分词在高考写作的应用.ppt

分词在高考写作中的应用,2012年广东高考基础写作BornonMarch7,1915,AllanStewart,anAustralian,becametheoldestmantoobtainamastersdegreeovertheworldin2006.Hebelievedthatoneisnevertoooldtochallengeoneself.Hegothisfirstdegreein1936andthenhisdoctorsdegreeofmedicine.Inhiseighties,hedecidedtostudylaw,afterwhichheobtainedhisthirddegreein2006.In2012,hemanagedtogethisfourthdegreebyonlinelearningandwonpraisefromhisteacherforhisgoodtimemanagementinstudy.,2013年广东高考基础写作AboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarswillhavebeenselectedthroughouttheworldby2015.Thecandidates,agedatleast18yearsold,areexpectedtomakepreparationsforthefactthattheycantreturntotheearth.Moreover,thecandidatesshouldbewillingtokeepgoodrelationswithothers.ExpertsbelievethatthelivingconditionsontheMarswouldbetootoughandthevolunteerswouldbefacedwithbitterlycoldclimate,lonelinessandfear.However,somevolunteersclaimthat,tiredofthelifeontheearth,theywanttoexperiencethelifeontheMars,addingthattheywillbetheheroesofmankindiftheysucceed.,2014年广东高考基础写作RichardAvis,aBritish,wasbornonDecember1st,1974.Inordertounderstandthemeaningofsuccessfullifeindifferentcultures,Richard,from2011,begantoseektimetwinsaroundtheworld.Withthehelpofthelocalmedia,hehasalreadyfound32timetwinsfrom13countries,ofwhomthereare17malesand15females.Theirpositionsincludegovernmentofficials,athletes,drivers,teachers,artistsandsoon.Richardintendstofind40timetwinsbeforehisbirthdayandheisgoingtowriteabookbasedonthisexperience.,在英语写作中如能灵活使用分词来整合信息，可以使语言表达更简练，也是简单句看起来更“高级”，使改卷老师有眼前一亮的感觉。,Ifweweregivenmoretime,wewouldbeabletodotheworkmuchbetter.,Givenmoretime,wewouldbeabletodotheworkmuchbetter.,2.Allthevisitorsleftandtheyleftrubbisheverywhere.,Allthevisitorsleft,leavingrubbisheverywhere.,3.Thebookisworthreading.ItiswrittenbyLuxun.,ThebookwrittenbyLuxunisworthreading.,Haveatry.Rewritethefollowingsentences.,一、分词作定语,分词作定语，通常放在所修饰词的后面，即作后置定语。分词和被修饰的名词构成逻辑上的主动或者被动关系，主动关系时用现在分词，是被动关系时用过去分词。作定语的分词短语可以装换成由相对应的关系词引导的定语从句。,Eg1.然而，选择“伟人”（作偶像）的男生的比例与女生的比例相同。（2007年广东高考）,However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosinggreatmanastheiridolisthesameasthatofthegirls.,Eg2.由AmyChua著的虎妈战歌(BattleHymnofTheTigerMother)一书于2010年出版。（2011年广东高考）,Thebook,BattleHymnofTheTigerMother,writtenbyAmyChua,waspublishedin2010.OR:AbookentitledBattleHymnofTheTigerMotherbyAmyChuawaspublishedin2010.,二、分词作状语分词作状语，可表示时间、原因、条件、结果、伴随等，可转化为由when、because、if等引导的状语从句，一般放在句首；表示结果和伴随时常放句末，可转化为and连接的并列句。过去分词表完成，被动,与主句主语之间是被动关系。现在分词表进行，主动,与主句主语之间是主动关系。注意：分词做状语，分词的逻辑主语与句子的主语一致。,Seenfromthetopofthehill,hefoundthecitylookedbeautiful.,误,Seeingfromthetopofthehill,hefoundthecitylookedbeautiful.,正,Eg1.据王教授说，我国中小学生近视率略高于百分之五十，排在世界第一位。（2009年广东高考）,AccordingtoProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshortsighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.,Eg2.射击最初（创造出来）只是作为生存工具，19世纪晚期才发展成为一项体育运动。（2008年广东高考）,Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.,合并句子1.Jackdied.Heleftme4collectionsofCD.2.HereturnedtoLondonlastweek.Hehadlivedabroadfortenyears.3.Fortypercentofthestudentsagreethatstudentscantakesmartcellphonestoschool.Theyarguethatsmartcellphoneishelpfulinschool.4.Hewasexhaustedbythelongjourney.Hesoonfellasleep.5.Themeasuresareveryeffective.Themeasuresaretakenbythegovernment.6.Thetallbuildingisourlibrary.Itissurroundedbymanybigtrees.,1.Jackdied.Heleftme4collectionsofCD.2.HereturnedtoLondonlastweek.Hehadlivedabroadfortenyears.3.Fortypercentofthestudentsagreethatstudentscantakesmartcellphonestoschool.Theyarguethatsmartcellphoneishelpfulinschool.,Jackdied,leavingme4collectionsofCD.,Havinglivedabroadfortenyears,hereturnedtoLondonlastweek.,Fortypercentofthestudentsagreethatstudentscantakesmartcellphonestoschool,arguingthatsmartcellphoneishelpfulinschool.,4.Hewasexhaustedbythelongjourney.Hesoonfellasleep.5.Themeasuresareveryeffective.Themeasuresaretakenbythegovernment.6.Thetallbuildingisourlibrary.Itissurroundedbymanybigtrees.,Exhaustedbythelongjourney,hesoonfellasleep.,Themeasurestakenbythegovernmentareveryeffective.,Thetallbuildingsurroundedbymanybigtreesisourlibrary.,Translatethefollowingsentencesusingtheparticipleasadverbialorattributive.1、在地球村开设了二十多个展馆，代表美国、英国等不同国家。（2012深圳一模）2、我们已经决定这个周末去一个叫凤凰山的地方外出郊游。（1012年汕头二模）3、我们呼吁少一点家庭作业，使学生有更多睡眠和锻炼的时间。（2011六校联考）4、茂名数字科技馆（MMDSTM）坐落于茂名市图书馆一楼，总占地1000平方米。（2012年茂名二模）5、1911年12月11日出生于浙江一个富裕之家，钱学森少时天资聪明，被称为“神童”。（2011年肇庆二模）,1、在地球村开设了二十多个展馆，代表美国、英国等不同国家。（2012深圳一模）IntheGlobalVillage20exhibitionhallswerebuiltoverintheGlobalVillagerepresentingdifferentcountriessuchasUSandUK.2、我们已经决定这个周末去一个叫凤凰山的地方外出郊游。（1012年汕头二模）WehavedecidedtogoforanoutingtoaplacecalledFenghuangMountainthisweekend.3、我们呼吁少一点家庭作业，使学生有更多睡眠和锻炼的时间。（2011六校联考）Wecallforlesshomework,thusleavingstudentsmoretimetosleepandtakeexercise.,4、茂名数字科技馆（MMDSTM）坐落于茂名市图书馆一楼，总占地1000平方米。Locatedonthe1stfloorofMaomingLibrary,MMDS