2010-08越秀区统考-介绍学生会暑假学习班.ppt

纠错:拼写/语法/搭配/用词/逻辑 1.give you / have some advices 2.join in/ take part in us 3.take part in /join enchrichment classes 4.We are pleasure to have your suggestions 5.We will offer you neccessary help and advice if you plan to have an amateur work. 6.if you would like to gain/ acquire a part-time job. 7.If you ever think of joining the student union, call us imediatly. 8.contact with us right away,8.Welcome you to join us. 9.If you want to find a part-time job, we will happy to help. 10.We will answer you back one by one. 11.But she couldnt refuse her mother. 12.I think students attend enrichment classes on summer vocation is benefitial. 13.To my opinion, parents should allow your children to decide whether to attend enrichment classes or. 14.I feel exhausted for lacking time for sleep in last summer holiday. 15. If you force your child to , they wont have interest of study.,16.Li Hua , a senior-one student, had to 17.It is no benefit to students attend such classes. 18.Senior students atten enrichment classes during the summer vacation has its advantages. 19.Because after attending such classes, they will have large progresses in study in next term. 20.I suggest parents that please ask for your childrens opinion.,21.I think students attend enrichment classes is a good way. 22.Give your children more time, maybe they will learn better than ever before. 23.whether it makes a difference? 24.If you cant focus your mind on these classes, if,if., please not attend the enrichment classes.,基础写作,一、基础写作评分标准 2.5.8 2-衔接 5-内容要点 8-语法 基础写作的目的是考查考生最基本的语言表达能力,如用词的准确性,句子结构的复杂度,语法运用的正确性,信息内容的完整性和句子之间的连贯性. 基础写作题的题材会基本贴近现实生活和学生的实际情况,并趋向社会热点问题. 基础写作的内容属于控制性情景作文.其控制性包括:一是必须用5个句子来写,但词数不限. 二是必须描述全部内容. 三不要增添不必要的多余信息。,常考题材： 人物简介；地点简介； 环境保护；锻炼、健康、饮食、习惯； 业余生活、兴趣爱好、节假日旅游； 和谐社会；校园生活； 灾难性事件；活动介绍； 今昔对比； （11）表达意见、正反观点； （12）表达原因、利与弊、结论； （13）图画类； （14）图表类； （15）表格类,二 基础写作题的新要求 1.信息组织能力：信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。 1）考生首先需要将信息进行归类，将哪些信息放到同一个句子中；（建议采用与中文同序来进行）2）其次是将信息进行合理的排列，如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等； 3）选择信息表达的秩序，确定句子之间的先后关系，这既要考虑语法上能否衔接，还要考虑语意是否连贯。 2.运用复杂句子的能力。 1）复合句，包括含有名词性从句,定语从句,状语从句的复合句。,2）并列句， a)递进并列句：由and，besides，in addition, furthermore，moreover, whats more等连接， b) 转折并列句,由but，however，on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句， c)平行选择关系的并列句，由bothand， as well as，as well，neithernor, or， eitheror，not onlybut also等连接 3）特殊句型，如强调句、倒装句、含有with复合 结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it 开头的句子等。,基础写作评分标准： 语言：0-8 分用词的准确性,句子结构的 复杂度,语法运用的正确性 内容：0-5分信息内容的完整性 连贯：0-2分句子之间的连贯性.,实战演练 1： 假如你是大学生， 还是学生会的一名成员，新学 期伊始，你要在学校网站上写一个简短的告示， 请同学们与学生会保持联系。你列举了同学们可能 存在的需要和学生会将要做的工作： 1. 欲加入学生会,即刻联络我们 2. 欲获得业余工作,学生会将提供帮助和建议 3. 欲为学生会提意见,学生会非常重视并一一回复. 学生会的电子邮箱是: ,基础写作注意事项： 1. 只用5句表达全文. 2. 句子的完整 3. 时态 4. 主谓一致 5. 人称 6. 不许用标号来注明每个句子 也不许一个句子分为一个段落 7. 一般不要添加没必要的内容,这次的作文常见错误： 1.不宜用firstly,secondly, last but not least 等表达观点的词、短语 2. 避免口语化的表达：wanna, cause 3. 超出5个句子，扣1-2分 4. 写错位置 5. 用词错误: helps/ suggest/ advices/ contact (中心词 可参考原题的用法）/ join,加入学生会,注意下列词组的表达,联络我们,业余工作,提供帮助和建议,提意见,重视,对.作出回复,join the Student Union contact us part-time job offer help and suggestions / advice give advice to value/ attach great importance to/ think highly of/take sth seriously reply to sb/ sth,Contact Us! 范文 New term begins and please stay in contact with the Students Union. If you would like to join our Students Union, please do not hesitate to contact us. If you have interest in part-time jobs and would like some help and advice, we would be happy to assist. We take your comments and suggestions seriously, and will reply to all your emails. Please write to us whenever you have a need. Our email address is .,优秀作文： As the biggest student association in the college, we do a lot of things for students in many aspects. For example, if someone wants to find a part-time job, we will offer help to him and give him advice. In addition, as for the suggestions which students give us we will take them seriously and try our best to give them the best answer. If you want to be a member of us, please contact us immediately and our e-mail address is xueshegnhuiuniv. . We are willing to help you and we are looking forward to working with you.,读写任务,1.三行半 2.要点 3.文章结构 4.分段 5.总-分-总 6.自圆其说 7.要点 8.有话可说 9.写满不超 10.页面和书写,概括大意 记叙文 Who Li hua What enrichment classes and homework Result unhappy 三个要点3 分 语言运用-2分 发表观点 三段论 第一段：明确表明观点和态度-支持？反对？ 第二段：证明观点 （论据举例 ） 第三段：给家长建议（结论） 字数：写满格子，但不超格 不能标：1、（概括大意） 2、,The student complained in her diary that, instead of having fun in the summer vacation, she was occupied by enrichment classes and piles of homework, which were arranged by the parent and teachers. (Though she followed the arrangement, she seemed to be fed up.) In my opinion, its not a good idea to attend enrichment classes during the summer vacation. Summer vacation is supposed to be a time for students to have a break between terms of hard work. Without a thorough rest, how can we refresh ourselves? Besides, surfing the Internet, visiting museums or reading novels are also ways of learning, which are more interesting to us. (范文 part 1),My own experience is a good example. At the beginning of this summer vacation, I, together with some of my friends, designed a trip Expo 2010 in Shanghai. We booked the airline tickets and the hotel on the Internet, which saved us a lot of money. It was really great fun to see the whole world in front of you, and in the pavilions the various experiences of building cities impressed us a lot. I learned more about the world, human civilization and the environment, which is not sufficient or that vivid in our textbooks. I dont think