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书面表达学生观摩篇（6）【四川省成都七中2014三诊考试】书面表达 （满分35分） 假设你叫李华，你的一个朋友john刚从美国归来，邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的朋友聚会，但你不能参加，请你根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件:1. 表达想参加的意愿;2. 忙于准备高考;3. 由于感冒,身体不适;4. 表示歉意并另约时间。注意：可适当添加细节以使行文连贯；词数120左右，开头和结尾已给，不计入总字数。【参考范文】写作：dear john,im extremely sorry to tell you that i am unable to go to your party this sunday. it is very kind of you to invite me to your house and i really look forward to going to your party and sharing your happy experiences abroad. much to my regret, i will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the college entrance exam is just around the corner, for which i am now really busy preparing.whats worse, i have caught a bad cold lately and id rather i stayed at home instead of going anywhere.anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. would it be convenient for you if we make it after the exam?im truly sorry. i hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. i look forward to your reply!best wishes, yours, li hua【陕西省西工大附中2014第七次适应性训练】书面表达（满分30分） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友mike想了解你校开设的新课程通用技术的情况，你向他作如下的介绍：1、 这门课旨在提高学生的实际运用能力；2、 通过这门课的学习，你已经学会了修理、设计和制作一些物品；3、 你的感受。注意：1、词数不少于100；2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3、 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4、通用技术- general technologydear mike, thank you for your letter asking about the general technology, a new course that_ yours, li hua 【参考范文】书面表达：dear mike, thank you for your letter asking about the general technology, a new course that we are taking at school. here is something about it. the new course aims to teach us students basic technical skills and improve our designing ability. from the course, i have learned to use various types of common tools safely. i can even repair some things that are broken in my house and community. whats more, i can design and make an item that is useful in our daily life. we also have to attend a written test for the course before graduation. in my opinion, we will benefit from such a practical course and we will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. we enjoy it mainly because the course is closely related to our everyday life. 【陕西省西北工业大学附属中学2014第六次模拟】书面表达（满分30分） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读(extra-curricular reading)情况的调查报告，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。1. 你校学生课外阅读的现状；2. 原因分析；3. 你的看法；注意：1.根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯。 2.字数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3.邮件中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。dear helen,thank you for your email. now i would like to tell you something about best wishes! yours, li hua【参考范文】 dear helen,thank you for your email. now i would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. as a matter of fact, most of the students in our school havent realized the importance of reading, especially extra-curricular reading. therefore, the time and energy devoted to reading are limited. besides, some students prefer to read comic books, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.i think the reasons for such phenomenon are various. first of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. still others havent formed a good habit of reading. they would rather spend time on tvs or computer games instead.however, reading is obviously beneficial to both our life and study, which can not only broaden our horizon but enrich our life as well. so it is quite necessary for us students to take up reading and for teachers to lessen the amount of homework so that we can have more time to read. best wishes. yours, li hua【2014高考英语广东省华侨中学四模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）以下是一则学生对待家务的基本信息及相关调查。调查显示：13%的孩子做家务，87%的孩子从不做家务（household chores），十六七岁的孩子连自己的袜子、内衣裤（underwear）都没洗过。主要原因：1. 熬夜学习，争取好成绩，父母包办一切；2. 上网聊天、沉迷游戏，顾不上吃饭；3. 周末放学玩到深夜才回家，白天睡懒觉。专家建议：孩子要按时回家、学做家务、与家人度周末，否则不利于自己的成长。【写作内容】根据以上信息给校报写一篇英语调查说明，内容包括：1. 调查情况；2. 主要原因；3. 专家建议。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作： as the survey shows, 13% of the students always do household chores while 87% never do housework, and some 16-to-17-year-old teenagers have never washed their own socks or underwear. there are three main reasons as follows: some students stay up studying for better grades because their parents have done everything for them. some chat on the internet, addicted to games without a moment to spare for dinner. others stay with their friends at weekends until they return home late at nigh