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社会热点类范文2011年6月真题 Online Shopping题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚。2 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题。3 我的建议。审题思路 这是一篇现象解释型议论文。随着科学技术的日新月异，电脑走进了千家万户，而网购更是随着电子商务的发展而为人熟知。文章可以分为四段，首段阐述背景和现状，如果你支持网络购物，第二点可着重分析网购的好处。第三段只需陈述反对者的意见，最后一段表明自己的观点，与第二段相呼应。写作思路第一段：描述事实，越来越多的人热衷于网购，网上购物成为一种时尚。第二段：有些人认为网购有诸多好处，可列举三点。第三段：有些人则反对网购，主要原因为不安全等。第四段：表示自己支持网购。范文及高分点评 范文 Online Shopping(1) In recent years, online shopping has become more and more popular. Books, clothes, household appliances, toys, hardware, software, and health insurance, just to name a few, can be bought online from online stores. (2) However, peoples views differ.Firstly, many people prefer to shop online because of the convenience it offers. Online stores are usually open around the clock, and many consumers only have time to shop after work, so online shopping seems to be the best choice in our hectic life. Furthermore, people (4) are usually presented with more choices online. Tens of thousands of stores supply different types of products to satisfy the customers. Another advantage of shopping online is the (5) competitive price and greater access to information.(6) Despite the above advantages, not everyone likes to purchase online. (7) Some people worry that the products they buy are not as good as those illustrated by the pictures. Other people may fear that their credit card information will be leaked.(8) Personally, I am in favor of online shopping since I believe all the above risks can be averted. (9) You can stick with renowned stores, or refer to the reviews of other consumers. By doing this, you can avoid being cheated. As for your credit card, you are strongly suggested to use a complex password.高分点评（1） 首句开篇点题，易于抓住读者的注意力。（2） 转折句引出下文的讨论。第一段行文干净利索。（3） 第二段是重点讨论部分，论述网购的好处。如果考生持反对态度，文章应侧重相反的论点。（4） Be presented with 意为“被提供”。（5） Competitive price 指“有竞争力的价格”，即“很便宜”。（6） 第三段首句点明本段主旨，即并非所有人都喜欢网购。（7） 用some people 和other people 引出两个反对观点。（8） 最后一段给出作者的观点，并再次点题：“我”支持网购。（9） 提出了针对以上两个反对论点的规避方法，使正方论点更具说服力。Stick的本意是“黏着”，在这里指“坚守，继续做”。闪光词汇Appliance n.器具，用具，（家用）电器Around the clock 一天24小时地Hectic adj. 繁忙的，忙乱的Illustrate v. 举例说明，阐明Leak v. 泄漏，渗漏Avert vt. 避免 防止Renowned adj. 有名的，著名的Complex adj. 复杂的万能句型Firstly, many people prefer to because ofPersonally, I am in favor of since believe all the above risks can be averted.触类旁通 Money Worship题目要求 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Money Worship. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1. 当年拜金现象严重;2. 拜金主义有什么影响和后果；3. 你对拜金主义的见解。现象解释型文章2010年12月真题 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independence?题目要求 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independence? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切；2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该.审题思路该题属于现象解释型文章，也比较贴近学生的生活。大多数学生因缺乏独立的生活及学习能力，无法适应校园或社会生活，这几乎成了一种普遍现象。 该题要求写一篇现象解释型议论文，与以往不同的是，该题的提纲只有两点， 给了考生更多自由发挥的空间， 考生可以加入一段，如分析独立的重要性等。另外需注意，文章的重点应为第二点，即为了让孩子独立，父母应该如何做，因此，考生若要加入一段，论述独立的重要性，切勿喧宾夺主或长篇大论。写作思路第一段：简单说明社会上存在父母为孩子包办一切的现象。第二段：论述培养孩子独立能力的重要性。第三段：为了让孩子独立，父母应该如何做。范文及高分点评范文 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independence?(1)As a child learns to walk, talk, and eventually take care of himself, it is an exciting time for parents. (2) However, currently, most parents havent realized that helping their children to be independent is one of the greatest gifts a parent can give.(3) Independence endows us with a strong sense of self-esteem and pride which gives us the confidence we need to thrive in this world. Then, how should parents do?(4) Firstly, allow the children to try out things themselves. Letting them experience failures without intervening will help them develop new skills. Then, good decision-making powers are imperative to independence. Everybody should make their own decision and take the responsibility for what they have done. Lastly, problem-solving skills will help them in later life to be able to help themselves instead of relying on other people. (5) Though becoming independent may be difficult at times, the reward will be well worth the effort.（1） 开头不同寻常，与考生们经常使用的开头方式，如 nowadays，there is a phenomenon that相比，不落俗套，本文的开头别具一格，使议论文多了一份抒情。（2） 话锋一转，谈到现状。本句也没有平铺直叙地说most of the children lack the ability to be independent, 而是给父母指出他们没有意识到培养孩子的独立能力是父母给予孩子最大的礼物之一，突出了重点，并能够吸引读者眼球。（3）作者自主加入了一段，主要起承上启下的过渡作用，一方面说明独立的重要性，另一方面又引出下文。这一段只有两句话，避免了喧宾夺主。（4）这段层次清晰，论点充足且具说服力，作者分别从三个方面阐述了如何培养孩子的独立能力，即：勇于尝试，解决问题的能力/（5）总结上文论点，使文章结构更加完整。闪光词汇Eventually adv. 终于，最后Endow vt. 赋予，赠与Self-esteem n. 自尊Thrive vi. 兴旺，繁荣Intervene vi. 干涉， 阻挠Decision-making adj. 决策的Imperative adj.必要的，迫切的Rely on 依赖，依靠Reward n. 报酬；补偿万能句型However, currently, mosthavent realized thatIndependence endows us with a strong sense of self-esteem and pride which gives us the confidence we need to thrive in this world.Thoughmay be difficult at times, the reward will be well worth the effort.触类旁通 Food Security题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Food Security. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 食品安全问题频发；2. 食品安全问题频发的原因；3. 我的看法。教育类范文2010年6月真题 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写；2. 出现这种情况的原因是3. 为了改变这种情况，我认为审题思路很明显，这是一篇教育类四级作文。现在的学生对拼写问题一点都不陌生，考生写起来应该得心应手。从文章结构来看，重点在于第二和第三部分，分别分析不重视拼写的原因及改变这一状况的方法。考生可从两个方面给出原因，并从两个方面给出相应的解决方法，这样文章才会结构完整，内容充实。写作思路 第一段：简单阐述如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写这一现象。 第二段：重点分析出现这种情况的原因（分为两个方面）。 第三段：我认为解决这些问题的方法有(同样分为两点)。范文及高分点评范文 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling(1)In this day and age, spelling receives decreasing attention in English language study. For years, teachers and students have not attached much importance to it. (2) However, spelling is the basic building blocks to construct what we want to write.(3) The reason why students dont have an eye on spelling lie in several aspects. First and foremost, some teachers believe (4) its the content that matters and want their students to just focus on getting their ideas through on paper. Whats more, many students are taught to believe that the target of language learning is communication, and in speaking English, spelling is(5) much less of an issue. However, writing is also a crucial means of communication, because with numerous misspellings, the meaning one wants to express may be (6) clouded. (7) To change this situation, I think teachers and students should work together. Teachers should teach students the importance of spelling at the very beginning of English learning. Students should also grasp the aim of language learning, which not only concerns speaking, but also writing. A work with numerous misspelling can never be appreciated by anyone.高分点评（1） In this day and age 表示 “当今”。 首段第一句点明第一句点明现状，直入主题，符合英文写作首句即中心句的写法，这样更容易吸引考官的注意力。（2） 话锋一转，指出拼写其实很重要。（3） 第二段开始分析出现这一现象的原因。第一句是典型的分析原因的总领句，学生应注意多积累多背诵。have an eye on 是“注意”的另一种说法，避免单词重复可显示出作者丰富的词汇量。（4） 该处运用了主语从句作believe 的宾语。（5） Sth. Is much less of an issue 指“根本就不是回事”，形容某事不重要。（6） Clouded本意是指“多云的”，在此处指“（意思）不清楚的”。（7） 该句为第三段的总领句，方便读者理清作者的思路，也使文章结构清晰。闪光词汇Decreasing adj. 渐减的Attach importance to 重视，着重于Building block 基础材料Construct vt. 建立，构成，组成Get through （使）被理解，（使）被接受Numerous adj. 许多的，很多的Misspelling n. 拼错，拼错的词Clouded adj. 不清楚的，不清晰的万能句型In this day and age, receives decreasing attention inThe reason whydont have an eye onlie in several aspects.is much less of an issue.触类旁通What Should Teachers Teach?题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic What Should Teachers Teach? You should write at least 12 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 有些人认为老师教给学生学科知识即可；2. 有些人认为老师应当教给学生如何判断对错和如何做到行为得体；3. 我的看法。 校园生活类范文2009年12月真题 Creating a Green Campus题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 建设绿色校园十分重要；2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色环境；3. 为了建设绿色校园我们应该审题思路这是与校园生活息息相关的一个话题。绿色校园不仅仅等同于绿化校园，移花植木。诚然，客观条件能在短期内迅速提高校园绿地覆盖率，能使校园焕然一新，然而，如果我们不在主观上深刻把握“绿色校园”的内涵，客观上打造的绿色校园也得不到维持。因此本文应阐明“绿色校园”并非“绿色环境”，它更代表着人们对环境的重视，对自然的尊重。我们不仅要重视美化校园环境，更要重视学校中师生环保观念的形成。因此本题另一重点应是如何建设绿色校园。写作思路第一段：第一段可简要说明建设绿色校园的重要性。第二段：将“绿色校园”和“绿色环境”区分开来。第三段：为了建设绿色校园，我们应该如何做。范文及高分点评范文 Creating a Green Campus（1） Nowadays, most of us know that there exist a lot of environment problems which threaten humans life. Every one of us must do something to help slow down and remedy the damages. We cant leave the (2) problem-solving entirely to the expertswe all students should shoulder our due responsibility to protect the environment. (3) So a new concept arises: creating a green campus.(4) Creating a green campus not just means planting trees, flowers on campus. It is sure that plants can help our campus take on a new look. However, the real meaning of creating a green campus lies in arousing students awareness of protecting the environment and creating a sustainable environment.(5) There are plenty of things that students can do to (6) make a green campus thrive and have an (7) eco-lifestyle. (8) First, recycle everything before we throw them away, especially paper. Second, avoid using disposable chopsticks and cups in refectory. Third, remember not to litter at will. Then to create a green campus will not be difficult.高分点评（1） 第一段中，先摆事实，待时机成熟后引出本文话题，即采用由问题到解决方式的论述方式。（2） Problem-solving 为名词短语，意为“问题的解决”。（3） 总结句，引出本文的重点：creating a green campus。（4） 本段着重分析绿色校园并不等同于绿色校园。（5） 第三段开头说明学生个人也可以为绿色校园的建设作出贡献。（6） Make sth. thrive指“使繁荣 兴盛”，这里指使绿色校园得到大力发展。（7） Eco- 作前缀指 “生态的，eco-lifestyle 指“环保的生活方式”。（8） 从三个方面出发，分析学生应如何建设绿色校园。闪光词汇Slow down 减缓，放慢速度Remedy vt. 补救，纠正Concept n. 概念，观念Take on a new look 呈现新面貌Arouse v. 唤醒，引起Sustainable adj. 可持续的Thrive vi. 繁荣，兴旺Recycle vt. 循环利用，重复利用Disposable adj. 一次性的Refectory n. 食堂，餐厅万能句型Every one of us must do something to help slow down and remedy the damages.We cant leave the problem-solving entirely to the experts -we all students should shoulder our due responsibility toHowever, the real meaning oflies in触类旁通On Campus Thefts题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Campus Thefts. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 校园盗窃事件频发；2. 校园盗窃案频发的原因；3. 我的看法。现象解释类范文2009年6月真题Free Admission to Museums题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么；2. 也会带来一些问题；3. 你的看法。审题思路 该题属于现象解释型文章。根据题目要求，第一段首先要联系现状说明博物馆免费开放的目的，可对比过去与现在，之后再具体阐述其意义；第二段可以具体描述一下此举带来的问题，然后紧扣文章的内容谈谈自己的看法。写作思路 第一段：博物馆免费开放的目的。 第二段：带来的问题，可分几点展开论述，如游客过多给博物馆造成的压力等。 第三段：紧扣题目谈谈自己的看法。范文及高分点评范文Free Admission to Museums(1) Years ago, museums were considered exclusive for academic purposes while visitors have to pay for access. Yet since the government enforced the policy of “free admission to museums” , visiting museums has become a new fashion in peoples spare time. (2) It can thus be anticipated that museums are going to play a prominent role in public education, therefore contributing to the establishment of a highly educated society.Nevertheless, (3) the transformation from an academic institution to a public one also brings museums quite a number of challenges. First, museums need to adjust the arrangement and display of their(4) exhibits with the consideration of an enormously expanded visitors. (5) For instance, abstruse or complex descriptions should be avoided. Second, the policy also exerts museums more pressure on the preservation and protection of their exhibits from any potential damage, including the crowds of visitors and the strong flash from their cameras.From my point of view, “free admission to museums” will encourage people to visit museums more frequently, so that their view can be largely broadened. (6) Museums should take the initiative to implement actions for the challenges so as to make themselves best schools for public education.高分点评（1） 以过去与现在的对比开头，这是讨论社会热点问题时的常用开头方式，凸显新政策带来的变化。Exclusive表示“独有的，独占的，专用的”，用在此处恰如其分。（2） 注意作者在第一段中充分利用了时间的转换来讨论问题，从第一，二句过去和现在的对比，到最后一句的展望未来，时间过度的非常自然。（3） 该部分为句子的主语，主语相对较长，起到了强调的作用。（4） Exhibit 在这里做名词，指“展品”，而exhibition 意为“展览”，要注意二者的区别。（5） 本段在描述博物馆面临的两个挑战时，作者在列举问题之后用简单的例子来进一步说明，这种写法值得借鉴。（6） 结尾指出了博物馆目前需要采用实际行动，以提高全社会受教育水平，从而提高了文章的立意。闪光词汇Exclusive adj. 独有的，排外的Academic adj. 学术的，学院的Spare adj. 多余的，空闲的Anticipate vt. 预期，期望Prominent adj. 显著的，突出的Transformation n. 转变，转换Institution n. 机构Expanded adj. 扩大的，扩充的Abstruse adj. 深奥的Flash n. 闪光灯万能句型It can thus be anticipated thatare going to play a prominent role in, therefore contributing toNevertheless, the transformation fromto also brings quite a number of challenges.should take the initiative to implement actions for the challenges so as to触类旁通Campus Security题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Campus Security. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 校园安全事件频发；2. 校园安全事件频发的原因；3. 我的看法。2008年12月真题题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1、 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用；2、 使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题；3、 限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义。审题思路本题要求写一篇说明文，属于现象解释型文章。其话题贴近社会热点，大多数考生都应该使用过塑料袋，也了解塑料袋带来的问题。三点提纲可以依次展开为三个段落，紧紧围绕“限塑”，可联系可持续发展、保护环境、爱护自然、共建和谐社会的万能句型和万能论点，做到条理清晰，论证严密，就可以写好这篇文章。写作思路第一段：一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用，具体陈述塑料袋如何被“广泛”使用。第二段：一次性塑料袋带来的问题，可对其造成的影响的各方面进行阐述，如可分为三点等。第三段：限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义，可联系当前政策、塑料袋循环使用以及其他替代方法，以及减少使用一次性塑料袋对社会环境的积极影响。范文及高分点评范文Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (1) Not long ago, disposable plastic bags were widely used.(2)Stores often provided them to shoppers for convenience. We used them to contain nearly everything. It was even justifiable to claim that (3) without them, life would be unimaginable.(4)However, plastic bags pose a threat to human beings mainly in three respects. Firstly, they are difficult to (5)decompose naturally, thus polluting the environment and poisoning animals. (6) It is reported that many seabirds mistake plastic bags for food and die after swallowing them. Secondly, plastic bags, when heated, can release toxic substances that(7)play havoc with our body. Yet the tragic fact is that we have become more and more used to enjoying take-away food wrapped by plastic bags. Additionally, the excessive production of plastic bags is purely a waste of resources.(8)fortunately, the government is taking action to cope with the issue, such as charging plastic bags and enhancing public awareness of environmental protection. It is also desirable to use paper bags as a substitute. As the use of plastic bags decreases, I believe we can enjoy a much healthier life in the near future.高分点评（1） 文章开头先提出塑料袋曾被广泛使用，引出话题。（2） 举例说明在现实生活中，几乎离不开塑料袋。（3） 双重否定句的使用突出了一次性塑料袋的普遍性。（4） 本段为全文的核心，从三个方面具体阐述广泛使用一次性塑料袋的危害。（5） Decompose指的是塑料袋的分解和腐烂。（6） 用具体的例子进行例证，进一步增强了论点的说服力。（7） 意为“对有害”，与be bad for sth. 的意思相近，但感情色彩更强烈。（8） 最后一段联系国家目前采用价格机制来限制塑料袋使用的政策，以及推广纸袋代替塑料袋等具体方法，进而阐述减少使用塑料袋对社会、环境的积极影响。闪光词汇 Justifiable adj. 正当的，合理的 Unimaginable adj. 难以想象的；不可思议的 Pose v. 形成，造成 Decompose v. 分解；腐烂 Swallow v. 吞，咽 Release vt. 释放；发射 Toxic adj. 有毒的；中毒的 Substance n. 物质 Play havoc with 对.造成严重破坏 Excessive adj. 过度的，过分的；极度的 Substitute n. 替代品万能句型It was even justifiable to claim that .However,.pose a threat to .mainly in.respects Fortunately, the government is taking action to cope with the issue, such as.作业练习题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Water Resources. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1、 今年春季大旱再一次敲响了用水的警钟；2、 水资源匮乏的原因；3、 保护水资源的措施。2008年6月真题题目要求For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese;1、 娱乐活动多种多样；2、 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，但也可能有危害性；3、 作为大学生我的看法。审题思路该提属于社会热电类话题，要求就娱乐活动写 一篇正反论述型的议论文。娱乐活动占据了我们生活中很重要的一部分，娱乐活动的形式也多种多样。按照提纲要求，在第一段应该陈述这一问题；第二段从正反两方面来看待娱乐活动；最后，论述自己作为一名大学生的观点，即认为适度娱乐使人受益。写作思路第一段：描述娱乐活动多样性的事实。第二段：人们对娱乐活动的不同看法，有人认为有利，有人认为有害。第三段表明自己的立场，认为总体上是有益的。范文及高分点评范文 Recreational Activities (1)Instead of working or studying non-stop for days, we human beings find it necessary to take a break now and then so as to entertain ourselves with recreational activities. These activities take various forms, (2) ranging from riding, hiking, and traveling, to playing computer games, reading comic books, or simply watching TV. Different people prefer d