2016强化写作笔记整理 (2).doc

强化写作笔记整理第一段 描述图画A 单图作文一、第一句漫画A The famous painter Qi Baishi once said, it is reality that our picture wishes to convey, and the picture here perfectly expresses these words.B Being one of the most outstanding painters, Van Gogh once said: “To draw is to reflect the real world. ” and the picture here perfectly expresses his words.C Mr. Zhang Daqian, one of the greatest Chinese painters, said in his autobiography: “A picture is a world, any dot or line is all from our life.” and the picture here perfectly expresses his words.照片Regarded as one of the leading photographers, Mr. Rankin once remarked: “A photo is a mirror of our society” and the photo here perfectly expresses his words.famousgreat/well-known/outstanding/distinguished/celebrate/leading/top/with great reputationpainterartistrealitytrue world/real world/surrounding environment/real lifepicturedrawing/cartoon/painting/portrayalsaidmentioned/stated/remarked/offered his viewperfectlyexactly/correctlyexpressesshows/illustrates/demonstrates/ embodies/reflects/reveals/mirrorsthese wordsthis sentence/its connotation/its implication/its senseChineseoriental/nationalautobiographyarticle/essay/diary/writings/speech/lecturephotophotograph/photographic image二、第二句(五大分句: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5)分句一:结构A As+副词1and副词2shown替换词in the picture above,B It is+副词1and副词2shown替换词in the picture above thatC What is+副词1and副词2shown替换词+in the picture is that副词 vividly subtly分句二: 地点(介词+名词)+姿势(动词(-s) )+主人公(n.)分句三: 结构: , doing （feeling+adj.+and+adj. to do/about+n.）分句四:结构: , done分句五:结构:, with+n. +doing/done(动作)三、第三句A Undoubtedly, what the author intends to reveal is not merely the picture itself.B It is beyond doubt that the author does not intend to reveal the picture itself merely.C It is out of question that the intention of the author goes far beyond the picture itself.undoubtedlybeyond doubt/out of questionintendsaims to/seeks to/tries to/attempts torevealshow/present/disclose/bring to light/inform/imply/emphasize/underlinemerelysimply/barelyB 双图作文一、第一句漫画and the pair of pictures here perfectly express these words.照片 and the pair of photos here perfectly express his words.二、第二句1. 图一分句一: As+副词1and副词2shown替换词in the first/upper/left picture above,2. 图二1两幅图存在对立关系A When it comes to the second picture, another opposite scene has emerged owing to the presence/absence of 原因.B Contrary to the former one, evident changes emerge when it comes to the second picture that+结果 +with/without+原因.C Presenting another opposite scene, the second picture shows another entirely different situation that+结果+with/without+原因.2两幅图存在相似关系Likewise, what we can see in the second picture is that conduct(s) the similar behavior.三、第三句Undoubtedly, what the author intends to reveal is not merely the pictures themselves.C 图表作文一、第一句Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft, once remarked, data is the society in miniature, while the graph/table here shows changes/variation about+标题.graph-diagram/chart/graphic charttable-statistics table/data table/data sheetshows-reveals/presents/indicates/conveys/illustrates二、第二句1. 动态图趋势一Firstly, the figure of 分项1 has been going upward/downward sharply/slightly, from 起点数据 in/on/at 时间 to 终点数据 in/on/at 时间 (, then rising/declining to 终点数据2 in/on/at 时间2).趋势二By contrast, the data of 分项2 show a different situation, in which the starting point was 起点数据 in/on/at 时间 whereas reaching 终点数据 in/on/at 时间, climbing/ falling rapidly/gently(, soon afterwards increased/decreased to 终点数据2 +时间2).趋势三升降:In addition, the trend of 分项3 is similar to that of the former/latter.平稳/波动:In addition, the trend of 分项3 keeps stable/is fluctuating.数字-number/ figure/ data/ statistics升-rise(rose-risen)/ grow(grew-grown)/ increase/ climb/ go(went/gone) upward/ show(showed/shown) an upward trend降-fall(fell-fallen)/ drop(dropped)/ decrease/ go downward/ show a downward trend快速升-jump/ shoot up/ surge/ soar/ rocket快速降-plummet/ plunge平稳-keep stable/ level off/ stabilize/ remain stable/ reach a plateau波动-fluctuate/ keep unstable/ swing快-fast/ quickly/ sharply/ rapidly/ dramatically/ markedly/ significantly/ substantially/ in a high speed/ in quickening pace/ to a large extent慢-slowly/ gradually/ gently/ slightly/ moderately/ steadily/ in a low speed/ in a moderate pace/ in a small extent2. 静态图Composed of _ totally different parts, the graph/table shows its first part of 分项1 which has the figure of 数据1, compared with that of 分项2, whose number is 数据2, whereas 分项3 accounting for about 数据3 follows these closely, with the several final section(s) covering 剩余总和.Composed of-divided into/ separated into/ Cut into/ Consisting of/ Comprised oftotally-entirely/ completely/ wholly/ distinctlydifferent-diverse/ distinct/ independentparts-shares/ portions/ units/ sectionscompared with-being different from/ being dissimilar to/ showing a contrast withwhose number-the number of whichaccount for-make up/ represent/ occupy/ constitute/ coverfollows-goes after第二段 分析现象一、第一句结构: 引出句+主旨句A The intention/purpose of the drawing(s) is to reveal that 主题词 is quite vital to us/our society.B Simple but profound as the drawing is, the inner sense hides behind it that主题词 is quite vital to us/our society.C However diverse the outer form is, the picture serves as a mirror which reflects a common social phenomenon in our contemporary society that 主题词 plays a significant role for us.quiterather/increasingly/exceedingly/extraordinarily/extremelyvital-indispensable/crucial/key/necessary/essential simpleplain/superficial/uncomplicated/intuitiveprofounddeep-going/penetrating/incisive/intrinsic/inherentsensemeaning/connotation/theme/topic/subject二、第二句+第三句结构: To analyze the main factor, 万能理由1. What is more, 万能理由2.文章内容分类：年份万能理由文化类02.10经济发展+社会变化情商类01.03.04.07.08.12.13经济发展+传统教育反面类98.05.00.11.06.09社会变化+传统教育万能理由1：经济发展A With the rapid development of economy and fierce social competitions, 主题词（文化交流/情商） has counted for much for the growth of a nation(文化类)/an individual（情商类）.B With the boom and burst of economy and fierce social competitions following, 主题词 has far-reaching influence on the progress and growth of a nation/an individual.C With economy development, globalization and modernization getting more and more universal, which also brought about fierce social competitions, 主题词, as a driving force or impetus for the progress and growth of a nation/an individual, is quite important.rapid developmentboom and burst/flourishing/prosperity/thrivingfierce social competitionsheave social pressure/stress/burden/loadfollowing-that followed/going afterwards far-reaching-lasting/permanent/persistent/sustained/ceaseless/never-ending万能理由2：社会变化A Our modern society has encountered huge changes, in which 现象(文化交流/反面问题) emerged and brought good/bad effect.B Great changes have taken place in our modern society, while/whereas some relevant aspects follow this step, such as+现象, which works somewhat positively/negatively.C Great changes have taken place in our modern society, after which came some relevant aspects, such as+现象, generating positive/negative consequence.great-huge/ tremendous/ continuous/ ceaseless/ never-ending/ profoundtake place-occur/ emerge/ arise/ come into beingwhereas-meanwhile/ in the meantime/ after which/ in the wake of whichrelevant-related/ correspondingaspects-fields/ domains万能理由3：传统教育A The advantage of school education is book knowledge and exam, which ignores overall aspects, such as lack of主题词(情商/正面现象).B The strong point of traditional education is rigid book knowledge and exam-oriented skills, for reason of which several aspects fall behind, thus lack of 主题词 has become severe.C The strong point of traditional education is to value intellect and exam-oriented skills, and here comes the shortcoming that several aspects lag behind, thus giving rise to lack of 主题词.advantagestrong point/superiority/feature/traittraditional educationexam-oriented educationrigidinflexiblevalueemphasize/underline/lay emphasis on/attach importance to三、第四句A Countless as the reasons are, those mentioned above are the most evident.B Were these factors not taken into account, the issue would not come into being.C No matter how complex the analyses may appear, what we take into account here can explain whether the issue is important.第三段 个人评价一、第一句A Based on the analysis above, some effective and efficient measures should be taken.B Taking the analysis above into account, it is high time that we took some effective and efficient measures.C Be the issue obvious or uncommon, realized or unknown, simple or deep, necessary measures should be taken.effective and efficient-proper/appropriate/suitablemeasures-steps/actions二、第二句文章内容分类：年份万能措施文化类政府情商类个人反面类个人/政府万能措施1：政府A Our government should make up related laws and regulations to put 主题词(文化交流/正面现象) into practice. B Governments or departments concerned have the duty to enact and carry out laws and regulations in order to promote 主题词.C Governments or departments concerned have the duty to enact and carry out laws and regul