宁波五月适应性考试作文分析(推荐信+续写高分作文)

1、试题回顾假如你是李华，你们学校的外教Mr.James 想找一个人教他8岁的儿子中文。请你写信推荐你的朋友王明，内容包括：1. 写信目的，2. 推荐理由。注意：1. 词数80左右2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。审题：体裁：应用文之推荐信 结构内容：写信目的+推荐理由 时态：一般现在时+一般过时时等 写信人与收信人：学生-外教续写： Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of s

2、hape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distanceIn Emily Whites hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one

3、 of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the towns people.Many people tried out each year for it, but so many were turned away. It can only include the most excellent people in the field.Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens- her music teacher

4、 to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Amys body and said, Child, you just dont fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through t

5、he door of the choral room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired. This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Buttler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.Emily didnt want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Em

6、ily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Buttler called, “Emily, youre next. Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Buttler told her to do. Mr. Buttler sat by the piano to keep Emily company. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Buttler and knew the result would be

7、 posted on the door of the choral room the next day.Emily couldnt sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didnt fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.宁波五月适应性考试试题（2020,05）作文佳句分析及高分范文首段：Knowing that you are in

8、urgent need of a Chinese teacher for you 8-year-old son, I am writing to recommend my friend Wang Ming to you.Learning that you are seeking for a Chinese tutor for your 8-year-old son, I am writing to recommend, my best friend, Wang Ming.中段：总起：Wang Ming, in my mind, is definitely well qualified for

9、the job.Wang Ming, an experienced teacher, is a perfect/qualified candidate for the job.理由：技能 /能力Initially, as an experienced tutor, Wang possesses/has high proficiency both in English and Chinese, which undoubtedly will make a perfect teacher for you son.Foremost, his mastery in Chinese grammar alo

10、ng with abundant knowledge concerning ancient Chinese culture will surely live up to your expectation.性格特点：Besides/Additionally,He, with an outgoing and easygoing character, loves to communicate with kids.经验：Third, his previous experience as a tutor will undoubtedly guarantee him to be a brilliant t

11、eacher.尾段：Should there be any question about him(倒装）, please feel free to contact me. Looking forward to your prompt reply.续写高分作文：The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.Her eyes landing（落在） on and fixing at（盯着） the word”Emily”, she screamed in high-pitched（尖

12、声的） voice and sprang up（跳起来） like an exhilarated（兴奋地，激动的） elf（精灵）. However, the memory of Mrs. Owens words flickered（摇曳，闪烁） across her mind, casting a surge of gloom(忧郁） over her heart. “What if anyone laugh at me and I fail?” murmured nervously, Emilys prior excitement gave way to increasing anxiet

13、y. She shuffled away from the choral room, torn between anticipation to show her remarkable talent and anxiety of being teased. But ultimately, an irresistible urge to sing grabbed her and she determined to achieve a perfect performance.Finally, the day of performance came. Staggering to the stage,

14、Emily managed to curved her lips into an elegant arc to disguise her inner restlessness. Her strange body triggered a buzzing noise, which added to her anxiety. Beady sweat oozing(ooze,seep) from forehead, Emily clutched her sleeves to ease her anxiety, and eventually sang a first tone. A hush descended around the crowds and what followed was a wave of thunderous applau