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高三英语书面表达专项训练（二）: 安全问题 一、典题解析假设你是李华，请就食品卫生问题给某报社英文栏目编辑写一封150词左右的信，内容要点如下：1） 你的邻居因食用从市场买回来的伪劣食品中毒；2） 你目睹了他们中毒与邻里帮助下脱险的经过；3） 呼吁社会各界重视食品卫生(hygiene)与安全；打击牟取暴利的不法商贩。注意信的开头与落款已给出，不计入总词数。Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago,_ Yours, Li Hua1. 试题解读一审体裁；本文要求写一封信，属于应用文范畴。二审人称和时态：本文是作者李华自己给报社英文栏目编辑写信，因此主要人称为第一人称I。根据文章写作要求，以描述事情经过为主的段落应该使用一般过去时，以呼吁为主的段落就应该使用一般现在时。三审要点：该篇文章要点有二：第一，叙述邻居中毒及脱险的经过，为了写作更加有条理，建议按照事情发生的时间顺序叙述。第二，呼吁社会重视食品卫生与安全，打击不法商贩，并且还要表达自己的愿望。Im writing to tell you aboutThey had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten. After several hours treatment, they finally2. 写作模板叙述邻居中毒及脱险的经过From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety.呼吁社会重视食品卫生与安全3 可用素材：（1）词汇： Poison/poisoning, fake, have stomachaches, bring up, pass by, ambulance, treatment, escape, food safety, illegal, make profits, in the race to, care about, consumer, meanwhile, take action/measures（2）句式: Another neighbor passed by only to From this all of us have realized Meanwhile, I do hope the whole society shall4. 满分作文展示：Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago, my neighbor family ate a bag of fake food from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and brought up what they had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten as their faces turned pale. Fortunately, another neighbor passed by only to find the accident and immediately called the ambulance, which carried them quickly to hospital. After several hours treatment they finally escaped from death.From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety. As some illegal businessmen are only interested in making profits in the race to become rich quickly, they seldom care about the necessary safety measures and hygiene or care what happens to consumers. They must be charged by law. Meanwhile, I do hope the whole society shall begin taking action to protect peoples life safety. Yours, Li Hua二、范文背诵 假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容：1. 安全意识的重要性2. 在运动中要注意人生安全3. 在校内要注意人身安全4. 同学间发生矛盾使，一定要保持冷静、理智5. 逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。注意：1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；2. 词数150字。My dear classmates, Theres no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on. I consider this is indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it .when we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically. As far as Im concerned, I feel all students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the “safety at a school” activity in mind. Besides, we are supposed to observe the law discipline where we are at any moment.中国人在食品里完成了化学教育。从大米里认识了石蜡；从火腿里认识了敌敌畏；从咸鸭蛋、辣椒里认识了苏丹红；从银耳、蜜枣里认识了硫磺。今天三鹿奶粉用让中国人知道了三聚氰胺(melamine).食品安全已经给中国人的健康敲响了警钟，谈谈你的认识。词数：150 From the message mentioned above, we can see that food safety has gradually drawn peoples attention.Why do the immoral phenomena happen so frequently in China? Driven by profits, some illegal businessmen add poisonous stuff like melamine to food regardless of peoples health and safety. What they do has violated laws and regulations. Additionally, some relevant departments fail to supervise them effectivelyActually, only a small number of manufacturers have been fined, giving rise to such terrible events as listed in the above message.In my opinion, apart from profits, manufacturers should bear some social responsibilities. Meanwhile, government should spare no efforts to regulate the market of food and laws must be passed to limit and regulate the food safety. Solving the problem needs the joint efforts of the whole society. Only in this was can we prevent the tough, disturbing problems from happening again.2011 年12月11日国物院法制办就我国校车安全条例草案征求意见稿正式全文公布，广纳民意。请你根据下列表格的内容为某英语网站写一篇短文。 连续的事故； 社会的关注； 政府的重视；.出台的背景 关爱生命； 稳定社会；出台的意义 你的看法（请考生根据自己的感想提出两至三点建议）注意：1. 对所给要点逐一陈述，是适当发挥，不能简单翻译。2. 词数150. 开头已经先好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School BusSafety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions.During the past year, there have been several severe school bus accidents which claimed many young lives. These tragedies came as a shock to everyone, and they have aroused great concern among people from all walks of life. The publication of the draft regulations indicate that our government has realized how serious the situation is and that it is taking effective measures to ensure the safety of the school bus. The draft regulations reflect a deep concern from our government as well as from the public about students lives. When put into effect, the regulations will surely help reduce the number of accidents and benefit schools and families as well. Also, they will be of vital importance in stabilizing the society. Personally, I fully support the coming out of the regulations, and I sincerely hope that everyone in our society will obey the regulations. Whats more, the regulations should be strictly carried out.There being chains of unexpected accidents happening continuously during such a short period of time, the draft was released on account of great concern among the society. Furthermore, it was governments emphasis and concern that led to such progress. It cant be denied/There is no denying that with the exposure of the draft, life which is