最新高考英语写作辅导课件之六.ppt

相关短语,etorealize开始意识到2.asimportantas和一样重要3.pushsb.todo使某人做某事4.focusmoreon更加关注5.spokenlanguageskills口语技能/水平,municatewith和交流7.therefore因此8.moreattentionshouldbegivento应该更加关注9.insummary总之10.bothnecessaryandbeneficial既有必要又有利,11.inreturn反过来12.faroutweigh.远远比重要13.firstofall首先14.shoppingonline网上购物15.duetolackofsupervision由于缺乏监督16.whatsworse更糟糕的是,17.bankaccount银行账户18.beharmfulto对有害19.forinstance例如20.searchfor寻找21.endupdoing以做结束22.becomedisoriented变得不知所措,1.Moststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloud.很多学生认为它有助于培养朗读的习惯。2.Therefore,moreattentionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningspokenEnglish.因此要更加注意教学英语口语。,相关句式,3.Second,someoftheproductssoldonlineareprobablyfakeonesduetolackofsupervision.其次,由于缺乏监督,有些网上出售的产品很可能是假货。4.Thereisnodoubtthatitisveryconvenientforustohaveonlineshopping.毫无疑问,网上购物很方便。,6.anystudentsrelysomuchontheInternetthattheyhavelosttheirabilitytocreate.很多学生过度依赖互联网,以致于失去了创新能力。,1.注意审题,避免缺漏信息点。一般而言,观点论证的文章通常都是总分或总分总的结构。,2.考生在论证观点的时候要注意行文严密的逻辑性,因此考生要注意使用相关的连词、副词或者短语提升文章的层次感。3.在语言运用方面,考生可以掌握一些常用于议论文写作的短语和句型,如comparedwith.,itisclear/obviousthat.,FromwhatIhavementionedabovewecanseethat.等。,你校进行题为“是否应该考查英语口语”的英语辩论赛。以下是正方的主要观点：略,写作内容请你根据以上内容写一篇短文,代表正方作最后的总结陈词。1.阐述考查英语口语对各方面的积极影响；2.呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;首句已给出,不计入句子总数。,例题导写1.认真审题。在本作文题的完成中,不少考生都集中精力对图表内容进行描述,却忽略了写作内容里的第二个要点：呼吁各界重视英语口语教学。因此,考生在下笔前,要通读题目,不能漏掉细节。,2.分析文体。论证观点无疑属于议论文的范畴,着重于说理性和逻辑性。考生在写作前要对信息点进行分析，理清信息点之间的关系是递进，转折还是因果关系。本文中,考查口语对学生、教师和社会三方面都是有利的,这就是递进关系,而最后呼吁各界重视英语口语教学则与前面内容构成因果关系,因此考生可以选用适当的连词提高文章的逻辑性。,3.划分信息。本题的信息点较多,考生在写作前一定要先划分信息点,否则就会导致写作过程中漏掉信息点或者导致思维混乱。呼吁各界重视口语教学无疑可以作为最后一个信息点,而对学生、教师、社会有利则要用四个句子概括。因此考生可以考虑2个句子表达口语考试对学生的有利因素,1个句子表达其对教师的好处,1个句子表达其对社会的好处。,4.词汇整理翻译或完成下列短语。句1：(1)养成的习惯_(2)提高水平_,improveoneslevel,develop/formthehabitof.,(3)认识到_(4)同等重要_句3：(5)关注_,focuson/focusonesattentionon/concentrateon,cometorealizethat/beawarethat,beasimportantas/beofthesameimportanceas,句2：,(6)提高能力/技能_(7)增加趣味性_句5(8)重视_,attachimportanceto/payattentionto,developonesskill,make.moreinteresting/addinterestto,5.难句翻译翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句1：(1)促使(学生)多阅读,多对话。(1)IthelpsstudentsdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglish.(2)提高(学生)英语水平。(2)ItimprovestheirEnglishlevel.,合并：MoststudentsagreethatitcanimprovetheirEnglishlevelbyhelpingthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglish.(by.表示手段)或MoststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglishsothattheycanimprovetheirEnglishlevel.,(结果状语从句)或MoststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglishwhichinturnimprovestheirEnglishlevel.(定语从句),句3：(1)(口语测试使教师)关注口语教学。(1)ThespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmoreonteachingspokenEnglish.(2)(口语测试使教师)提高自身口语水平。(2)Thespeakingtestencouragesteacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskills.(3)(口语教学)提高课堂趣味性。(3)Englishteachingmakestheclassmoreinteresting.,合并：ThespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmoreonteachingspokenEnglish,makestheclassmoreinterestingandencouragesteacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskills.,4.连句成文,(1)在某人看来：inonesopinion/asfarassb.isconcerned/fromwhereonestands/fromonesperspective/inonesviewpoint(2)同意某个观点:agreewithsb./befortheopinionthat/firmlysupporttheviewthat,(3)首先：aboveall/firstofall/tostartwith/tobeginwith/inthefirstplace/inthefirstinstance(4)表示“递进”的词汇：Whatsmore/inaddition/besides/moreover/furthermore/additionally/Foronething,foranother.(一方面,另一方面),(5)因此:asaresult/thus/hence/so/therefore/accordingly/consequently/asconsequence(6)表示“总结”的词汇:onthewhole/inconclusion/inaword/tosumup/inbrief/insummary/toconclude/tosummarize/inshort,参考范文Ladiesandgentlemen,insummaryourteamhasarguedthatthetestingofspokenEnglishisbothnecessaryandbeneficial.MoststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglishwhichinreturnimprovestheirEnglishlevel.,StudentscometorealizethatoralEnglishisasimportantasreadingandwriting.Inaddition,thespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmoreonteachingspokenEnglish,makestheclassmoreinterestingandencouragesteacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskills.,Nowadays,Englishisconsideredtobeagloballanguagesowecanuseittocommunicatewithpeoplefromothercountriesmoreeasily.Therefore,webelievethatmoreattentionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningspokenEnglishandthiscanbedonebytestingspokenEnglish.,能力提高1.短语翻译,(1)众所周知:(2)基于；根据:(3)以致:(4)有助于:,contributeto,asisknowntoall,onthebasisof,sothat,(5)考虑到这严重的状况:inviewofsuchserioussituation/havingconsideredthisserioussituation(6)以往任何时候:thaneverbefore(7)通过以上讨论:fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,(8)得出一个结论:drawaconclusion(9)远比重要:faroutweigh.(10)把置于一个有利的位置:put.inabeneficialposition,onthebasisof,dueto,sothat,without,Asisknowntoall,Similarly,leadsto,Therefore,2.作文填空,1_,alltheachievementsofmankindare2_thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.Socialscienceandnaturalscienceareinseparablefromeachother,althoughtheformer3_thespiritualdevelopmentofhumanbeingsandthelatterisconcernedwiththeunderstandingoftheworldandthemakingofthings.,leadsto,Asisknowntoall,dueto,Socialsciencewillnotdevelop4_thenewdiscoveriesofnaturalscienceabouttheworld.5_,naturalsciencewillstoptoadvancewithoutthephilosophyprovidedbysocialscience.Thiskindofrelationshiphasbecomeevencloserinmodernsociety.Agreatnumberofnewinventionscomeintoexistence6_thetwosciences.,onthebasisof,without,Similarly,7_,ascollegestudents,weneedtobroadenourknowledge.Weoughttolearnasmuchknowledgeofthetwosciencesaspossible8_wemaybeofgreathelpintheconstructionofourcountry.,sothat,Therefore,3.翻译句子,(1)许多家长相信通过额外的教育活动,他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识,当他们长大后.这些对他们就业是大有好处的。Manyparentsholdtheopinionthatthroughadditionaleducationalactivitiestheirchildrenareabletoobtainmanykindsofpracticalskillsandusefulknowledge,whichwillputtheminabeneficialpositioninthefuturejobmarketswhentheygrowup.,(2)许多专家指出体育锻炼有助于身体健康。(2)Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexerciseisofgreatbenefittoapersonshealth./Manyexpertspointoutthatphysicalexercisecontributestoapersonsphysicalfitness.,(3)大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。(3)Themajorityofstudentsbelievethatpart-timejobwillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinter-personalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets/whichmaybeofgreathelpforthemtofindajobinthefuture.,(4)考虑到这严重的状况,我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。(4)Inviewofsuchaserioussituation,environmentaltoolsoftransportationlikebicyclesaremoreimportantthananytimebefore./Havingconsideredthisserioussituation,weneedsuchenvironmentally-friendlyvehiclesasbicyclesmorethaneverbefore.,(5)通过以上讨论,我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的,但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawaconclusionthat,althoughtheparentsdesiretolookafterchildrenbythemselvesisunderstandable,itsdisadvantagesfaroutweightheadvantages.,假设你的朋友John写信告诉你他打算开通网银进行网上购物,但你并不赞成网上购物,于是给他写了一封信,陈述了网上购物的弊端。,写作内容1.你对网上购物的看法；2.你为何持有这种看法；3.建议理智的消费。,参考范文YouarewritingtotellmethatyouaregoingtoopentheonlinebankserviceforshoppingonlinebutIdontthinkitsagoodidea.Thereisnodoubtthatitisveryconvenientforustohaveonlineshoppingbutthedisadvantagesofitfaroutweightheadvantages.Firstofall,shoppingonlineisawasteofmoneybecausebuyerstendtobepersuadedintobuyingsomethingtheydontreallyneed.,Second,someoftheproductssoldonlineareprobablyfakeonesduetolackofsupervision.Whatsworse,nowadaystherearealsomanyreportsrelatedtoonlineshoppingthatpersonalinformationandevenbankaccountsarestolen.Therefore,Isuggestthatyouthinktwiceandremainrationalwhenyouareshoppingonline.,精华点评,根据写作的内容,本文的结构应该是总分总，第一句总起说明作者的观点，而最后一句使用therefore总结作者的观点。范文开篇通过thereisnodoubtthat的句型，采用了先抑后扬的写作手法,使观点更客观和鲜明。,考生平时注意积累词汇,如使用了tendtobepersuadedintodoingsth.表示消费者容易被误导消费,fake表示“伪劣的”。最后,建议“理智消费”,很多考生可以用thinktwice和remainrational。在连贯性方面,本文使用了firstofall,second,whatsworse等递进连词使文章的层次分明。,写作内容1.阐述现代技术对于学生的负面影响；2.呼吁学生重视传统的学习手段。,假设你们班就“现代技术对学生的学习是否有好处”展开了讨论,你作为反方代表进行发言。,参考范文Marvelousasitlooksatfirstsight,moderntechnologydoes