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一The Problem with TelevisionNow I cant watch much television but a few years ago1. I was used to watch it every night. I was often 2. a little tired after a days work and watch TV3. demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are 4. too many people among my family. Some wanted 5. to see the programme while others preferred 6. another. I am happy with any programme but 7. the others spent a lot time arguing and there8. was no way of settling the matter except by 9. selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead.10. 二The day before the speech contest(比赛)English teacher talked to me. She said that1. she and my schoolmate all wished me success,2. but it didnt matter that I would win or3. not. When I was on the stage the next day,4. I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There 5. were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the 6. crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I 7. remembered her words and calm down. I did8. a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.9. Whenever I see them I will often think of my 10. English teacher.三Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither1. Brother nor sistersin any other words,2. I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they canmake sure that I get a good education.3. They did not want me to do any work at 4. family; they want me to devote all my5. time to my studies so that Ill get goodmarks in all my subject. We may be one 6. family and live under a same roof, but we 7. do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents8. treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they9. really understand their won daughter? What 10. things are in other homes, I wonder.四Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, its famous1. mountain with all kinds of plantsand animals. The weather was fine. It2. was about noon we arrived at the foot3. of the mountain. The three of them 4. were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting5. temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the6. scenery was so beautiful. The time passes 7. quickly. Evening came down. We spent8. the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and9. the service was good. I was so tiredthat I fell asleep at the mountain my 10. head touched the pillow.五My Favourite SportMy favourite sport is football. I was a 1. member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and 2. often watch football match on TV together.3. Play football not only makes us grow up4. tall and strong but also give us a sense of5. fair play and team spirit. We must keep in6. mind that we play for the team instead7. ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience(服从). Each 8. player must obey captain, who is the 9. leader of the team. And they must not 10. break the rules too often if we want to win the game.六When I first learned to write in English, I ran into many1. difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought2. in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.3. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her4. advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.5. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was6. learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote7. a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it8. very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was9. a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.10. 七Dear Susan,Im very glad to hear you are coming to visit1. me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I wont be able to 2. meet you at the airport although I have classes in the 3. afternoon. You wont find difficult to get to the city4. center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and5. will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class6. will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will7. take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner8. and well talk with our plan for the weekend over9. dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.10. Yours, Zhang Ming 八Dear Mr. Brown,I am writing to thank you with your kind help.1. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2. English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could3. only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,4. I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your5. encouraging words. I will always remember what you 6. said, “If you try to, you can be NO. 1!” I hope youve7. had pleasant journey home and will come to China8. again sometimes in the future. I will write again 9. and send you the photos we take together.10. Yours sincerely, Lin Min九An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the seabetween France and England in the balloon in 1784. High1. over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 2. hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 3. balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 4. coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 5. the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise6. higher again. So it was still too close to the water.7. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to 8. save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in 9. England was very surprised see this when the balloon 10. landed in front of them.十Dear Grandpa,Thank you for your letter.My school is organizing a basketball team andtheres just a chance which I can join it. Im little of 1. course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others2. are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs 3. and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practising out4. in the playground in the afternoon with the tree5. around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing6. and shouting. These are the happier girls Ive ever7. seen and Im the happiest in all!8. I meant to write long letter and tell you all the 9. things Im doing at school, but the bell was ringing, 10. so I just have to stop here. Love, Judy十一If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 1. 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my2. English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors.3. Second, I will learn more about history of the 4. Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third,5. since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find6. their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell 7. visitors about our history and culture and show 8. them their great achievements. In short, I will do 9. my best to help making the Games a success.10. 十二I am sorry that I wasnt able to return to your1. bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it 2. back to you before four in the afternoon, and I 3. was hold up on my way back. Just before I 4. turned corner of Park Street, I happened to 5. see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her6. mother needed help. So I helped them going to 7. the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and 8. a half hour and made sure that the girl was all9. right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I10. hope you understand.十三Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly,1. a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 2. tell him a secret, never will he talk about it with anybody3. else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you 4. need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some 5. words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes6. him happily too. Whats more, a good friend is willing to 7. offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you 8. some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and 9. trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with10. them.十四As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are1. trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But 2. I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from 3. home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed 4. to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When5. they came here, I will show them around my university 6. and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them 7. some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My 8. parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time9. that I did anything special to express my thanks.10. 十五Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to 1. travel with their friends, while I chose to take part-time job 2. to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my3. teacher that a nearby company was looking after students4. with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope. The 5. pay were 10 cents per envelope. I headed for the company, 6. feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours and7. to earn the money. Actually, I only finished 200. Now, I 8. fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out9. of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.10. 十六One day, while my friend and I was traveling through1. Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little2. money. We decided stop at a village market to buy 3. something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and 4. ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great.5. “Lets got some more,” I said, “Theyre cheap and they 6. really taste well.” My friend could read some German, but 7. I couldnt, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name.8. She looked at it and started to laugh. “How are laughing?”9. I asked. “Because theyre dog biscuits!” she said.10. 十七In Grade Eight I took physics. In one test I get1. only 36 percent of the answer correct. I failed the 2. next one, either. I started to think that maybe I was3. not good at it. However, I was not lucky enough to 4. have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a 5. judgment of my abilities, but simply like an indication6. how I should study harder. He pulled me aside and told 7. me that he knew I could do better. He permitted to retake8. the test, and I was pulled my grade to an A. This is what9. I discovered: just because a subject is difficult to learn.10. It doesnt mean you are not good at it.十八Are the years you spent at school best years of your life?1. Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 2. sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers3. were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask4. us difficult questions. We also had to do plenty of homework, and5. hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of6. rules. I left school as soon as I can and started to work. I read books7. at the public library, and late I decided to attend college. Now8. I really enjoy study because Im growing old and know what I 9. want it. When I was at school, I was just the wrong age!10. 十九I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamed 1. that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very 2. fast and fell behind. So I didnt lose heart and kept 3. running. All the students on the playground cheer me on, 4. Come on! I was such encouraged that I ran faster and faster 5. till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if flying like 6. a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first. 7. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my 8. classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time 9. I woke up and found me still in bed! 10. 二十My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are 1. kind and polite. With coming of spring, grass and2. trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors.3. In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more4. beautiful. 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