英语义的删减版写作.doc

n 目前，世界正在面临。的问题n One of the pressing problems facing our nation / world today is .n 人们慢慢认识到。n There is a growing worldwide awareness of.n 报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。n There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. n Cartoon, photograph, drawingn Magazine, journaln 中国正在面临非常严重的(养老/环境/社会)问题 n In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of more serious.n 在过去十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，而下面的问题是最严重的。n 在时间中发生了事件n 由于n 有了巨大的发展n 但同时带来了一些问题n 下面的问题是最严重的。n The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and open door policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the following one being the foremostn As is shown in the picture,（后接完整单独句子描写图画） n Shown, depicted, drawnn Picture, cartoon, drawing, photographn Clearly, Vividly, ridiculously, interestingly n 开始真正描写图画:n 在图画中央有 , 它 , 周围有 n 可以使用倒装n 主语与前文一致,可使用非限定性定语从句或者现在分词n 介词作伴随结构n 如图所示，黑暗中有一盏小小的油灯，它向周围散发着光亮。n As is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a candle. It spreads brightness around itself.n As is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a candle, spreading brightness around itself.n Just as an old Arab proverb says, love is just like love, being brighter in the darker places.n Just as an old Arab proverb says, where there is love, there is hope.n 照片中央站着一位美丽的美国女孩,n 她穿着传统的中国服饰,n 佩戴着各种各样的饰物,n 脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容. n As is vividly shown in the photo, in the sunshine stands a pretty American girl, (who is ) in Chinese traditional clothes, wearing necklace and its like, with a sweet smile on her face.n 操场上有一个小伙子在跑步，n 向着终点冲刺。n 然而，终点又被命名为起点。n 尽管他已经很累了（大汗淋漓），但是他还要乐观的继续跑下去。n As is shown in the cartoon, on the playground runs a young man, rushing to the final, which is defined as another start one. n Tired as he is, he has to continue his journey optimistically.n 图画中央躺着一位老年人,n 蜷缩着像一个皮球,n 他被四个子女赶出门外;n 而四个子女各自把守着自己家的大门,n 拒绝接纳老人. n In the middle of the picture lies an old man.n He crouches like a football, who is rejected by his sons and daughter. n they are guarding their homes respectively and refusing to take care of their father.In the middle of the picture lies an old man, crouching like a football, who is rejected by his sons and daughter, who are guarding their homes respectively and refusing to take care of their fathern 如图所示，在椅子上有一个年轻人，希望理发师把自己的头发理成贝克汉姆的样子。n As is vividly drawn in the picture, in the chair sits a young man, having his hair cut as cool as David Beckham.n 温室里有一朵柔嫩的小花,n 长的很茂盛,n 而温室为它遮风挡雨.n 当小花从温室中挪出来的时候，它无法抵抗风雨的侵蚀，n 很快就枯萎了，任由它的花叶随风飘零。n in the green house stands a delicate flower, growing vigorously, with the shelter protecting it from the brush of the storm. n When removed out of the protection, the flower cannot stand the storm and quickly dies, with its leaves falling in the wind.n 尽管图画很简单,但其寓意却是非常深奥的.n Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.n 作者的真实目的不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么.(任选)n The authors real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.n 万能开头n 如图所示，非谓语动词，with伴随结构n 总结n 注意用词替换n 一副图尽量用一个句子表示。n 描述图画中各部分的象征意义n 段落具体描述展开段落n 阐释原因(可能性较小) n 表示图画中本体与喻体的关系的短语n 本体be revealed as喻体 n is referred to as n 喻体 be associated with本体n refer to, stand for, indicate, epitomizen 请注意单复数的使用n 小花象征着孩子们n 孩子被父母过分保护n 父母被比作温室n 温室抵抗风雨n 风雨象征着现实中的竞争n Symbolically, the delicate flower is naturally associated with the youth,n Who are overprotected by their parents, n Who are revealed as the greenhouse,n It protects them from brush of storms,n Which epitomizes the fierce competition in the real world.n Symbolically, the delicate flower is naturally associated with the youth, overprotected by their parents, revealed as the greenhouse, protecting them from brush of storms, which epitomizes the intense competition in the real world.n 根据一项调查表明 n According to a surveyn According to one of the latest survey conducted by a certain international organization, n 每年，法国巴黎市民花费在养狗上的费用价值$1，000，000美元，n 可以够日本人吃一年的！n According to one of the latest survey, money spent on pets in the city of Paris is as much as $1,000,000,000, which can feed all the Japanese in the world for a whole year.n 例子的选择方法n 普遍的例子n 将个别例子变为普遍例子的方法n Suppose there is a familyn For example, for instancen 我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。n Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of , with the following one being the foremost.n With的伴随结构中非谓语动词n 在我所听到的，看到的，经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服力的是n Among all the touching facts relating to that I have heard, noticed, and experienced, the most impressive one is n 除了这个例子，我找不到更有说服力的了。n I ca如果没有改革开放政策,我们可能根本吃不到麦当劳或者肯德鸡. n 如果没有希望工程，那些孩子将永远接受不到宝贵的知识。n 如果情况继续恶化下去,我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。n n think of no better examples other than n 好的情况n 假设如果没有，那么。n If there were no such policy, we would never taste KFC.n 希望工程n 义务献血n 照顾老人n 照顾伤残人n 我们人类历史上与爱心相关的例子有很多，希望工程是最有说服力的。n 在中国西部有一些家庭，他们是如此的贫困以至于无法资助孩子上学。n 尽管他们很可怜，但是来自各个行业的人们向他们伸出了援助之手，这就是所谓的希望工程。n 根据一项调查，每年希望工程所募集的资金价值￥。，这些钱可以。n 如果没有这些帮助，那么这些孩子将永远无法得到宝贵的知识，永远生活在黑暗之中。Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of love, with the Hope Project being the foremostn In the west of China exist some families.n They are so poor that they cannot support their childrens education.n Being so poor that they cannot support their childrens education.n In the west of China exist some families, being so poor that they cannot support their childrens education.n In the west of China exist some families, being so poor that hardly can they support their childrens education.n Pathetic as they are, people (who are) coming from all walks of life began to help them, which is so called Hope Project.n According to the latest survey, money collected annually has reached as much as about $1,000,000,000, which can help 3 million children finish their primary school.n Were there no such precious help, those children would never taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever.n Were there no such precious help, never would those children taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever.n 情况如此危急，解决这个问题刻不容缓。n 首先，我们必须制订一些法律和法规。n 第二，个人应该被教育。n 伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。n The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.n On the one hand, it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out.n On the other, people should be educated to n There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. n As is shown above, in the sun shine stands a delicate tree, n growing vigorously, n leaving a long shadow behind itself. n Just as the old Arab proverb says, where there is sunshine, there is a shadow.n Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.n Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples about sunshine and its shadow, with the following one being the foremost.n The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the sunshinepolicies being carried out, bringing its shadow at the same timethe damage to the environmentn According to a survey, money lost in environmental pollution has reached $1,000,000,000, which can n Were the tendency to continue, we would pay a high price.n Were the tendency to continue, our future generation would not bother to think of excuse for us.n There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. n As is shown above, on the thick pile of papers, n proudly sits an old professor, n seeming satisfied with his success, n neglecting the demand of studentsn Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.n The past decade has witnessed a huge development in education owing to some policies being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost.n According to a survey, the number of papers published in 2006 is 10 times as much as that of 1996, n with the students ability remaining still.n Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.n 虚拟语气n 学校制订法律法规去限制每年发表论文的数量；n 老师们也应该被教育去花更大的精力在学生身上。n 只有在一个的环境下，学生才能尽情体会学习的乐趣。n The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.n On the one hand, it is essential that rules should be worked out to limit the number of the paper published annually;n On the other, teachers should be educated to pay more attention to students.n Only in a prosperous, reasonable atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which students can enjoy their study to the uttermost.n There has beenn As is shown above, on the playground runs a young man, rushing to the final of the full mark of major courses, such as and so forth, neglecting the importance of morality and What is the purpose of ?n The authors real purposen The past decade has witnessed n According to a survey, the average students ability on study has been significantly improved, with the psychological health being worsened. n Nowadays, the college has been filled with a variety of examples of such things, with Majiajue being the foremost. n Were the situation to continue, we would pay a high price.n its like. Tired as he is, he has to continue his running as his parents wishes.n Simple asn There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. As is vividly shown above, on the playground runs a young man, rushing to the final, which is also marked as another start one. Tired as he is, he has to continue his travel optimistically. Just as the old Arab