高中英语书面表达训练+课件.ppt

Try to get the highest marks in writing!,Contents,Task 1:How many steps to write an English passage?,Task 2:How to make our writing outstanding?,Task3:How to use advanced words and phrases?,Task4:How to use plentiful sentence patters?,Task 1:How many steps to write an English passage?,一审(Examine)：审格式、审要求； 二列(List)：列提纲（短语）； 三写(Write)：写句子； 四 连(Link) ：把句子连成文章； 五抄(Copy)：抄写文章： 六查(Check)：复查一边。 Remember: Use is a second nature.,Six steps for the writing practice: My favorite way of communication),Step 1: examine the topic Style:_ tense:_ person:_ Paragraphs: Paragraph 1: Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3:,议论文 （Argumentative Writing ）,present,third and first,提出主题（Main idea）: like communicating by computer most,论证主题（Supporting paragraph）: why?,深化结论（Conclusion）:bring people all over the world closer,Step 2: list the main points three ways of communication like communicating by computer easily send emails to each other too slow to communicate by letters chat to each other face to face difficult to do so on the phone provide people with varieties ofinformation broaden our horizon bring people closer ,Step 3: make some sentences: There are three ways of communication. 2.Of the three, I like communicating by computer. 3. People can easily send emails to each other at any place and at any time. 4.Its too slow a way to do so by writing letters. 5.People can chat to each other face to face by computer. 6.Its difficult to do so on the phone. 7.Surfing the Internet can provide people with varieties of information. 8.It is a good way to broaden our horizon. 9. Communication on the Internet brings people closer.,Step 4&5: connect the sentences and make some polish . Step 6: Copy it out carefully and clearly.,考生作品1(seven errors) Before long, people of different place communicate by writing letters. As time goes, people would rather use phone than use letters and now the way which is popular to us is using the computer for communicating. Comparing with letters and computer, I prefer to use telephone. Why I like to use it? First, I think convenience is of great value to us. Expensive though it is, it can help us talk to people who we miss any time. Second, so it is small that we can keep it in ourselves. Third, we can ask someone for help if we are in trouble. Fanily, we can use it anywhere. Such are the reasons why I prefer telephone. I think most of you shall agree with me.,-places,-compared,do,-on,Finally,so small is it,will,In my opinion, communicating by letters is the best way. The man who hasnt been to the Great Wall isnt a true man. I think the man who hasnt communicated by letters isnt a true man. In the river of history, letters play an important role in communicating with each other. In addition, papers arent harmful to our health and letters can express our thoughts thoroughly. I likecommunicating by letters best. Hardly had I received a letter when I opened it. When I see my friends letters, it seems that my friends come to see me. In other words, I always feel delighted to hear from my friends and relatives. What if our life could be like without letters? （龚惠祯） A swallow doesnt make a summer. I wish more people support my opinion and communicating by letters. Believe it or not, communicating by letters will make you happy.,-paper isnt,-What could our life,-,-hope,江西细化高考评分标准： 3分 条理不清，思维紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分聚在均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 8分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 13分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重错误。 18分切题。表达思想清楚，语言表达能力较强，文字连贯，但有些语言错误，甚至严重错误。 23分切题。表达思想清楚，语言表达能力强，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。,Task 2:How to make our writing outstanding? to cover all the contents advanced words and phrases; different plentiful sentence patterns; correct conjunctions. some proverbs. 6.Rhetoric（修辞）,丰富的,Task3:How to use advanced words and phrases,1.Cellphones are better than computers and letters. Cellphones take advantage over computers and letters.（陈晗） 2. Convenience is very valuable to us. Convenience is of great value to us.(黄鑫） 3.Because of its great use, many people have a computer. Thanks to its great use, many people possess a computer.,1. 多实少虚 :,nice,2. 短语优先：,I met them here. I want it.,generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable（好客的）,I came across them there. I am looking forward to it.,弃旧取新:,e all have the same chance. There are more opponents(对手）.,possess,opportunity,exist,Task4:How to use abundant sentence patters,1.The computer makes the world smaller. Its the computer that makes the world smaller.(谢平) 2.The phone is convenient and it has more functions than before. Not only is the phone convenient but it has more functions than before.（刘正良） 3.We use the computer so conveniently that we only need to knock on the keyboard.(沈园园） So conveniently do we use the computer that what we should do is to knock on the keyboard.,4. Some people think a phone is better to communicate by. There exist some people who think (刘宏万） 5.Reading letters is a joy. Reading letters is as tasting good tea, which is a joy.(钟明秀）,1.我们都知道他是黄女士的儿子。,Lower level: We all know he is Ms Huangs son. High level: He is Ms Huangs son, which we all know.