2012届高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评四

用心 爱心 专心1 请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文 短文内容应包括以下几个要点 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩 儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理 写作时要适当地发挥 语言连贯 要写出妈妈的惊诧 还要写自己对此幅漫画的感 受和观点 词数 150 左右 认真看图 结合文字和图画 确立所要表达的主题是什么 这是在家庭教育中比较常见的现象 家长用双重标准去教育自己的孩子 根据基本的 价值观 我们可以归纳出图画所要表达的主题是 AsAs cancan bebe seenseen fromfrom thethe cartoons cartoons itit isis a a storystory aboutabout a a badbad exampleexample ofof familyfamily educationeducation 围绕确立的主题 仔细看图和文字 列出图中的要点 用心 爱心 专心2 人物 人物 小男孩 妈妈以及跌倒的小女孩 情景和动作 情景和动作 小男孩要去帮助小女孩 妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩 并对儿子说 不要扶 否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的 人物 人物 小男孩和妈妈 情景和动作 情景和动作 妈妈看到儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理 小男孩对妈妈说 我扶了 你会说是我碰倒的 妈妈很是震惊 遣词造句 注意多重表达 A boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground A boy wanted to give a hand to a girl who fell over on the ground His mother prevented him from helping the girl His mother persuaded him not to do so She said to his son Don t do that otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known She said to his son If you did that others would think it was you who knocked her known 注意虚拟语气的运用 用心 爱心 专心3 Mom saw that her son ignored the fallen oil bottle on the ground The boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet The boy said to his mother If I had lifted the oil bottle you would think that it was me who brought it down The boy explained to his mother that had he lifted the oil bottle she would think that it was him who brought it down 注意虚拟语气的运用 Hearing his son s explanation Mom was shocked astonished surprised 连贯成篇 As can be seen from the cartoons it is a story about a bad example of family education In the first picture a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom prevented him from doing so saying Don t do that otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known In the second picture the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet Why can t you straighten it up she asked angrily but she was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy If I had lifted the oil bottle you would think that it was me who brought it down 围绕漫画主题自拟感想 我对漫画中母亲的做法看法 不同意 建议 解决的办法 父母是孩子的第一任老师 应该为孩子树立好榜样 父母不仅要关心孩子的身体 还要关心他们的思想 父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事 遣词造句 注意多重表达 I disagree with what the mother did in the story 用心 爱心 专心4 In my opinion the mother shouldn t educate his son in this way Parents are their children s first teachers so they should set a good example to them As their first teachers parents should set a good example to their children I think parents should not only care for their children s health but their minds For example they should let their children 连贯成篇 In my opinion the mother shouldn t educate his son in this way As we all know parents are the first teachers so they should set a good example to them I think parents should not only care for their children s health but their minds For example they should let their children know it s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble 参考范文参考范文 一一 As can be seen from the cartoons it is a story about a bad example of family education In the first picture a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom prevented him from doing so saying Don t do that otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known In the second picture the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet Why can t you straighten it up she asked angrily but she was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy If I had lifted the oil bottle you would think that it was me who brought it down In my opinion the mother shouldn t educate his son in this way As we all know parents are the first teachers so they should set a good example to them I think parents should not only care for their children s health but their minds For example they should let their children know it s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble 参考范文参考范文 二二 As can be seen from the cartoons it is a story about a bad example of 用心 爱心 专心5 family education In the first picture a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom persuaded him not to do so saying Don t do that otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known In the second picture the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet Mom was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy If I had lifted the oil bottle you would think that it was me who brought it down I disagree with what the mother did in the story As we all know parents are the first teachers I think parents should not only care for their children s health but their minds They should let their children know it s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble 2011 2011 年南京市第二次模拟考试年南京市第二次模拟考试 请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文 短文内容应该包括以下三个方面 1 描述这幅漫画的内容 2 是否同意他们的教育方式 并陈述理由 3 对家庭教育提出建议 注意 1 词数 150 左右 2 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名 参考词汇 溺爱 spoil vt 参考范文参考范文 As can be seen in the cartoon the young couple educate their child in different ways Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on 用心 爱心 专心6 their child while Mother spoils him They adopt strikingly inconsistent methods which makes their child confused I subscribe to neither of their education methods If we always give children severe punishment they will become nervous and lack self confidence or become violent and aggressive following in the father s footsteps If we always love children too much they will turn out to be self centered and dependent tending to do whatever they want to So far as I am concerned it is better to use appropriate methods based on children s individual personalities Since praise and criticism both play vital roles in children s education it is essential that parents should try to maintain the balance between love and strictness Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all round development 157 words 学生习作欣赏学生习作欣赏 一一 As can be seen in the cartoon the young couple educate their child in different ways The mother is smiling and wants to please the child with chocolate On the contrary the father who holds a ruler tightly looks angry and seems to urge his child to study The small boy between his parents is frightened and confused As far as I am concerned I think it an effective way to educate children On the one hand a considerate mother can take care of her child carefully and devotes all her love which will educate the child to be kind and selfless On the other hand a father who is always hard on the child can prevent the baby being spoiled Moreover the child can learn to struggle and be brave when facing difficulties In conclusion father and mother are two important parts in family education They can t spoil children too much or blame them too often which will have bad effects on children s growth 149 words 学生习作欣赏学生习作欣赏 二二 用心 爱心 专心7 As can be seen in the cartoon the young couple educate their child in different ways The father of the child looks extremely angry He is holding a ruler in order to beat the little boy Meanwhile the mother is smiling to her child with a bar of chocolate in her hand However I can t agree with either of them Being strict to children may hurt their hearts On the contrary spoiling children too much could affect their future development Both of them are harmful to the growth of children during their childhood In my opinion parents are the first teachers of their child What they say and do will affect their children deeply First of all parents need to have discussions on family education which is very important to the education on their child Then parents ought to treat the child equally and offer proper freedom and help when children turn to either of you If they can continue to do so children may have a healthy and warm family life 156 words 学生习作欣赏学生习作欣赏 三三 As can be seen in the cartoon the young couple educated their child in different ways The mother provides tasty food like chocolate