高中英语作文教学课件.ppt

英语写作讲解 高考作文类型 A 数据说明类文章B 提示议论文类文章C 看图说话类文章 影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1 语篇信息是否完整2 行文是否连贯流畅 语言是否得体 3 是否使用高级词汇4 是否使用复杂句5 卷面整洁 书写工整 写作基本步骤 仔细审题 列举大纲 围绕要点 写出句子 添加过度 确保连贯 先求正确 再求灵活 认真眷写 卷面整洁 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节 你校学生以 高三学生要不要参加春游活动 展开了讨论 请根据以下讨论结果 写一篇短文 Howtowriteagoodcomposition Introduction topic Body supportingideas Conclusion Canyoulisttheoutlineofthewriting Theoutlineofthewriting Conclusionparagraph Introductionparagraph Keywords 1 introduction topic 高三学生 senior3students 春游 gospringouting 讨论 discussion 2 body supportingideas 接触自然 beclosetonature 呼吸新鲜空气 breathesomefreshair 精神放松 relaxthemselves 大脑休息 resttheirbrains 高考临近 withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear 没心情玩 don tfeellikegoing 耽误学习 wastethetime 3 conclusion inmyopinion Keywords 中学生middleschoolstudents身体差inapoorstateofhealthInbadcondition充足的睡眠enoughsleep加强锻炼 增加户外活动takemoreexerciseanddomoreoutdooractivities定时吃饭少吃零食havethreemealsregularly eatlessnon staplefood 讲卫生 Form developthehabitofhygiene 主题句的内容要明确具体 语言简洁 开门见山 句式力争多样性 Howwillyoustartyoupassage 问句 从句 Introduction sample WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion 巧用过渡句 过渡词 理顺文章的逻辑关系 Payspecialattentiontothetransitionsentences Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Whatwillyousay Youranswer Thebodypart Point1 65 的人认为应该春游 亮明观点 Sentencepattern Mostofus about65 holdtheopinionthat sinceittendsto whichisunfavorableto Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Reason1 接触大自然 呼吸新鲜空气 有利健康 Sentencepattern Theythinkitgoodtodosth sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion itisofgreatbenefittodosth Eg Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair Reason2 活动是精神放松 大脑休息 有利于学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 递进what smore besides moreover inaddition furthermoreEg theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Conclusion 小段总结 进一步亮明观点 前后呼应 Eg Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Point2 的学生认为不应该春游 亮明观点 注意 使用过渡句 自然衔接句子和段落 承上启下 Sentencepattern However otherspreferto Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion Ontheotherhand Eg Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Reason1 高考临近 没有心情玩Sentencepattern Theysay believe holdtheopinion that Eg Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Reason2 春游耽误学习 注意 两个观点之间的连接 Eg Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies 表示观点对比类写作套语 A 总起 Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion Differentpeopleholddifferent oppositeopinions Peoplehavetaken adopteddifferentattitudestowards Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion B 表达观点一 ofthemholdtheopinionthat ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat Peoplewhoarefortheideathink C 表达不同观点之间的衔接 However ofthemholdadifferentview ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion Peoplewhoareagainstitdon tthinkso However everycoinhastwosides Differentfromthose peoplethink Ontheotherhand peoplethink D 结尾常用套语 Inmyopinion Personally AsfarasI mconcerned Inshort inbrief inaword WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathat Ontheotherhand about35 studentsare againsttheidea 表列举说明的关联词 Firstly Firstofall Tobeginwith Secondly Thirdly Inthefirstplace Inthesecondplace Inthethirdplace Finally Lastbutnotleast 表示递进 强调的关联词 Besides Apartfrom What smore Inaddition Furthermore Moreover worsestill tomakemattersworse WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathat Ontheotherhand about35 studentsare againsttheidea what smore Besides A 运用高级词汇或短语B 增加形容词或副词C 灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨 WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldg