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训练(一) 第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）最近英国驻广州总领事馆文化教育处对部分有意到英国留学的中国高中学生进行了一次问卷调查，以下是调查内容及学生李华的意见。“British Council. China”留学英国调查卡（将您选择的项目中的“”涂黑或填写建议）您选择去哪个地区留学？英格兰威尔士北爱尔兰英国教育的哪些方面对您有吸引力？奖学金学校服务教学质量其他（请填写） 您对英国教育收费的评价收费合理收费很高收费很低您打算何时去英国留学？半年后一年后三年后未确定毕业后您是否打算在英国工作？是 否未确定您想通过我们了解什么信息?如何成功获取签证 如果租住私人住房每年所需的生活费用 如何申请奖学金其他 (请填写) 住大学宿舍是否比外面租房便宜?感谢你的参与! 您也可以将您的意见用E-mail寄给我们: 我们将竭诚为您服务!【写作内容】假设你是李华，现在你以英文书信的形式将你的意见反映给英国文化教育处的官员，书信里包含以下内容：（）你选择的留学地区和时间；（）你选择去英国留学的原因；（）你毕业后的工作打算；（）你希望从英国文化教育处了解信息。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入5个句子中；、文中不能再现考生真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】句子结构准确；信息内容完整、连贯。Dear Sir or Madame,Im glad to have been surveyed on the study in Britain.-Any of your help will be appreciated. And Im looking forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely,Li Hua第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面文章，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Dear team,Thanks to the Legal Affairs Office of the State Council ,May 4th has just been decreed a half -day public holiday for people between the ages of 14 and 28 in commemoration of the May 4th Movement .Since I personally dont believe that youth” stops at 28 (you are as young or as old as you feel!) and in recognition of the tremendous ,hard work that everyone has been doing over recent months, I have decided to grant everyone a full day s leave on May 4th.This is in addition to the standard public Labor Day holidays between May 1- 3.Please manage your work carefully next week to accommodate this addition of an extra days holiday ,and please make sure your clients know that the office will be closed between May 1-4. For anyone who has already applied for leave on May 4th,that day will be credited back to you and not deducted from your annual leave. For everyone else, you dont need to do anything except enjoying an extra days holiday next Sunday!Thanks everyone for your great work, and enjoy your holidays next week!All the best!【写作内容】1、概括短文内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右。2、就十四至二十八岁青年在“五. 四”放假半天这个主题发表你的看法，至少包括以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右。A）简单叙述你的立场态度。B）十四至二十八岁青年在“五. 四”放假半天可能难以落实，并说明理由。C) 但至少体现了政府对我们的关心 【写作要求】1.可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读的篇章结构、有关内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2.标题自定； 3.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。训练(二) 第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 假如你是21st Century的学生记者。请你根据以下内容写一篇关于雪灾的报道。 题目为A Severe Snow Storm。写作内容 发生时间：2008年1月中旬开始，持续了差不多一个月 发生地点：华南大部分地区 灾难程度：50年里最严重的一次灾难后果：大约60人死亡，8人失踪；这场灾难造成房层倒塌，交通问题和电力供应短缺经济损失：估计超过5百亿元目前情况：救援工作正在进行，与此同时，大家正在积极为灾区捐钱。写作要求 必须使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容；将5个句子组成连贯的短文；参考词汇 电力供应electricity supply; 估计estimate; 捐钱 donate money;灾区disaster areas第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）In some public toilets in China, signs have been put up in Chinese to remind visitors to wash out the toilet after use .In many scenic spots in China, similar posters ask people to speak in softer tones. In China, there are many rude bus passengers who never wait in line for a bus and push hard onto it the moment the bus stops. There are also witnesses to accidents who fail to lend a hand to others. In Beijing, the residents impolite, sometimes rude manners are often noted by visitors from all over the world.When talking about these phenomena, it is a shame for all of us Chinese people .“The success of the 2008 Olympic Games depends very much on showing good manners as on the quality of facilities and players performances,” Chinas delegate to the International Olympic Committee said. “The fact that some people pay little attention to their manners stands in our way of holding the 2008 Olympic Games successfully.”Yes, showing our culture and our country s economic power through this event is important , but good manners should be put at the top of our agenda (议程) . 【写作内容】 、以约30个词概括短文的要点；、然后以约120词以“文明礼貌”为发表看法，并包括以下要点：（）你认为文明礼貌是否重要；（）描述一次你目睹或体验不讲文明的真实或虚构的经历；（）你是怎样看待这种不文明行为的；（）呼吁大家讲文明礼貌，为奥运和亚运作贡献。【写作要求】、作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容量不得直接引用原文中的句子； 、标题自定。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 训练(三) 第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）2008年北京奥运会圣火到了广州并开始在广州的奥运火炬传递。以下是关于此次奥运火炬传递的一些新闻摘要：奥运圣火2008年5月7日到达广州。5月8日，208位火炬手参与了广州的这次火炬传递活动。8日早上八点，圣火从白云国际会议中心出发，穿过白云山、经过中山纪念堂、南越王博物馆、陈家祠、北京路步行街、天字码头、海珠广场等代表广州的文化建筑和著名景点，最后在约下午六点到达天河体育中心，全程约41公里，历时十小时。208位火炬手除少量体坛名和领导外，多为普通市民：工人，编辑，记者，老师，学生，公务员等。每位火炬手们交接火炬后，互相击掌。当天，数万计的广州市民挥着手中的五星红旗和奥运旗帜夹道欢迎圣火。每当火炬手经过，市民就为他们喝彩加油。写作内容假设你是李华，你拟向你身在英国的笔友Peter 写一封信介绍奥运圣火在广州传递的情况。请新闻摘要短文介绍本次活动的内容及你的感受。你的信需包括以下五方面内容：1.本次奥运圣火接力的概况（时间、起始地点）；2.火炬传递的过程（火炬手人数、路程、终点）；3.火炬手如何交接火炬；4.市民喜迎圣火的情况；5.概述你对这次火炬传递的总体感受；写作要求1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。参考词汇：the Olympic flame奥运圣火 The Beijing Olympic torch relay北京奧运火炬接力The torchbearer火炬手 The International Conference Center白云国际会议中心Dear peter,The Olympic flame arrived in Guangzhou finally on May7. I cant wait to tell you all about the Beijing Olympic torch relay.I hope you will support China as well as the Beijing Olympic Games like I do.Sincerely yoursLi Hua第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一遍150词左右的英语短文。It is well known that English learning is fairly important to the student ,but also it is a money hunter .That is ,students are ,day by day ,challenging the knowledge from a sea of reference books, cassette tapes ,CDs and even VCDs.Buying books is always the biggest sum of a students expense, which has ranged from 10to 60 RMB yuan during the latest decades. Perhaps VCDs may help students improve listening comprehension. Therefore, they have spent 50 RMB yuan on VCDs.No one can deny the fact that CDs have something to do with learning English. In most situations ,they are helpful to improve our understanding of foreign cultures, which are often considered difficult and tedious (=boring)for students to learn from the textbooks. Compared with this, listening tapes are rather boring ,so in 1999 a student spent less than20 RMB yuan on tapes.However, much money does not mean obtaining a better acquisition of foreign language. It depends on how hard one works.写作内容 1. 以约30词概括短文的要点；2. 以约120词说“如何选英语学习辅助工具”为主题篇短文，并包含以下内容要点：1）你对参考书等英语学习辅助工具的看法；2）你经常选用的英语学习辅助工具有哪些？3）你对英语学习者在使用辅助工具方面有何建议？写作要求 1. 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 2. 题目自拟。评分标准 概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。作文训练参考答案 训练(一) Dear Sir or Madame,Im glad to have been surveyed on the study in Britain.I want to study in England one year later because you education is of high quality. As far I am concerned the cost in Britain education is much higher than that in other countries. (I choose to study in England because of its attractive scholarship and outstanding teaching quality, even though its cost is too high. ) I dont think I will work in Britain after graduation. By the way, I want to know how to get my visa successfully and how to apply for scholarship. I wonder if/whether it is cheaper boarding in school than renting an apartment outside? Any of your help will be appreciated. And Im looking forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely,Li Hua任务型写作概述The author thinks that a half-day public holiday between the ages of 14 and 28 is not reasonable. He hopes a full-days leave for all the people as an addition to “Labor Day” holidays.训练(二) A Severe Snow StormA severe snow storm, which began in January 2008 and lasted almost for 30 days, affected most parts of South China. As one of the most serious disasters in the last five decades, the disaster caused about 60 deaths and 8 losing as well as houses collapsing, the shortage of electricity supply and long-lasting traffic problems. It is estimated that the economic loss has been over 50 billion yuan so far. And the assistance jobs are being carried out now in disaster areas. In the meantime, people around the country are all donating money for the snow-stricken people. 任务型写作概述The article shows us some impolite actions in China and asks people to behave politely. Because good manners is one of the factors which stand for the success of the 2008 Olympic Games.训练(三)Dear peter,The Olympic flame arrived in Guangzhou finally on May7. I cant wait to tell you all about the Beijing Olympic torch relay.The torch relay in Guangzhou started at 8 am o