SectionB3a—3bSelfcheck (15).ppt

Unit4Ihavechangedalot!-Writing,ThereweretimesweusedtoshareThereweretimesweusedtowalkaroundAllthejoythatlifewouldbringWecouldlaughatanythingButnowImallalone.IwonderwhereyouareIwonderhowyoufeelSotellmewhattodoTogetbackclosetoyouNowIneedtofindawayOrjustthewordtosayIwantyouherewithmeBackwhereweusedtobe.,VenkeKnutson-IWonder,ShehaschangedsomuchPeoplesurechange.,Curious?,Sheusedtohaveshorthair.Butnowshehaslonghair.Sheusedtowearglasses.Butnowshedoesntwearglasses.Sheusedtobeshort.Butnowsheisofmediumheight.Sheusedtobethin.Sheisstillthinnow.Besidesthat,sheusedtobecute,shyandreallyhelpful.,DearAnna,Howtimeflies!IthasbeensevenyearssinceIgraduatedfromthemiddleschool.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyself.Asformyappearance,Iusedtobethin,nowIamthinnerthanbefore.AndIusedtohaveshorthairbecauseIthoughthavingshorthairmademelookcute,butnowIhavelonghairinordertomakemyselflookmorebeautiful.Alsomypersonalityhaschangedalot,too.Forexample,Iusedtobequietinthepast.Ididntusetoanswerquestionsinclass,butnowItalkactivelyandbecomemoreoutgoingthanbefore.Asformyhobby,Iusedtolikelisteningtomusic,butnowIenjoytravelingaroundtheworldtorelaxmyself.Whatmore,IhavegraduatedfromuniversityandIamanofficeladyinabank.Iusedtohavetospendmuchtimestudying,nowIliketospendmoretimewithmyfamilyinmysparetime.Inaword,astimegoesby,ImnotwhatIusedtobe.,thin,shorthair,thin,longhair,quiet,didntlikeansweringquestions,activeandoutgoing,usedtolistentomusic,traveling,Spendtimeonstudying,Spendmoretimewithfamily,Sheusedto,butnowshe,Ihavechangedalot,请以“Ihavechangedalot!”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面谈谈你这几年的变化,以及你认为自己最大的变化是什么要求：80词左右。要点齐全，语义连贯，结构完整。1.灵活运用本单元所学短语usedto;2.Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?(appearance,personality,hobbies)Whichchangeisthemostimportantoneandwhy?,Step1Keywords,Howcanwebecomeagoodwriter?,SentenceParagraphPassage,Linkingwords,Beginning2.Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?(appearance,personality,hobbies)Whichchangeisthemostimportantoneandwhy?,1篇章结构是否正确？内容要点是否全面？2句型结构是否正确？有用到一些高级句型吗？3是否用到扩句和复合句？4是否用到连接词？5开头句和结尾句有无亮点？6单词的书写有无错误？7书写是否规范？,Post-writing评价,Remember:,Romeisntbuiltinaday.Themoreyouread，themore