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-body 素材 -support -strong framework 框架CS1 First of all, I have to concede that, at some / certain degree, is/ can First of all, I have to concede that doing some writing, at certain degree, is beneficial. + For one thing, . For the other,. / , on the ground that , for the reason that 限制级让步： , to certain/ some extent, , at certain / some degree, , in certain/ particular cases, , on certain / specific occasions, , under certain/ particular circumstances, , theoretically speaking, , in short-terms, CS2 Nevertheless, / By contrast, . + On one hand, . On the other hand, CS3 At last, + , for the reason that , on the ground that Body -论点论据 是是非非 For vs. Against Against: # 这样不好/不应该（本性/本质使然）natureinherit be born with / to be # As a part of the nature, is born with many defects. as it stands, is born with many flaws/ defects #The inherited nature of . determines/ brings many/ a multitude of (fatal) defects/problems that run the risk of messing up / jeopardizing The inherited nature of violent games determines many fatal defects that run the risk of messing up the behavior of young people. The inherited nature of grades determines many fatal defects that run the risk of messing up our learning. The inherited nature of technology determines fatal defects that run the risk of messing up our life. Do you agree that our lives are better than our grandparents lives when they were young?A multitude of problems that are inherited inA multitude of problems inherited in the old times / past century such as less developed technology, the shortage in living resources, the conflicts or even wars, famine, depression, incomplete social welfare and medical care labels the life of our grandpas as uncomfortable, uncertain, unstable and unpleasant. A multitude of problems inherited in our modern life such as the pollutions of the environment, the unsafe foods, high rate of unemployment, cut throat competition, heavy burden in life and work label our life as unpromising, uncomfortable, uncertain and unpleasant. 同意或不同意：老师应该每天给学生留作文。The inherited nature of daily writing work determines a multitude of problems that run the risk of messing up our education. 同意或不同意：司机在白天高峰期的时候开车应该支付费用 Pay for charge impose sth. on sb. The inherited nature of imposing fees for driving in rush hours on drivers determines a multitude of defects that run the risk of messing up our traffic. Agree or disagree 做富有挑战性的工作比作简单工作更让人觉得快乐。 Do you agree with the following statement that the only way government can doto energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity # 这样做不可行 feasible = viable -It is not feasible * the feasibility of is open to question. -It is not viable * the viability of is open to question. be vulnerable to the feasibility / viability of is vulnerable to any question or challenge. + 同意或不同意：老师应该每天给学生留作文。 The feasibility of assigning writing tasks day by day is vulnerable to any question or challenge, Renewable resources of energy (Sun, wind, water) will soon replace fossil fuels such as gases, oil, and coal. Do you agree or disagree? take place vs take the place of Replace The feasibility of taking the place of fossil fuels by renewable resources is vulnerable to any question or challenge. 同意或不同意：司机在白天高峰期的时候开车应该支付费用 The feasibility of drivers paying for the use of roads in busy hours is vulnerable to any question or challenge. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should begin a project after finish another project.after Only when Not until The feasibility of never commencing/launching/ starting any project until the previous one is fulfilled is vulnerable to any question or challenge.# 即使可行，很难运转合理/ 精确概括Although is feasible, it can hardly operate smoothly Upgrade1 Feasible though X is, it can hardly guarantee a smooth operation. Upgrade2Feasibility though X enjoys, there is no guarantee that a smooth operation would be accomplished. Although, Although he is 2, he fears his wife. = adj. + though + subj. + is, 2 though he is, he fears his wife. = n. +though + subj. + have/ has, . Although they enjoyed strong financial support, they were still at the edge of bankruptcy. Strong financial support though they enjoyed, they were still at the edge of bankruptcy. = n. + though + subj. + is, . Humans though Japanimals are, they are still regarded as animals. Renewable resources of energy (Sun, wind, water) will soon replace fossil fuels such as gases, oil, and coal. Do you agree or disagree?Feasibility though replacing fossil fuels with resources that are renewable enjoys, it is frustrating in sustaining / maintaining a smooth operation. # 即使有结果，也很难达到目的 -牵强的联系 Step1 It can not solve this problem Step2 It fails to offer solutions to this problem. Step3 It is awkward in serving as a key. Step4 For 建议*This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. For 结论 *This definition/ conclusion/ X is awkward in serving as a convincing/ credible reference for. Credible vs creditable Practice *This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. 教师是否应该根据他们的表现而支付薪水? Heading To large extent, however, I am on the opposite side of this claim. Body 1. I have to concede that the work of teachers, at certain degree, is supposed to be respected. 2. The inherited nature of relating the income of teachers to their performance determines a multitude of defects that run the risk of messing up our education. 3. The feasibility of is vulnerable to any question or challenge. 4. there is no guarantee that a smooth operation would be accomplished. 5. Paving the teachers in accordance with their teaching is awkward in serving as a key to enhancing education. 你是否同意广告使得产品看上去更好 # 后果很严重 At last, the consequences/ influence of is negative / destructive / pernicious. *论点全局1. 让步# To begin with, I have to concede that, at certain degree, is beneficial.2.本质不好#Nevertheless, the inherited nature of . determines/ a multitude of (fatal) defects that run the risk of messing up3.可行性欠佳 #What is more, the feasibility / viability of is vulnerable to any question or challenge. 4.即使可行，很难运转合理/ 精确概括 # Feasibility though X enjoys, it is frustrating in m sustaining a smooth operation. 5.即使有结果，也很难达到目的# For 建议*This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. # For 结论 *This definition/ conclusion/ X is awkward in serving as a convincing/ credible reference for. 6.后果严重，危害巨大At last, the consequences/ influence of is negative / destructive / pernicious. *论点+论据 CS1 First of all, I have to concede that, at some / certain degree, is/ can + For one thing, X, on some occasions, is/ can For the other, it is/ can also somewhat/ relatively / , on the ground that , for the reason that First of all, I have to concede that doing some writing, at certain degree, is beneficial. For one thing, such exercises, on some occasions, contribute to promoting writing skills. For the other, writing can somewhat sharpen the mind. Edu:*修炼-accumulate the knowledge -train the skills -enrich the inner-self -broaden the horizon -strengthen the will-sharpen the mind -purify the soul -detach the view Aims: The key point of lies not so much in A as in B n The very existence of our education on any layer lies not so much in restricting as in liberating. n The key point of our education lies not so much in how quick it follows the demands as in how proper it offers guidance. n The key point of our education at any level lies not so much in accumulation as in innovation. n The very essence of our education on any layer lies in the development of personalities and the significance of life to one self and that to others. This is the basic architecture and the rest is merely decoration and ornamentation. Do you agree or disagree the following statement: Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that theyve done well. First of all, I have to concede that risk-taking and trying something fresh, at certain degree, serve as significant qualities in making a successful person. For one thing, such tendencies, under some circumstances, contribute to exploring the unknown territory. For the other, taking risks or something new poses challenges that are relatively effective in sharpening the minds. ! explore ones potential to the utmost # 这样不好/不应该（本性/本质使然）natureinherit be born with / to be # As a part of the nature, is born with many defects. as it stands, is born with many flaws/ defects #The inherited nature of . determines/ brings many/ a multitude of (fatal) defects/problems that run the risk of messing up / jeopardizing + (op)X, as it stands, suffers from many drawbacks/ defects/ problems such as A, B, C and D. /X, as it stands, is . +According to a surveyIn according with a surveyWith reference to a survey by International , X% of the people/ respondents between 10 and 80 in European countries/ E.U. claimed that The inherited nature of violent games determines many fatal defects that run the risk of messing up the behavior of young people. The inherited nature of grades determines many fatal defects that run the risk of messing up our learning. The inherited nature of technology determines fatal defects that run the risk of messing up our life. 同意或不同意：老师应该每天给学生留作文。 The inherited nature of daily writing work determines a multitude of problems that run the risk of messing up our education. +Writing tasks, as it stands, is time-consuming. +According to a survey by International Writing, 88.88% of the students between 15 and 25 in E.U. claimed that trying to finish writing tasks day by day is the last thing they would like to do. 同意或不同意：司机在白天高峰期的时候开车应该支付费用The inherited nature of imposing fees for driving in rush hours on drivers determines a multitude of defects that run the risk of messing up our traffic. +Paying for driving/ using the roads/ passage, as it stands, challenges the basic rights that each individual enjoys and violates the principle that all the public roads of the people, by the people and for the people. + Agree or disagree 做富有挑战性的工作比作简单工作更让人觉得快乐。The inherited nature of being engaged in work that is full of challenges determines a multitude of defects that run the risk of messing up our sense of happiness. +Challenging work, as it stands, suffers from many problems like the difficulties expected to encounter, the uncertainties it bears and the possible lost it results in. +. Do you agree with the following statement that the only way government can doto energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricityThe inherited nature of raising price of basic energy determines a multitude of defects that run the risk of messing up the well-beings of our society. +Increasing the price of gasoline and electricity through governmental decision, as it stands, suffers from many problems like increasing the basic expenditure of life and production, decreasing the living standard and even violating democracy.+. # 可行性欠佳What is more, the feasibility of X is vulnerable to any question or challenge. +? Some impediments such as A,B, C and D are acknowledged as significant factors that play decisive roles in minimizing the viability. +In this sense, it is almost a mission impossible to Practice: 同意或不同意：老师应该每天给学生留作文。 The feasibility of assigning writing tasks day by day is vulnerable to any question or challenge, + Some impediments such as the limited time and energy of students, the hardness of the topics and the insufficient hours of teachers are acknowledged as significant factors that play decisive roles in minimizing the viability. In this sense, it is almost a mission impossible for teachers to make students do writing every day. Renewable resources of energy (Sun, wind, water) will soon replace fossil fuels such as gases, oil, and coal. Do you agree or disagree? The feasibility of taking the place of fossil fuels by renewable resources is vulnerable to any question or challenge. + Some impediments such as the high costs for such a revolution, the unreliability of new energy and the habits of consumers are acknowledged as significant factors that play decisive roles in minimizing the viability. + In this sense, it is almost a mission impossible to replace fossil fuels with renewable energy right away. + Feasibility suppose it enjoys, it can hardly sustain a smooth operation. 同意或不同意：司机在白天高峰期的时候开车应该支付费用 The feasibility of drivers paying for the use of roads in busy hours is vulnerable to any question or challenge. +Some impediments such as the difficulties in deciding the rate for charge, the lacking in legality and the unsatisfactory voice from the public are significant factors that play decisive roles in minimizing the viability. +In this sense, it is almost a mission impossible for drivers to pay for driving in rush hours. +Feasibility suppose it enjoys, it can hardly sustain a wide acceptance and smooth operation. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should begin a project after finish another project.after Only when Not until The feasibility of never commencing/launching/ starting any project until the previous one is fulfilled is vulnerable to any question or challenge. + # 即使有结果，也很难达到目的 -牵强的联系 For 建议*This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. For 结论 *This definition/ conclusion/ X is awkward in serving as a convincing/ credible reference for. Practice *This proposal / solution/ approach/ X is awkward in serving as a key to. 教师是否应该根据他们的表现而支付薪水? 你是否同意广告使得产品看上去更好 +切断联系 For 建议 As a matter of fact/ In effect, A does not function as the *exclusive prerequisite for B +冲淡联系1 原因多样 Under many circumstances, a host of solutions/ possibilities such as A1, A2, A3 and A4 are also indispensable/ significant approaches that are not supposed to be overlooked. Ignore vs neglect Overlook +冲淡联系2 结果无效方案1 On the other hand, the over simplified strategy in which A is highlighted would be doomed/ deemed as counterproductive. 方案2On the other hand, the over simplified strategy in which A is highlighted bears the possibility of driving the result/ consequences to other paths.+eg. (op) +阶段性结论In this sense, there exists no direct causal relation between A and B (the result and the proposal). For 结论 *This definition/ conclusion/ X is awkward in serving as a convincing/ credible reference for. +切断联系For 结论方案1As a matter of fact/ In effect, things are featured with a mixture of elements. 方案2A does not serve as an exclusive prerequisite for gaining a better understanding about B 方案3A does not serve as the exclusive evidence for reaching a final/ an ultimate definition for B +冲淡联系1可能性多样Under certain circumstances, B can be concluded as A1, whereas under others, the definition/ conclusion like A2, A3, A4 are also sensible/ acceptable/ rational. +冲淡联系2 定义/概括无效General On the other hand, the over generalized conclusion in which A is highlighted fails to be representative. +阶段性结论 In this sense, there exists no direct relation between the former and the latter. / In this sense, A can tell just part of the story. Instead of spending money on exploration of outer space, government should spend money on environment.What is more, government investment on environmental protection is awkward in serving as a key to improving environment,+, on the ground that the former does not serve as the exclusive prerequisite for the latter. +Under many circumstances, a host of possibilities including education, introducing environmental-friendly habits/ green life, international cooperation and civilian funds are also indispensable approaches that are not supposed to be over looked. + On the other hand, the over simplified strategy in which government spending on the protection of eco-system is highlighted would be deemed as counterproductive. + In this sense, there exists no direct causal relation between a healthy environment and government spending. Writing homeworkWhat is more, a daily writing exercise is awkward in serving as a key that can guarantee the effectiveness and efficiency. +As a matter of fact, the former does not serve as the exclusive prerequisite for the latter, +, on the ground that a host of efforts including the enhanced teaching methods, the improved learning attitude, the introduction of new equipments and the upgraded education theories are indispensable approaches that are not supposed to be overlooked. +On the other hand, the oversimplified strategy in which writing everyday is highlighted would be doomed as counterproductive and untrustworthy. +In this case, there exists no direct causal relation between intensive/ heav