来信询问有关情况请你给她写封回信主要内容如下l 表示赞成l 提出你喜欢的栏目l 简要说明理由注意1 词数100左右2 新的开头和结尾已为你写好3 适当增加细节以使行文连贯4 参考栏目栏目columnDear Mr GreenI am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together That sounds great And I definitely agree with you on thatSome of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea Say culture express gives us a better understanding of the world Since people from different parts of the world have different values its necessary to learn from each other This will offer a wonderful chance Apart from that blurt out is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English Last but not least entertainment is so cool The popular singers actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it Teenagers are just fond of the trendy thingsWell I cant list more I really cant wait to read that magazineYours faithfullyLi Hua名师点评这是一篇满分作文由于这篇作文的出现导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低仔细分析了这篇文章写的的确是好很地道的美式英语一些词语的大胆使用让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历否则这么地道标准的英语可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的比如说my cup of tea apart from that oral English last but not least celebrities catchy和trendy的大胆运用list cant wait to 简直是perfect 况且文章中没有一个错误不管是书写还是语法英语能够学到这种程度不可谓不让人佩服 江苏卷ks5u试题回放2007年4月29日上午10点到11点全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动教育部倡导学生u每天锻炼一小时u 健康工作五十年u幸福生活一辈子请你根据以上提示用英语准备一份发言稿向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼谈谈你的看法及理由注意1 发言稿应包括以上所有信息要有适当发挥2 词数120左右发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好不计入总词数3 参考词汇阳光体育活动a national student sports program 教育部the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon everyoneThe national student sports program waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health was held from 1000am1100amon April 292007 in many primary and middle schools all over China Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this programThe Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years Our whole life will be very enjoyableIn my opinion we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited Health is a basic condition for our study If we did not do exercises we wouldnt be able to get good study records So every one of you join the program nowThank you名师点评本文的结构十分明晰同时句式使用得熟练而准确本文分为三段前两段叙述后一段发表观点典型的作文结构在句式使用上作者用法多样使用了独立结构和虚拟语气十分出彩复杂的句式是本文的特点之一积累卡片好词1wage v发动2aim v瞄准3 advocate v提倡好句1 The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动能够健康地活50年评析advocate其后接虚拟语气可以省略情态动词2 If we did not do exercises we wouldnt be able to get good study records如果我们不进行运动我们的学习成绩就不会很好评析虚拟语气 重庆卷ks5u试题回放据报道7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌lung cancer后处于极度的痛苦之中美国抗癌协会ACS决定每当Amy收到一封慰问信就给她增加3美分的治疗款 假如你是新华中学的学生李华请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信主要内容包括 自我介绍 得知的情况 表示鼓励 打算为她做什么 祝她早日康复 注意 1 信的格式已为你写好 2 信中不得出现你的真实情况 3 词数100左右4 请在答题卡上作答Dear AmyIm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future So stand up and fight against the disease Im sure you will win It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you In that way you will get enough money for you to be cured Hope you can be well soon Yours Li Hua 名师点评本文依照要求涵盖了所有要点文章使用了高中常见的句式如Im sorry to hear that It is reported that 等都比较好作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章行文自然而通顺值得学习积累卡片好词1realize v意识到2promise v允诺3donate v捐赠好句1 Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌给你带来了巨大的痛苦好处which引导限制性定语从句2 So stand up and fight against the disease 因此坚强地与疾病做斗争吧好处掷地有声语言准确2006高考英语满分作文全国卷Iks5u试题回放假定你是李华亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办现正在招募志愿者你希望成为其中一员请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信内容应包括1个人情况年龄性别学历 2个人条件英语好爱好体育善于交际乐于助人熟悉本地情况 3承诺提供最佳服务注意词数100左右开头语已为你写好可适当增加细节以使行文连贯生词申请apply v application n 志愿者volunteerDear Sir Madam I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live My name is Li Hua I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school And I want to be a volunteer for the games I like English and sports very much I like making friends and I am ready to help others I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time Hope the games will be a great success Hope I will be chosen to be one Yours faithfully Li Hua名师点评 这篇文章写得非常流畅把握了所有要点同时以我为中心详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合以此来表达自己的决心由于用词恰当这种表现就比较充分具备一定的说服力词汇和语句的运用也不错 全国卷II ks5u试题回放假定你是李华应英国朋友Bob的要求 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息 注意 1字数100左右 2可以适当增减细节以使行文连贯 3开头语已为你写好 Dear Bob Thank you for your last letter asking about our library Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students its open from Monday to Friday and we can borrow the books from 900am to 700pm There are many books available in our library dealing with almost every subject Not only the books but also the magazines can be read here You may borrow up to five books at a time and keep them for at most ten days Due to the library we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can If you are interested in it welcome to our school and Ill show you around Yours sincerely Li hua 名师点评本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动意思表达十分契合文章以短句为主兼以长句读起来轻快文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式作者极力推荐自己的图书馆这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢 安徽卷ks5u试题回放 假设你是李华作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年寄住在Mr Brown家里刚回到国内回国后你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家因此给他写了一封信请他帮助寄回词典信的主要内容如下 感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助 一本英语词典忘记带回 词典是美国老师送的非常珍贵 词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上 邮资自己付 注意 1词数100左右信的开头和结尾已为你写好 2可适当增加细节使行文连贯 2参考词汇邮资-postage Dear Mr Brown I have been back and write this letter to show my thanks As the exchange student you make me feel warm Welcome to my country Ill show you around in turn However there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home I like it very much for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the US I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me I will pay for the postage and Ill be very grateful if you show your warmness again Im eager to receive your reply Yours Li hua 名师点评本文作为信件首先其格式是正确的既然是应用文那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来本文在表达作者写作意图的时候情真意切用词委婉而合理文章不但使用了定语从句还采用了疑问句让句式变化而不呆板 重庆卷ks5u试题回放加拿