【创新设计 简易通】（江苏专用）高考英语二轮复习 第二部分 阅读理解专题专练 专题20 第1讲 提纲式书面表达(文字信息类)体验高考.doc

第三部分写 作专题二十书面表达第一讲提纲式书面表达(文字信息类)passage 1(2013天津)假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等)；组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等)；组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等)；表达当选的愿望。注意：1.词数不少于100；2请勿提及真实学校名称；3可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；4开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：副主席vice president竞选run forgood afternoon，my dear friends，my name is li jin， thank you.【思路点拨】本篇演讲稿写作属于应用文体，竞选演讲稿常包括三部分：1.开门见山，介绍自己的优势和特长，证明自己可以胜任这个职位；2.提出自己当选后的设想，怎样组织活动，满足成员的学习需求；3.表达自己当选的强烈愿望，适当为自己拉票。在写作过程中考生应注意，条理要清晰，适当增加关联词和细节，语言要简洁明了，多用简单句，易于听众理解，文章句型也要善于变化，不能过于单一。【范文赏读】good afternoon，my dear friends，my name is li jin.today i am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the english club.concerning the position of vice president of the english club，i feel qualified to take the job.first，i have gained a lot of experience and received wide praise from my classmates for my job as monitor.second，i am a warmhearted boy and always ready to help others.third，i am good at organizing activities and have held a number of english corners and discussions.looking into the future，i will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students if i am lucky enough to be the vice president.my plan is as follows：on the one hand，i will organize some campus activities，like “english evening”，a platform where students can show their english.in this process，we can still learn from each other.and i will invite some famous professors to give lectures for our students so that we can acquire a lot of knowledge.on the other hand，i will organize more activities to enhance the interschool communication.we can compete with students from other universities in debate contests or speech contests.moreover，i will open more channels for you to voice your opinions and need.i sincerely hope you will give me a chance，and please believe me that i will be a good vice president.thank you.【亮点揭示】本文结构清晰，要点齐全。句式多变，如第二段首句“looking into the future，i will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students if i am lucky enough to be the vice president.”使用了非谓语动词的形式和条件状语从句的结构；同时运用“on the one hand.on the other hand”等固定结构；文章倒数第三段最后一句中的“voice”在这里作动词用，使文章更为形象生动。总之，文章用词新颖，长短句运用合理，语言流畅自然。passage 2(2013辽宁)一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：1它是中国的传统节日之一；2家人团聚；3赏月、吃月饼；4还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中秋节the midautumn festival农历lunar calendar赏月enjoy the full moon月饼moon cake 【思路点拨】本篇书面表达为记叙文，介绍“中秋节”及活动，时态以一般式为主，语态为主动语态，人称以第一人称为主，适当增加细节，把写作要点描述完整即可。【范文赏读】the midautumn festivalthe midautumn festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our chinese lunar calendar.as one of the traditional chinese festivals，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country.usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we still try to go home for the celebration.the moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.what we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.with the beautiful moon up in the sky，we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit，sharing our stories.in addition to these traditional activities，we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.【亮点揭示】本文语言流畅，要点齐全，高级词汇使用不多，但句式多样，表达优美。如：no matter how.；what we love most.；with the beautiful moon up.；sharing our stories.等，总之，本文语言地道，言简意赅，值得学习。passage 3(2013四川卷)某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意：1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. 【思路点拨】本篇作文属于要点式作文，也属于半开放作文。写作时要求考生按照题目中所列要求去写作，并且要适当增加信息。结合要点我们可以把文章分成三段：第一段主要说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；第二段介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；第三段描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。【范文赏读】its useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.in reality，different students have different learning habits，which i think influence their learning efficiency greatly.good habits always lead to high efficiency，while bad ones bring the opposite.some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class.they think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better.if we find those materials interesting，well focus our attention on them for long.however，those dull lessons require our determination，selfcontrolling ability and confidence.my classmates always call me “mr.forgetful”，because i cannot memorize those i have learnt.i know that it is because i dont spend some time in memorizing them after class.my teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud，which they think will help improve my memory.【亮点揭示】1本文属于要点式及半开放作文，范文准确表述了此次作文的要点。2本文行文流畅，文章脉络非常清晰。运用了in reality，while，however，because等过渡词，使得文章表述非常自然。3文章用词准确、地道，特别是使用了一些较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了文章的档次。(1)较高级的词汇和短语有：efficiency，the opposite，concentrate on，focus ones attention on，determination，selfcontrolling等。(2)复杂句式有：表语从句，如：i know that it is because i dont spend some time in memorizing them after class；倒装结构，如：they think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better；定语从句，如：which they think will help improve my memory和which i think influence their learning efficiency greatly；条件状语从句，如：if we find those materials interesting，well focus our attention on them for long.passage 4(2012全国卷，)假定你是李华，从互联网(the internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1自我介绍(包括英语能力)；2参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。dear sir or madam， regards，li hua【范文赏读】dear sir or madam，im li hua，a middle school student from china.i read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the internet and i am interested in it.i know that you welcome students from different countries and id like to take part in it.ive been learning english for 10 years，and i speak fluent english.what is more，ill be able to tell students from other countries about china and learn about their countries as well.i hope i will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.looking forward to your reply!regards，li huapassage 5(2011山东卷)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给tom写一封电子邮件：1询问tom的生活和学习情况；2谈谈你的困难并请tom帮忙；3告诉tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：1.词数：120150；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【范文赏读】dear tom，how time flies！you have been studying in beijing for nearly a month，during which you must have achieved a lot.well，hows everything going？it is reported that the weather the