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安徽巢湖市春晖中学2020年高考英语短跑优秀讲义旁批写(一)典型同辈压力是青少年成长过程中经常遇到的问题。如果你是某中学三年级学生李明，你的美国笔友杰克来了一封信，询问如何应对同辈压力。请根据以下要点给他捎个信。1.同龄的压力是不可避免的。每个人都是独特的，不需要和别人比较。3 .注意：1 .字数在120字以上。可以适当地添加详细信息。写作策略1.仔细审查问题：(1)体裁：书信。(2)时态：通常现在。(3)第一人称：第一人称。2.确定结构：(1)Formal greeting可以使用Dear Sir/Madam/Dr Smith等。(2)Body language正文内容。(3)Formal ending正式提案结论和Yours truly/sincerely等。3.词汇筛选：glad、common、vocabulary、make suggestions、put.to use，learn.自。等。)，以获取详细信息4.搜索句型：(Its very important for sb.to do，Id like to.等。)，以获取详细信息5.由一句话组成： (经常是firstly、secondly、besides、last but not least等)。)，以获取详细信息看范文Dear Jack，In your last email，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure。I m very glad to share my views with you。peer pressure is a common problem for us young students。web often find some onewho is superior to us。 for example，they come from a better family，Or they have more talents。Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it。 secondly，We must know that every one of us is unique and has our own advantages。we needn t compare ourselves with others。 thirdly，我们是slen from thosewho have real talents . it s useless just to envy them医生。by learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly。I hope my advice can be of help to you。名词团评论既有品位又有礼貌地表达了自己的热情，下面包装已准备好，以便下一个建议。层次进步，是文章思想性的集合中选择所需的构件。礼貌地表达了自己的愿望。整体评价：思维清晰，层次强；作者的建议有很强的针对性。写作指南Elegance(优雅) (原始)Soso(一般)(1)I m very glad to share my views with you。now I will tell you how I deal with such problems。(2)we offen find some one who is superior to美国。we often find that some people are better than us in some aspects。(3)Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it。Firstly，I think we must take this seriously。(4)by learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly。we can learn from their advantages and we can improve ourselves at the same time。(5)I hope my advice can be of help to you。I hope my advice will help you。摩莎翻译1.风扇文本：In your last email，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure。复印翻译：在班级会议上，我们讨论了如何有效地处理那些问题。At the class meeting，web discussed how to deal with the problems effectively。2.范文：we often find some one who is superior to us。影印翻译：他在技术上超过了他的对手。he is technically superior to his competitors。3.范文自救：Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it。莫莎翻译：我认为我们最好接受他的创造性观点。I think we had better accept his creative idea rather than oppose it。4.范文自救：wenen t compare ourselves with others。莫莎翻译：把我们的情况与他们的情况比较后，我们很受鼓舞。we are much inspired after comparing their situations with ours。5.范文自救：Its useless just to envy them。莫莎翻译：和初次见面的人握手是很必要的。it is neceary to shake hands when you first m