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Argumentation 4 Howtowriteabodyparagraph 驳论 驳论时 一般先把对方的论点摆出来 然后有的放矢 针锋相对的批驳 同时要注意 欲扬先抑 欲擒故纵 即先承认对方的观点有一定的道理 然后笔锋陡转 批驳对方观点的错误之处 也就是说 反守为攻 后发制人 以下是套路 Argumentation 1 Tobeginwith whileitistruethat itdoesn tmeanthat 首先 虽然 的确是真的 但这不意味着 例如 Tobeginwith whileitistruethatstudyisveryimportanttostudents itdoesn tmeanthattheyshouldalwaysstudywithoutplaying Argumentation 2 Atfirstthought thisideasoundstrue butonsecondthought wecanfindtherearesomeproblemswiththeview First Second Third 乍一想 这种观点听起来是正确的 但再一想 我们可以发现这种观点有问题 第一 第二 第三 例如 Atfirstthought thisideasoundstrue butonsecondthought wecanfindtherearesomeproblemswiththisview First moneycannotalleviatementalpain Second moneycannotbuyreallove Third moneycannotbringpeoplerealhappiness Argumentation 3 Thereisanelementoftruthinthestatementthat butthisisnottosaythat 说 是有点道理 但这并不等于说 例如 Thereisanelementoftruthinthestatementthatexaminationcancheckthestudents level butthisisnottosaythatstudents levelcanberaisedbyexamination Argumentation 4 Admittedly Indeed True Certainly Ofcourse Undoubtedly butitismoreadvisable because 诚然 的确 当然 毫无疑问 但是 是更可取的 因为 Admittedly itisparents goodintentiontomaketheirchildrenlearndifferentkindsofskills butitismoreadvisableforchildrentolearnwhattheylikebecausethismethodcandevelopchildren sowninterests Argumentation AnSampleEssay Title MyviewonStudents TakingPart timeJobs 驳论 Nowmoreandmoreuniversitystudentstakepart timejobsintheirsparetime Therehasbeenaheatedargumentaboutwhetheruniversitystudentsshouldtakethem Somepeopleareforit Theythinkthatpart timejobscanenrich Argumentation students experience Butothersareagainstit Theythinkthatpart timejobswillaffectstudents study Astome Iaminfavorofthefirstopinion Certainly part timejobsmayaffectstudents study butitcannotbesaidthattheyarenotbeneficialtostudents Therearemanyexamplesthatcanproveit HereIjustlistsometypicalones Argumentation First takingapart timejobcanhelpastudentpaythetuition Itisveryprofitabletosomepoorstudents Asanotherinstance itcanincreaseastudent sworkingexperience Itisveryusefultohisfuturework Asstillanotherinstance astudentcanstudyhowtodealwiththehumanrelationship Tosumup theexperienceoftakingapart timejobisbeneficialtoauniversitystudent Title MyviewonStudents TakingPart timeJobs 立论 Nowmoreandmoreuniversitystudentstakepart timejobsintheirsparetime Therehasbeenaheatedargumentaboutwhetheruniversitystudentsshouldtakethem Somepeopleareforit Theythinkthatpart timejobscanenrichstudents experience Butothersareagainstit Theythinkthatpart timejobswillaffectstudents study Astome Iaminfavorofthefirstopinion Thereasonsforthiscanbelistedasfollows First takingapart timejobcanhelpastudentpaythetuition Itisveryprofitabletosomepoorstudents Asanotherinstance itcanincreaseastudent sworkingexperience Itisveryusefultohisfuturework Asstillanotherinstance astudentcanstudyhowtodealwiththehumanrelationship Tosumup theexperienceoftakingapart timejobisbeneficialtoauniversitystudent Argumentation ArgumentationExercises 1 Writeanargumentativeessaywiththetitle ShouldStudentsDoSomeHousework usingyourappositiveview 1 有人认为学生做家务很有必要 2 有人认为学生不必做家务3 我认为 2 MyViewontheIncomeGap1 有人认为收入差异是社会经济发展的必然趋势 2 另一些人认为收入不均带来不平等 3 我的观点 Argumentation 3 Writeanargumentativeessaytorefuteothers opinionwiththetitle IndoororOutdoorActivities 1 有人喜欢室内活动2 另有些人喜欢室外活动3 我的倾向 Argumentation Sample1 ShouldStudentsDoSomeHousework Somepeoplethinkthatitisnecessaryforstudentstodosomehousework butothersdon tthinkso Ithinkthatstudentsshouldsharesomehouseworkwiththeirparents Thereasonsareasfollows Argumentation First ineachfamily themustbealotofhouseworksuchascooking shopping washingandcleaning Asamemberofafamily everyoneshoulddosomehousework Astudentisnoexceptionsinceheisastudentatschoolbutafamilymemberathome Second asastudent hesitintheclassroomfromMondaytoFridayandhedoesn thavemuchexercise sohecanmakeuseofthechancetodomoreexercise Aboveall whiledoinghousework hecanfinditenjoyableandhecanalsotakeadvatageofthetimetocommunicatewithhisparents Argumentation Therefore Ithinkitisnecessaryforthestudenttodohousework Myfriends ifyouneverorseldomdohousework pleasestarttodosomenow Yourparenrswillbepleasedthatyouhavereallygrownup Argumentation Sample2MyViewontheIncomeGapPeople sopinionsontheincomegapvaryfrompersontoperson Somepeoplethinkthatitisanecessaryresultwiththedevelopmentofoursocialeconomy Theyholdtheideabecausetheyalwayslookforwardtoearningmoremoneythroughhardwork Althoughtheaboveviewsoundsreasonable othersthinkthatunequalincomewillleadtoinequalityandthatisasocialproblem intheiropinion thegapbetweentherichandthepooriscontrarytothecountryprinciple Astome Iaminfavorofthefirstview Thereare Argumentation manyreasonsformyinclination butthefollowingonesaremostimportant First theincomegapcanstimulatepeopletocreatemoreproductsandmeettheneedsofoursociety Besides Whileitistruethatpeoplewithlowincomefeelunfairtobecompelledtotakemorepains itdoesn tmeanthatthedivisionofwealthistotoallyunreasonable Therearenumerousexamplesaroundustoillustratethatcondition Argumentation Therefore themostimportantthingistosetupafairandreasonablecriteriontodividethesocietywealthandgiveallpeoplemoreopportunitiestodevelopthem Iamsurethattheincomegapwillbeeliminatedinthefuture Argumentation Sample3IndoororOutdoorActivitiesWhenaskeaboutwheretospendtheleisuretime somepeopleprefertospendtheirfreetimeoutdoors Others however prefertospendtheirleisuretimeindoors Astome Ichoosethefirstway Ofcourse theremaysomeadvantagestotakeyourleisuretimeindoors Forexample indooractivitieswouldn tbeaffected