2020届高考英语作文：江苏高考英语作文考纲解读

1、2020届江苏高考英语作文年份题量分值主题题型2014125汉语热书向表达2015125交通问题书向表达2016125网络投票的积极作用和消极作用书向表达2017125电影票房收入书向表达2018125消费排名现象及观点书向表达2019125对中国传统服装的看法书向表达【考纲解读】2014年江苏高考考试说明（英语科）在典型题示例的书面表达中增加了示例3多了一篇读写任务作文，先阅读后写作，将阅读与写作有机地结合，写作内容是通过对所给材料的 阅读，以约30个词概括上文的主要内容和以约120个词谈谈你对某一事物的想法 。写作要求明确指出作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但

2、不得直接引用原文中的句子。这就是要求考生在阅读相关信息后，进而对所读信息进行加工提炼，在平时积累的相关信息知识之上，按照限定的写作内容和写作要求，完成写作任务。这一新增题型难 度较大，从近几年的模拟题和真题的趋势来看,2020年江苏高考也将延续。近几年江苏卷基本上都是要求考生首先阅读一篇短文，然后用约30个单词概括短文全文或短文某个方面的内容，再按写作内容要点要求用约120个单词就某个主题发表观点。一、如何写好概括（一）图表类概括图表类书面表达在近年的高考中时有出现，主要是一些关于情况调查、生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。对于这类形式的书面表达，考生首先要根据图表前的文字说明，弄清

3、楚图表的性质、内容和规律；然后，从图表的整体着手，认真分析各项数据，概括出事情或事件的规律和特征；最后归纳出主题。写作时要巧妙地引用一些数据来说明主题 要过度发挥。（二）文章类概括【知识梳理】读写任务型写作分为两部分：第一部分 要求用约30个词概括所给短文的要 点，文体主要以议论文，记叙文或说明文为主。第二部分 以约120个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的经历并发表看法。此项旨在着重考查学生学习英语的综合能力，特别是阅读写作以及思维的能力。第一部分要求学生能读懂文章，在读懂的基础上I括文章要点，所以阅读能力和概括能力要求较高。读写任务评分标准（仅显示概括部分）评分说明读写任务的评分建议采用综合法，即

4、：根据总体影响给分。 概要和文章的分值分别为5分和20分。项目赋分评分标准5按照要求概括了原文的主要信息 ，没有增加与原文无关的信息 ，语言结构正 确,行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息。语言结构正确，行文规范。概3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息。语言结构不够 准确，行义/、够规范。括0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息。语言结构不准 确,行义小规范。知识点3:常用文章开头的句式：1) .In this passage, th

5、e writer (author) explains/writes about2) .The passage/article points out/presents/states/compares/introduces/mainly tells us3) .We can learn from the passage that4) .The passage tells us a story of, who Through the story, the author presents an ideathat(记叙+寓意)5) .As can be learned from the passage,

6、6) .The passage compares the benefits of A with B. Some argue in support of A, believing that., while others prefer B, stating that (议论文)7) .The writer sets some examples to tell us知识点4: 30词概括解题技巧：信息获取与加工的过程，读和写的过程。1）定文体：指阅读材料的文体（下同）；不同文体的概括任务型写作”的第一个要求就是对短文进行概括，它是一个获取信息、加工信息的过程需要严谨的思维和准确的表达能力 ，而且要使

7、用自己的语言来表达。因此，概括短文的内容”实际上就是客观简要地转述作者的论点、论据和结论。根据不同文体，我们把它归纳为 主题句+支撑句”的概括模式。不同文体，它的概括模式略有区别：文体主题句支撑句议论文论点（概括性的）补充论证的论据。（对立观点式论据的补充是并列关系，句子间多用whilehowever等：批驳观点式论据的补充是递进关系 ，句 子间多用 what' smoreinwhat' sworsemoreover等。记叙文叙述要素（时间、地点、人物、 事情的过程和 结果）五何“：何日中（when）,何地（where）,何人（who）,何事（what），结果 如何（how）。

8、夹叙夹议型：加上作者的看法或感想等，以第三人称或无人称来 概括。说明文 说明的对象和新闻报道中心句（通常在首段，抓好关键词；现象分析型说明文：现象”，现象形成原因”，解决问题的方法或建议”。例1:对立观点式的议论文We all love new inventions. They are amazing and can change our lives. But have all these developments really improved the quality of our lives?Picture this: you ' re rushing to finish your

9、 homework on the computer. Your mobile phone rings, a QQ message from your friend appears on the screen, and the noise from the television is getting louder and louder. Suddenly the computer goes blank and you lose all your work. Now you have to stay up all night to get it done. How calm and happy d

10、o you feel?Inventions have sped up our lives so much that they often leave us feeling stressed and tired. Why do you think people who live far away from noisy cities, who have no telephones, no cars, not even any electricity often seem to be happier? Perhaps it is because they lead simple lives.解析：本

11、文主要阐述了 发明”改变了我们的生活和生活的质量。第二段讲了发明带来方便的同时,也带来了麻烦，紧接着第三段介绍了发明拥有的缺点。综上所述，我们可以得出本文的大息：参考答案：The author discusses whether new inventions really improve the quality of ourlives（主题句）.While new inventions have brought us much convenience, they can also get us into troubles. （28 words）例2:（记叙文）Sept.4th, 2008 Th

12、ursdayIt was raining outside when I got up early in the morning. It 'too bad, so I had to go to school by bus. I said to myself. It was almost seven o' clockDefore I left home. I put on my raincoat and ran to the bus stop in a hurry, for I thought a lot of people might be waiting there.Hardl

13、y had I gone there when a bus was coming. I got on the bus immediately, hoping it was possible for me to take a seat. I saw an empty seat and took it. But I found an old lady standing behind me. I stood up at once and was about to ask her to take the seat when a young girl in a modern skirt made a d

14、ive for it. I could hardly believe it. I glared at her, thinking, “ Whatbad manners! She cares for nobody but herself. Won t she grow old in the future?解析：上文讲述了作者一次雨天让座给老妇人但被一个穿着时髦的年青女人抢占( make adive for)的故事。作者对此事感到遗憾 (bad manners)和愤怒(glared at her. Won ' t she grow old in the future?) 。参考答案： On

15、 a rainy day, the writer saw a young lady making a dive for a seat on a bus, leavingan old lady standing aside. She felt very angry and sorry about such bad manners in our society. (38words)Technique Guides概括叙事性(narrative)文章主要内容一般应包括四个方面的内容：1 . 什么人 ?(Who)2 . 发生什么事情?(What happened)3 .目的如何/原因是什么?(Why)

16、4 .结果如何/什么启示或教训?(Consequence/Inspiration/Lesson)故事性阅读材料,应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,还可以讲述该故事给你的启示(inspiration) 或其中的一个道理(principle) 。2) 定时态 ：原文过去时,转述也用过去时；现在时则仍然用现在时；3）定人称：一般用第三人称，特殊情况（如：书信）可能用第二或第一人称；4）找主题：读短文，划关键词和关键句，即文中反复出现的一些词和段首（尾）主题句；5）定意图：根据关键词句弄清作者的写作思路和观点态度；6）写概要：开门见山，高度概括句，使用概括性语言，省略细节、重复内容和事例；注意衔

17、接； 千万不要把考生自己的观点写在概要里。在 读写任务”中概括大意的常用方法读写任务属于具有一定开放性的写作命题，它要求学生先通读一篇短文，然后用30字左右概述短文的大意，再按要求进行作文。不少学生在概括短文大意这一环节就觉得难以下笔 据了解，困难之处包括：1）缩不短；2）抓不住重点；3）不知道哪些内容该删减；4）概括不全面。针对以上问题，概括大意常用到的几种方法：1.抓重点词句（抓实义词，选关键词） 主语 （短文中出现最多的主语名词 ，通常就是大意句的主语）关键词的分类 谓语干什么阅读时划出每一句的主语 " 谁怎么样褒：赞成或目TEI形容词观点和态度L贬：反对或否定2 .综合归纳法

18、如写事的文章，记叙文一般包含有时间、地点、人物和事件（主要经过）四要素。找出文 中的四要素，并合理组织它们，这就是主要内容（如果有故事的启示，要再加这一要素）。3 .段意归并法把每段的段意分主次连起来 ，就是文章的主要内容。4 . 取主舍次法即重点归纳法有时一篇文章,其重点部分十分突出 ,而全文的主要内容就在其中。因此,只要抓住这个重点部分的段落大意,再加上一些必要的补充交代,全文的主要内容就归纳出来了。注：在以上四种方法中确定一种方法,通过不同难度和不同体裁的文章,让学生熟练掌握方法的技巧,做到归纳准确全面。最常用的是“段意归并法”,因为高中学生接触的英语文章多数层次较分明 ,各段意思较独立

19、。例 1：总结归纳下列文章的段落大意（ 30 个词左右）ALearning to study is not difficult. The first thing to remember is that you must be willing to learn. It doesn t mean that you must always like the subject. It does mean, however, that you must be willing to learn whatever is necessary. Try to understand why it is import

20、ant and how it will help you now and later. Knowing mathematical facts will be useful in your whole life. Knowing how to spell words makes any kind of writing easier. Sometimes the subject that you think is going to be uninteresting will be attractive when you begin to work on it. Learning things ca

21、n be fun if you can try your best.Here ssome advice for you. Have a certain time each day and a quiet place with good lighting for study, so that you can concentrate on your study without interruptions. Have everything ready before you sit down to study, a dictionary, paper, a pen and books. Be sure

22、 you understand what you should learn before you start. Read carefully and pay special attention to the most important things. When memorizing, find out the main parts and then recite the whole thing. Check your homework after you finish it. Never forget the importance of review and preview.解析：该短文分为

23、两个自然段,第一段的第一个句子提出观点：Learning to study is not difficult.第一段的其余部分都是在阐述分析该观点的前提条件。于是,在这一部分提炼主要意思并用"if" 连接起来就是第一自然段的段落大意： The writer tells us that learning to study is notdifficult if we are willing to learn and enjoy it.第二段非常明显,第一个句子即是本段的主题句。其余部分是具体内容,应删减。但应提醒学生不可照搬,应该用自己的语言换一种说法,如：He also gi

24、ves us advice on how to learnwell.然后 ,把两个自然段的大意归并一起,得出短文的大意：The writer tells us that learning tostudy is not difficult if we are willing to learn and enjoy it. He also gives us advice on how to learn well.最后 ,在概括准确、全面的标准上,学生可以互相交流,感受多种表达,比如：ll find learniIn the author s opinion, if you are willing t

25、o learn and try your best, youdifficult but fun. And some suggestions are put forward to help us to learn well. (33 words)检查：1）词 -名词单复数,主谓一致,时态语态,非谓语动词,单词拼写等；2）句-句型结构 ,短语搭配等；3）标点符号。【例题精讲】【真题拾遗】2014 年江苏高考81. 请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。and “ PK.When we read newspapers, we often come across such Eng

26、lish words as“ AIDS”When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like“ NBA” or “ PM2.5. ”When we speak, weautomatically use words like“ OUT” or -b“ye.By”e English words and expressions like these aregetting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been i

27、ncluded in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing

28、 an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However,others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their

29、function and use in daily life. 写作内容1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;2. 用约120 个单词发表你的观点 , 内容包括:(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇 ;(2)用 2- 3 个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 写作要求 1. 可以支持文中任一观点, 但必须提供理由或论据;2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;4. 不必写标题。 评分标准内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。30 个单词写出上文概要；【答案】支持 :Today, more and more English words find thei

30、r way into the Chinese language. Even theDictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.Generally, I am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of En glish learners is on the rise, it s notdifficult for them to understand these words in Ch

31、inese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use“ IT ” instead of its translation“ xinxi jishu. ” In our global village, we can see that it s not uncommon for one language to bowords from other languages. In English, there are many wor

32、ds borrowed from Latin, French, oreven Chinese. In fact, Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, “ ganbu ” or “ minzhu ” from Japanese.So, it ssafe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.反对 :With English words getting popu

33、lar in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups:“ For ” and “ AgainI tend to take the“ Against ” side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actually polluted ourmother tongue. Sooner or later, many English ac

34、cents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones.And, rules don t tell us how to pronounce such Eng-tluisrhned Chinese words as “ wifi ” and “ Out ” in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for

35、one illustration, while college students take“ By-ebye ” for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “ zaijian. ”In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.【解析】试题分析：

36、本书面表达是一篇议论文写作。今年江苏英语高考首次采用新题型,这也是 2014 年高考大纲中第一次出现。 本书面表达的要求考生首先用 30 个单词概括所给的文字,然后再给出自己的评判。不管考生是赞成还是反对哪一观点 ,都要提供足够的理由或者论据。 首先 ,概括部分考查了学生的概括能力,学生再概括的时候要注意语言的精炼性,要点要齐全。其次,阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了,层次分明。最后, 对自己的观点要作出总结。【亮点说明】 范文用了些词组： 如 in favour of, on some occasions, it ' s not uncommon for , divide into, gi

37、ve rise to, take for granted, be used to 等等。 注重句子的连接： 如 Besides, or, Firstly, Secondly, and, while, not only but also ，句型上也是多变： With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “ For ”

38、 and “ Against. ”这句话用了 with 的复合结构和非谓语动词作状语,In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it mayalso bring about distance between the Chinese people 这句话运用了倒装结构等等。2016 年江苏高考81.请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not o

39、nly cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby ”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer ” competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better u

40、nderstanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer ” competitio

41、n. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question t

42、hat troubles him very much.【写作内容】1 .用约30 个单词写出上文概要；2 .用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用23 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1 .写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2 .作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3 .不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整 ,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。30 个单词写出上文概要；【答案】Possible version one:On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in

43、 it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting

44、events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate votin

45、g, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.(150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many

46、people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.In my opinion, Internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don t want to. S

47、econdly, votinof this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, Internet vot

48、ing, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.（150 words）【解析】试题分析：考查任务型读写。此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投

49、票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来女?处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票。2 .支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。3.理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚。同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠。（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3 .反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响。（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉。（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能

50、会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的词汇及句式，以增加获得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串联词,穿插使用陈述句、祈使句和被动句式，让文章更加丰富多样化。2018年江苏Wj考 81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150词左右的文章。Li Jiang6 July, SunnyOur family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago, Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the in

51、formation I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we ordered the one we wereSu Hua6 July, SunnyThis morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We found a rating of the TopTen Restaurants, and w

52、ent into one of them. We spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I was puzzled. Should I【写作内容】1. 用约 30 个词概括上述利用排名( ratings )进行消费的现象；2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不

53、能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整 ,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。【写作内容】用约 30 个单词写出上文概要；Possible version one:As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different c

54、onsumers.I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buybooks according to the ratings.There is no doubt th