英语写作指导——漫画

1、 Qutang Middle School Writing about cartoonsHow to write about cartoons?1. 读图读图(topics)3. 谋篇谋篇(organization)2.解意解意(theme).读图读图 (topics)education.解意解意(Theme)1. 角度（角度（Angle）: positive negative. 主旨（主旨（Theme）(to the point )The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.E

2、xample 角度角度comparison主旨主旨educationinequality.谋篇谋篇 -OrganizationStep1. Description Describe what you have seen in the picture briefly.Step2. Analysis Figure out the inner meaning of the picture.Step3. Solutions Give your ideas about the picture.a country boycryinghope for educationa city boyenjoy adv

3、antagesof modern educationStep 1 DescriptionAs is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,In the picture, there are Sentence structures:a country boycryinghope for educationa city boyenjoy advantagesof modern educationAs is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the pict

4、ure,In the picture, there are a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, hoping eagerly for school education. On the contrary, the city boy on the right is enjoying advantages of modern education . As is vividly shown in the picture,Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results)Ind

5、ication:education inequalityFacts:be forced to leave school;suffer fromlow standards of;comparatively;better chancesResults:difficult to keep pace with city children;worsen the problemSentence structures:1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society.2.It seems very ridiculous

6、 thatHowever, it is very common in our daily life.3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that5. Indicate:education inequalityFacts:be forced to leave school;suffer fromlow standards of;comparativelybetter chancesResul

7、ts:difficult to keep pace with city children;worsen the problemSentence structures:1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society.2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is very common in our daily life.3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of4.The picture indi

8、cates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that The picture indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often forced to leave school due to poverty. Even those who manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standard

9、s of education. Comparatively, city children have much better chances to receive good education. (results) Thus, it is difficult for country children to keep pace with city ones, which in turn worsens the problem. Step 3 Solutions Give your opinions about how to solve the problemthe governmentall ci

10、tizensindividual(从大到小从大到小)be aware ofOnly in this waysocial fairnessharmonious society(从意识到行动从意识到行动)1.As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view,2. It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to3. The government shou

11、ld make laws to4. We should raise peoples awareness of5. Everyone should make great efforts to Only in this way can weSentence structures: Can you think of some sentence structures to form your last paragraph?Sentence structures:1. As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view,2. It

12、 is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to3. The government should make laws to4. We should raise peoples awareness of5. Everyone should make great efforts to the governmentall peoplebe aware ofOnly in this waysocial fairnessharmoniou

13、s society From my point of view, to solve this problem, the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in the countryside. Moreover, all citizens in the society should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever they can to help. Only in this way can we have mo

14、re social fairness and thus have a more harmonious society.Whatever the picture is, just remember:Proper descriptionExact analysisReasonable solutionsOnly if you keep these rules in mind can you make it.Conclusion: 下图描述的是目前社会上所存在的一种社会现象：酒后驾车。下图描述的是目前社会上所存在的一种社会现象：酒后驾车。请描述这幅漫画并谈谈你认为应采取哪些措施禁止酒后驾车。请描述这

15、幅漫画并谈谈你认为应采取哪些措施禁止酒后驾车。StepsContentsDescription (Para 1)Analysis (Para 2)Solution(Para 3)One possible version: The picture describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture, a driver is caught by a policeman because his car has “kissed” the wall. He has

16、drunk so much that he cant stand normally. How can he drive a car in such bad condition? Drunk driving is a great danger both to our society and to drivers. Its time we took some measures to forbid drinking before driving. We should strengthen the traffic security education to raise peoples awareness towards safety. In addition, the government should make stricter laws about it and punish drunk drivers severely. In my opinion, the approaches above should be followed and gradually spread out all over the country. Only in this way can peo