高考英语议论文正反观点对比写作.ppt

高考应试作文写作训练,正反观点对比class1Teacher:JiangHui,假如你是李华，作为一个高三学生,自习课的利用效率问题备受教师和学生的关注。上周你班召开了“教师是否应该在自习课讲课”的班级讨论会。请你用英语把下面的讨论结果写出来，并写出你的观点。,Badsample,卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,对比鲜明,写作基本要求,1.字数达到要求。2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。4.标点正确。5.文章内容是否切题。6.格式正确。,高考书面表达评分标准,第五档（很好）（2125分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。,高考书面表达评分标准,HowtopolishyourWriting,审,抄,列,四步,HowtopolishyourWriting,润,润,本文属于_，基本时态是_，人称用_,议论文,一般现在时,第一和第三人称,审题,抓要点，列提纲-文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,构思-文章结构,Lastweek,ourclassheldadiscussionaboutwhetherteachersshouldteachinfreeclass.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions对自习课讲课有两种态度.(2)态度一:.26%的学生赞同原因（1）原因（2）(3)态度二:74%的学生反对。原因（1）原因（2），(4)我的观点:学生应该形成自己的学习习惯,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,表示不同观点的套语,Paragraph1总起:Differentpeoplehold/havedifferentopinions.PeoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.,paragrap2表达赞同观点ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefortheideathinkSomepeoplebelievethat,表达反对的观点:Onthecontrary,ofthemholdadifferentview.ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.However,eachcoinhastwosides.Ontheotherhand,peoplethat.,object,(4)你的观点:,inmyview/opinion,Iagreewith,Asforme,AsfarasImconcerned,总结：inbrief,inaword,insummary,HowtopolishyourWriting,构思-短语,watchovercantcontrolthemselveshavenocontroloverthemselvesdontknowhowtostudybepooratschoolworkbeweakinsubjects,观点一（1）教师讲课能帮助监督自控能力较差的学生.（2）教师讲课对于不知怎么学习并且成绩差的学生是个帮助,构思-短语,观点二(1)学生应该利用自习课复习，练习和预习。（2）教师占用时间讲课不公平。,makeuseoftakeadvantageofgoovertheirlessons/reviewdoexercisespreviewprepareoneslessonstakeupsomuchfreeclassItsunfairforstudents,高考大纲中常用的衔接词,whatismore;inaddition；besides,moreover,however;onthecontrary,therefore;asaresult;because,like;unlike,ontheotherhand,tosumup;allinall,1.表示递进,2.表示转折,HowtopolishyourWriting,3.表示因果,4.表示对比,5.表示总结,:,26%ofthestudents_theopinion.(赞同）Theyare_weakinsubjects_theycantcontrolthemselves.（不但而且）*_,（与之相反）74%ofthem_.(持有不同/相反的观点）,小试牛刀：衔接词,areinfavourof,arefor,notonly,butalso,Onthecontrary,holdadifferentview.,holdtheoppositeopinion,_,(在我看来）studentsshouldformagoodhabitofstudyingbythemselves_(而不是）dependingonteachers.,Inmyopinion,Personallyspeaking,AsfarasImconcerned,insteadof,句式-化腐朽为神奇,Theythinkthatteachersteachinfreeclassisnotsuitable.Theythoughtteacherstaketimetospeaklessonsisunfairtothem,Itis+adj/n+(forsb).todowhenIf,takeup,teach,*,Teachersteachinfreeclassisagoodidea.,Studentshavetimetochecktheirlessons.,句式-化腐朽为神奇名词性从句,Weshouldvaluewhatwehave,句式：强调句和倒装句,I,Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.,Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.,ItwasinthestreeetthatwemetLily.,小试牛刀：句式(强调,倒装,),Studentscanhavetimetochecktheirlessonsinfreeclass.,词汇层面,1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。,使用较高级的词汇,.读书对心灵有益。,Readingisgoodforourmind.ReadingdoesgoodtoourmindReadingisbeneficialtoourmind.Readingisofgreatbenefittoourmind.,StudentscanenrichtheirknowledgeStuentscanhaveagoodcommandoftheirknowledge,Studentscanlearntheirknowledge,Homework,仿写文,HowtopolishyourWriting,2019/11/24,假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该难还是该容易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短