江苏专版2020版高考英语专题5书面表达第一节写作技能点拨三增加细节的5大策略学案牛津译林版.docx

三、增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。微技能(一)列举具体的实例进行补充说明1.我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.2.我要花一些时间和父母待在一起。Illspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.Illspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.3.我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。Idliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Idliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.4.我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。Imahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch.Iamahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，Illgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.题组过关1根据括号内提示完成句子1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我们不仅能阅读国内外的新闻)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendonlineschools.2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她说一口完美的美式英语)，andthatswhyIamcrazyabouther.3.However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，很多人开始越来越不重视面对面的交流).4.However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如，沉溺于因特网也许会影响我们的学习和工作).微技能(二)增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容1.我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染)Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相关背景)2.我发现了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相关行为描述)3.晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作)题组过关2根据括号内提示完成句子5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考虑到这项活动很有意义)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass.6.Illtrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforwardtohisvisittoourcity(我热切地期盼着他来我们城市参观).7.Manyteenagersdontpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他们花费太多的时间看电视)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight.8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高兴和满意).9.Inthesummervacation，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼职工作).微技能(三)增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容1.我要和父母一起去超市购物。Imgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.Imgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwontbebackuntilabout500intheafternoon.(增加时间)2.我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)题组过关3根据括号内提示完成句子10.YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager.11.TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtodaysXianandfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安，并最后达到的东海岸) theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亚洲，中国的北京).13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthe city themoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一就) Iarrivedhereat6oclockinthemorningbyplane.微技能(四)适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容1.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。(1)Ineedagoodrest.Illdosomereading.IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，Illdosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关系)(2)Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.IfIhavefreetime，Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)Ifpossible，Illtakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)Ifpossible，Illtakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)2.Tracy来电话：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因状语)3.帮助邻居的孩子们补习英语。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添结果)题组过关4根据括号内提示完成句子14.TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(传统的中国节日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.15.Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴随着全球气候变得越来越暖和)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat.16.Situated/Locatedinnortheast(坐落在东北部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory.17.Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfruit(带上食物和水果).18.Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作为一名高中生)，itseveryonesdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth.19.Asisknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(众所周知)，EarthHourisanactivitywhichaimsatsavingenergy.微技能(五)结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等1.AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(个人感受)2.Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(评价)3.Inaword，ifshewouldliketolearnChinese，Ihopeshewilldoitwell.(愿景)4.Asstudents，itsourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡议)题组过关5根据括号内提示完成句子20.Asaprofessionalbasketballplayer(作为一名专业的篮球运动员)，heisoneofChinasbest-knownathletes.21.IthinkBeijingiswellworthasecondvisit(非常值得再次参观).22.Inmyview，nomatterhow/howeverattractivetheInternetis(不管因特网多么吸引人)，itshouldntseparateusfromourlovedones.23.Wedrewaconclusionthroughtheexperiment(通过这个实验我们得出一个结论)：thetemperaturedoesntchangewheniceismeltingintowater.24.Letsdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献).25.Therefore，weshouldspendtimewithourfamilies，enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether(享受我们在一起的时光).按要求对下列句子进行扩充1.每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语)Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Ifweareprepared，wewillnotfeelworried.2.复旦大学位于上海。(增加which引导的非限制性定语从句)FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai，whichisaninternationalcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience.3.不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语)Torealizemydream，whateverchallengeIwillface，Iwillnevergivein.4.我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加具体信息说明)Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlywithclassmates.5.一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语)Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycantfallasleepatnight.Asaresult，theyfeelsl