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Good looks and clothing are more important for success than good ideas.Throughout the history of mankind, people, no matter in the past or in modern days, have never ceased to pursue success, which is commonly defined as the great achievement in a certain field. Nearly every person is really into the factors that are related to success. （总结现象）Upon the question of whether good looks or good ideas are more important, different people hold different opinions. （引出话题）After carefully pondering it, I am inclined to side with good ideas. My explanation is stated from three aspects.（抛出己见）首先，我们来看首段。一般来说，首段由三个部分构成：总结现象，引出话题，抛出己见。因为本文谈论的是success，所以大家就要想到跟success有关的事。比如，我在这里就写道，大家都很关心success。其实，关于success的托福作文很多很多，所以，如果大家能够总结出一套属于自己的开头模版，那真是极好的！其实丸子斑斑还不止这个开头，库存很多的。比如 The complaint that never before in the history has the success rate been lower than before is incessantly being heard in our day and age. Indeed, it is no simple task to reach success, but it does not have to be so hard. 然后，再balabala引出话题。引出话题的环节很简单。主要的办法就是，说一下大家有不同的观点。这里的模版句子也有很多啦。比如，Some argue that while others give the opposite idea.相信大家可以总结出更好的！最后，一定要highlig接下来，就是三个段落，三个论点。大家看一下，这篇文章为什么这么精彩呢？因为它是分别从经济、政治和日常生活三个角度阐发的，这样层次感很强，更容易作者运用例子将自己的观点铺陈开来。说到例子，有一点希望大家注意：不要总是举个人的经历！我有一个表弟，我曾经有一只狗。这种例子，不仅自己写起来无聊，批改官也会fed up with。当然，不排除有的高手可以写出生动感人的个人经历，但是前提是你的语言技巧足够高! 至于论点，斑斑有一点想要提醒大家，英文写作很重要的就是开门见山。所以，在写论点段的开头时，大家也要做到像写开头段一样，首先亮出自己的观点。比如这篇文章分别从政治经济生活三方面展开论证，我就在每段开头放上论点句：First of all, it is good ideas rather than good looks contribute to continuous innovation, which is the key to success in business world.Additionally, a thoughtful mind and decisive ability is more crucial than beautiful face in the field of politics.Last but not least important, a bright head plays a valuable role in our daily life.其实，写这种句子并不困难，只要你自己总结出一套模版句就ok了。比如play an indispensable role., it is beneficial., it is conducive. , sth contributes to.。 注意：斑斑是让你们自己总结，不是完全借鉴别人的！First of all, it is good ideas rather than good looks contribute to continuous innovation, which is the key to success in business world. If you hardly believe me, think of Steve Jobs, the former CEO of the Apple Empire. Without the special talents in inaugurating a totally different path from other competitors, the Apple should not have won over so many fervent followers. Even if the superman has died for two years, the bitten apple unconsciously appear in our head when speaking of Jobs. Another more vivid example is Ma Yun, one of the most house-hold names in China. To say it bluntly, he is not a good-looking man and some even laugh at his appearance. But this short and ugly man created Chinas first Internet-based company Alibaba, which now accumulates millions of money and serves hundreds of countries and regions. Looking at Ma Yun, you must admit that judging people by the appearance is not reasonable.在第一个论点中，作者首先show出观点： 然后举了两个例子：Jobs和Ma Yun，两个人都很有代表性。最后总结一下观点，judging people by the appearance is not reasonable。一个漂亮的段落就落成了！Additionally, a thoughtful mind and decisive ability is more crucial than beautiful face in the field of politics. Neither attractive appearance could help alleviate the intensified conflict among countries, nor could it solve the unemployment problem during the overwhelming recession. If a president was elected as a president merely because of his attractive smile, charming dressing style and elegant behavior, then every supermodel could be the one. That is the reason why many American people disapprove of Obama after he took the office. Well, Obama is indeed a cool guy, but favorability rating declined dramatically in recent years due to his inability in the politics. Only a thoughtful, wise president can lead his people to a wealthy, democratic and civilized country and establish a benign relationship with other countries in the long term.接下来是政治领域。这段最精彩的地方就是一串气势很强的排比句：Neither，nor。不知道大家有没有这种感觉，写一个例子的时候，往往写着写着就收不住了，这不仅浪费时间，还容易走题。所以，大家可以尝试着写排比的例子，也就是一段里举数个例子，但每个例子只用一句话带过。如果不明白的话，可以看这一段。The use of fire has raised the curtain of human civilization, but should the man who first tamed be blamed for later arsonists? The invention of the steam engine led to the widespread use of factory machines and the rapid expansion of modern cities, but should Walt be criticized for the hazy London? The advent of car accelerate the globalization and improve peoples living standards, but should the the inventor of the car Henry Ford, take the responsibility for the high incident rate nowadays?有没有一些感悟？是不是觉得这样又方便，又占字数？哈哈哈哈！Last but not least important, a bright head plays a valuable role in our daily life. Have you mentioned that the most beautiful person is usually the one that makes us most disgusting? My classmate Li Jing is commonly deemed as the venus of the college. She is always the focus of everyones attention due to her fantastic dressing style. A Bohemia flowing dress, a suit of Barcelona trikot or a retro hat once popular in the 16th England will never fail our expectation to have a feast for the eyes. However, she is a overproud of her beauty and always wants to beat others to show off herself. Accordingly, students gradually keep far away from her. But a wise person usually knows how to lighten a serious moment with humor and how to offer emotional care for others in trouble. Obviously, the outward factor wins you temporal reputation but a bright head wins you permanent friendship.第三个论点是生活中的事情，所以举的也就是生活中的例子。我上面提到，生活中的例子很容易让人厌烦。但是，这个例子却让人觉得很惊喜。这主要归功于作者独到的视角通过两个人的对比来凸显观点。In light of what Ive mentioned above, I have made most of you aware of the overwhelming significance of good ideas. We should by no means forget that only pursuing beautiful face but overlooking the potential of intelligence will definitely fail your expectation to reach the zenith of career!最后一段的好坏其实是由写作速度决定的。如果你写完主体部分发现还有三分钟以上的时间，可以认真构思一下。如果只剩下一分钟左右，那就要抓紧了！管它好看不好看，一定要点明自己的态度，比如I may safely come to the conclusion that .或者，judging from what ive mentioned, I hold confidence on the opinion that . 所以记住：把文章写完最重要！Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way a person dresses is a good indication of his/her personality or character.Days are gone when people wearing clothes simply for keeping them warm. Nowadays, clothes tend to serve increasingly social and culture functions. Therefore, Clothes may indicate information in some way like professional, preference, ethnic group etc, and from those most apparent details, can we derive the conclusion about the individuals personality or character in the very beginning.First and foremost, thanks to the fashion industry, there is a variety style of costumes for us to choose. In the street, you can scarcely see the people dress in the same outfit. And the different choice of clothes must have something to do with their personal preference and characteristic. Why the punk girls never choose the pinky dress? Why the lazy men like casual t-shirt in dark color? Why the lawyer like wearing suits? Because the clothes, in the contemporary era, have more functions rather than protecting our body, and they are playing the role of expressing individuals inner personality silently. Even if you are not a person that care much about your outfit, but it will always leaking the information of what you are like unconsciously.Moreover, when we firstly met someone, judging their dresses is the fastest and easist way to get a general idea of what type of person he or she is. As we all know that first impression is extremely important, and it may decide whether there will be further mutual interactions.While the clothing style may take a large porpotion of an individuals first impression. In this case, I cannot help but think about how I met my best friend Jane. We are both easy going and enthusiastic people and we share the same interest of hiking and comics. When she first came into my sight in the university orientation tour, she was dressed in bright orange t-shirt with batman logo and hiking shoes. She was like a magnet drawing me to say hi, and it turned out that judging by her outfit, she was exactly what I had imagined.Admittedly, in some cases, it is understandable that people have to dress up according to the typical occasion. Like students have to put on school uniform during week days, surgeons have to wear white gown in the hospital and we have to dress formally when attending the meeting. So that their personality and character can be hardly derived from their clothes. However, here what we discuss is the style in which people dressed in the most natural and comfortable way.All in all, while there is a saying that “Never judge a book by its appearance”, it is true that it is arbitrary if we judge a person only by his or her clothing. But as the clothes today have been imbedded much more information than before, we cannot ignore its function of indicating peoples character and personality.如果你只能选一个方式让提高自己的健康，选啥？吃得健康？多运动？减少压力？开头Nowadays, modern life has urge people to place more stock in health than any time before. In most cases this trend is so obvious that we can find the clues from the rise of the green food, gyms and the stress relieving courses. In my eyes, food, exercises and stress controlling are all indispensible for my health. But if you want me to choose one among them, Ive no choice but pick the food and Ill show you the reasons as follows.观点一：食物对于人们来说是最基础的可以改善健康的东西First to be mentioned is the fundamental function of food to us human. Just recall the fact that we cannot live without food for more than a week. The food play a so crucial role in our life that our health is mostly based on it. Once you neglect the importance of vegetable and carelessly take meals without them for several days, you will probably face the trouble I met before, like the teeth pain, ulcer inside the mouth or something like that. And you know that this is only the first stage of the reaction to the lacking of vitamin. Frankly speaking, I am not satisfied what I eat these days because of the overwhelming of junk food to the green food.观点二：对于上班族和学生来说，改善膳食比其它两项更加可行Furthermore, compared with more exercises and the controlling of stress, its more adaptable to working class and students as well. Needless to say, time becomes increasingly scanty to those who dedicated to job or study. If we just give a glance to see, its apparent that they can hardly adjust their tight schedule to, for instance, gym class twice a week 5 miles away from work or Learn-to-reduce-stress courses for 6 hours a week, while, at the same time, they wont regard eating a surplus thing. As the news has reported, in this century, the green food restaurants experience a tremendous climb on sales, particularly to the middle-class employees and hardworking students. I have to tell that, to be honest, Im looking for a healthy restaurant for lunch these days near my company.观点三：让步，然后论证食物对于另外两个方面都有帮助Admittedly, we cannot have a health body without the other two choices, because the body building and mental peace also mean a lot to modern people. However, food plays a more basic role. Imagining that, when we finish the gym, the next procedure for us is to have a nutritional meal to establish the muscle and refresh energy. On top of that, its well-known that some people are prone to relieve their mental stress and pressure by just eating their favorite food.总结On the whole, I have to choose food as the thing for my healthy life. Of course, the other two should also be considered important. As the saying goes, “prevention is better than cure”, the more attention we pay on improving our life style, the more healthier we will absolutely be. At the dawn of “the seventh art”，movies and televisions, we are exposed to a multi-media age, and be influenced by the movies and television. As the movies and televisions find their way to our daily life, the issue of whether movies and televisions should always show the fantasy image that the good people deserve reward and the bad people receive punishment, has aroused our societys high concerns. Yet, in my perspective, I believe the behavior that movies and televisions show the good individuals have the happy ending but bad people get punishment is totally unwise. And my reasons are as follows.To begin with, the one type of ending that people getting reward or punishment depends on whether their personality is good or not, is too tedious to always watch that genre of movies or televisions. We track back to the Ancient Greek, the significant drama is tragedy, that means hero be punished by the unfair god, or crucial destiny. At that time, numerous great critics of dramas, recognized that marvelous drama required tragic conflict, which can evoke peoples enormous emotion and have magnificent impacts on human beings. In addition, after the type of tragedy, another type of comedy was coming up. It is universally acknowledged that Shakespeare not only writes famous tragedy of Hamlet but also creates prominent comedy of A Merchant of Venice. So the seventh art of movies same as the art of literature, only have diverse genre can movies and televisions be popular worldwide and reap successful. The examples above can clearly prove that only one type of ending, the movies and television is not successful to suit various people