高中英语读后续写：ThroughtheIce课件演示稿

1、Through the ice,读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming. In late summer, the

2、pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum(起泡的浮渣). Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away. When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.” The ice looked solid. No water showed through

3、it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. Youre lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. Itll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond. In the middle of the pond, the ice

4、 gave way with a sudden crack(裂缝)! I stretched out(伸展) my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, ful

5、l of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet,

6、it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice. I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I cant get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath,注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出

7、你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over,A story,when,where,who,what,how,why,Reading for a story,Reading for setting,I,Harry,a pond,lay behind our farm,wore a collar of black mud,a green and bubbl

8、y scum,sometime smelly,unsuitable for swimming,stay away,an inviting place,brothers,skip stones,In summer,In winter,contrast,Events A. The pond in winter was so inviting in winter that I decided to slide across it at the instigation of my brother. B. I strived to climb out of the icy water by myself

9、, but in vain. C. With the ice cracking, I fell into a hole in the ice. D. The pond behind our farm was not suitable for swimming in the summer,D,A,C,B,Reading for plot,urged,hesitated,cracking,shocked,hanging,in vain,exhausted,becoming wet through and dragging me down,willing,agreed,outstretched,tr

10、apped /caught,rooted to the spot,screamed his help,scared,anxious,please,How about Harry,hopeful,nervous,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over,Infer the development from the give

11、n sentences,I was rescued,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over,I was rescued,Raise questions about the development,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran fr

12、om the pond. Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over,I was rescued,Raise questions about the development,What was my response to his leaving,Did he really leave me alone,How was I rescued,What did mum react to the accident,How can the story be ended ratio

13、nally,Inferring the development,Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond,1 What was my response to his leaving? 2 Did he really leave me alone? 3 How was I rescued,Feeling: dismay; disappointment; despair Action: wonder; exclaim,Let “body language” speak,Way: with the help of an oak branch Ac

14、tion: push; wriggle; grab; drag,Let “action” speak,How to express disappointment / dismay,皱眉,Where could he go?” I murmured with a fierce frown,失望地看,I shot/threw/cast a frustrated look at him,摇头,I just shook my head in hopelessness,哭,Tears of grievance (委屈) /rivns/ came into my eyes with the figure

15、of my brother out of sight,Staring at the familiar figure out of sight, I was trembling with rage and chill,颤抖,Let “body language” speak,Tips for writing,_ by a strong sense of nervousness and anxiety, Harry didnt know what to do, his heart _wildly. A flush of frustration _ from the bottom of my hea

16、rt, I froze with terror, trembling in icy water and hard to breathe. The thought of being abandoned/deserted by Harry _ my mind, dismay and despair _ in my heart. The icy water _ my skin with needle-like chill as I was _(湿透) to the skin and _(颤抖). Desperate and exhausted, I was on the verge of_(奔溃).

17、 “Harry. Dont leave me alone.” I _ at the top of the lung. As I looked at his back, I_, “Is he running for help, or is he running way and leaving me alone,Seized/ Consumed/ Overwhelmed,surging,occupying,beating /pounding,accumulated,Show more than tell,pierced,soaked,trembling/shivering,collapse,exc

18、laimed,wondered,How did Harry save me by using an oak branch? push vt. 推动 grab vt. 抓住，攫取 drag vt. 拖，拉，拽，扯 flop vi. 扑通落下 wriggle vi. 蠕动，蜿蜒而行,_ to his stomach, Harry _ the branch before him and _ toward me. When a slender top branch was within _, I grabbed it. Eventually, I was _ from the icy water,Fl

19、opping,pushed,wriggled,reach,dragged,Let “action” speak,Let “action” speak,Seeing Harry _ back to the pond with a long stick in his hand, I was _ with fresh blood. The next few minutes _ his dragging me to the shore inch by inch. Finally _ Harry with a long rope. “_ it.” He _ one end of the rope to

20、me. Desperate to escape from the chilly pond, I _ the lifeline tightly and was eventually _ up to the shore. _ out my arms, I _ the oak branch with all my strength and _ carefully out of the hole inch by inch. I _ eventually,storming,injected,saw/witnessed,came,Grab,threw/cast/ flung,grasped,dragged

21、/pulled,Stretching,seized,survived,crawled,Continuing the story,Paragraph 2: The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over,1 What was my mums first reaction? 2 What lesson did I learn from the experience,That day impressed a lifelong lesson on me Always stay away from poten

22、tial risks and bear in mind that curiosity kills cats,As life has it, not until we encounter something adventurous will we be aware of precious warnings,The pond was still so inviting to young Harry and me, especially when winter came again,I was temporarily comforted and relieved but I would never

23、forget the life-risking experience and never act so blindly again,A story is an accident, which begins with a problem and ends with a solution. A good story often has a good theme. A better story “shows more than tells”. A great story displays details properly,Tips for writing,Para. 1 He turned and

24、ran from the pond. Staring at his familiar figure out of sight, I wondered: “Is he running for help, or is he running away and leaving me sliding to the bottom?” Dismay and scare beat me out of breath. The icy water pierced my skin with needle-like chill. I was anxious to climb out by myself, but co

25、untless previous failures froze me from struggling again. After what seemed to be centuries of fruitless waiting, I was on the verge of collapse. Just at that moment, here dashed Harry with a large, black, V-shaped oak branch. Flopping to his stomach, he pushed the branch before him and wriggled toward me. The moment a slender top branch was within reach, I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry. What a narrow escape! We stumbled home, with my clothes dripping(滴水)and my overshoes squishing(发出嘎吱声) and squirting(喷出) water,Appreciate a possible ver