读写任务之议论文写作导练

读写任务之议论文写作导练读写任务之议论文写作导练 一 阅读下面这篇短文 按要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 No one can believe that the over 6 300 kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day Believe it or not the Great Wall is being destroyed by people Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect but about 80 percent is in danger The Great Wall can be called great mostly because of its amazing length But we should realize that the length was made up of one brick at a time If we do nothing to save the Great Wall it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2 000 years It began in the rule of China s first emperor Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dynasty 221 BC 206 BC and lasted into the Ming Dynasty The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses sheep corrals and pigsties Some were taken away to build roads Bricks carved with people s names are put away as remembrances Rubbish is spread over the battlements The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load Those who destroyed and are destroying the Wall know its name but are not clear about its cultural meaning It will take a long time to let them know this The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base 写作内容写作内容 1 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点 2 然后以约 120 个词就 如何保护我国的文化遗产 的主题发表看法 并包括如下要点 a 你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的 b 保护文化遗产有何意义 c 保护我国的文化遗产的建议 注 因 写作要求 评分标准 与第一篇相同而省略 以下同 写作指导写作指导 1 确定体裁 阅读材料 可以了解到万里长城目前因为种种原因遭到了破坏 并以小见大 引发对我国其它历史文化遗产保护的必要 要求写一篇议论文 2 拟定标题 How to protect the cultural heritages in our country 3 如何概括 找出论点 Great Wall might disappear some day 和论据 the Great Wall is being destroyed by people to build their houses sheep corrals and pigsties to build roads sold for 15 yuan per tractor load 用自己的话将上述论点和论据表达出来 4 发表看法 提出问题并加以分析 如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象 并分析其 产生的根源 问题的支持 写保护文化遗产有何意义 问题的解决 提出保护我国文化遗产的 具体措施 佛山 胡邦仁 二 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 You must have heard stress contributes to 80 of major illness and is responsible for 75 to 90 of doctor s visits But that s not stress it s distress Stress is the only anti aging agent we know of the exact opposite of what we think says psychologist James E Loehr What really brings happiness is meeting obstacles and overcoming them The damage occurs when stress levels never go down A recent study showed it took nine days longer for the constantly stressed family caregivers of chronically 慢性地 ill patients to heal from wounds than it took other people the same age Stress is essential Life without it would be like having a brand new cherry red Porsche and driving it only in the driveway 写作内容写作内容 1 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点 2 然后以约 120 个词就 你如何看待压力 的主题发表看法 并包括如下要点 a 你是如何看待压力的 b 在你的学习或生活中压力是否大 如何正视压力 写作指导写作指导 1 扼要概括 本文的论点 论据 结论 论点Stress is the only anti aging agent we know of 论据Distress contributes to 80 of major illness and is responsible for 75 to 90 of doctor s visits 结论Stress would bring you happiness 用自己的话表达 论点 stress is not an obstacle but a power in our life it is good for us to stay young 论据和结论 According to the study we know that stress is necessary in our life which can motivate us to go ahead 2 构思经历 作者认为压力是抗衰老的有效药剂 生活的真正快乐来源于压力给予我们的不 断的动力 因此 可以介绍我们在平时学习中是如何将压力变为动力 及如何正视压力 三 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 Scientists find that hard working people live longer than average men and women Career women are healthier than housewives Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job holders A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1 the death rate increase correspondingly 相应地 by 2 All this comes down to one point work is helpful to health Why is work good for health It is because work keeps people busy away from loneliness Researches show that people feel unhappy worried and lonely when they have nothing to do Instead the happiest are those who are busy Work serves as a bridge between man and reality By work people come into contact with each other By collective activities they find friendship and warmth This is helpful to health The loss of work means the loss of everything It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease Besides work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement Work makes one feel his value and status in society When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow they are happy beyond words 写作内容写作内容 1 以约 30 个词概括短文的要点 2 然后以约 120 个词就 努力学习 快乐生活 的主题发表看法 并包括如下要点 a 你赞同 努力学习也可以快乐生活 这一观点吗 为什么 b 举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的 c 简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活 写作要求写作要求 1 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点 也可以参照阅读材料的内容 但不得直接引用 原文中的句子 2 标题自定 评分标准评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 写作指导写作指导 1 拟定标题 根据议论的主题及写作内容确定标题 Study hard and enjoy yourselves 3 扼要概括 找出议论文的基本要素 然后用自己的话表达出来 论点 观点work is helpful to health 论证 理由a work keeps people busy away from loneliness b work serves as a bridge between man and reality c work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement 3 确立观点 实施论证 首先要定好自己的观点 不一定是自己本来持有的观点 主要是看 文章怎么好写就怎样立论 然后 根据所给 写作内容 进行构思 此处要求举例说明你的同学是 如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的 那么 写之前可以想一想平时的学习过程中 什么时候会 发笑 会高兴 再把它们搬到同学的身上 用第三人称即可 如一起分享攻克难题后的喜悦 新学 会的谚语刚好应景而生 开同学一个无伤大雅的玩笑 学习之余 抽半个小时来一场三人小组篮球 赛进行自我调节等等 论点 观点the harder you work the happier you will be 论证 理由a hard work can keep a person busy b hard work can make one feel fruitful and proud of himself c the above factors can lead to a healthy body 最后 用一两句话简述你的看法 参考范文参考范文 一 How to protect the cultural heritages in our country The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World and a symbol of the ancient Chinese civilization but now it is in danger and some day it may disappear because of some local people s destroy What a pity As we can see some other valuable and important relics in our country have been destroying as well Why are some people doing that so foolishly Because the local people are not aware of their importance Cultural heritages are left to us by our ancestors and are also symbols of their wisdoms which played a very important role in history How should we protect our Cultural heritages In my opinion firstly we should make some people who lack of cultural knowledge know about the importance of the historic relics Destroying them means destroying ourselves Secondly the government should take some measures to protect them and if necessary laws will be made to punish those who destroy them on purpose Only in this way can we make our history richer and richer 二 Stress keeps you young The passage tells us that stress is not an obstacle but a power of success in your life What s more it is good for us to stay young According to the study we know that stress is necessary in our life which can motivate us to go ahead Everyone is affected by stressful situations How to manage your stress I hold the same view with the author stress is essential and we should be lucky to be together with it As for me I am keen on studying and enjoy the stress from study now Once upon a time I was discouraged because of too much stress from heavy study task Later I found the key to taking stress head on is being relaxed The better you relax the better mood you can get from study Don t be pessimistic when stress comes into view maybe it s a turning point in your life 三 Study hard and enjoy yourselves The author highlights the effect of work on people s health