高考英语作文公开课优秀课文讲解

1、高考英语作文公开课优秀课文讲解I Shall Not Live In Vain-Emily DickinsonIf I can stop one heart from breaking,I shall not live in vain;If I can ease one life the aching,Or cool one pain,Or help one fainting robinUnto his nest again,I shall not live in vain.Daily SpeechWhats the theme of the poem?cartoonpostergraphph

2、oto漫画作文Lets develop our writing skills in cartoons!What is a good writing？ Content: * everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical

3、 mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)How to write based on cartoons?1. 读图(topics)3. 谋篇(organization)2.解意(theme).读图：Topics of cartoonsTopics of cartoonsEnvironmental problemsAttitudes towards lifeSocial phenomenon.解意(Theme)-to the point

4、 Attention: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读！1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle) . 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme)The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.Example 1角度comparison主旨educationinequalityExample 2角度criticize主旨Students and parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting

5、 psychological quality and moral standards.Judge the themes of the followingcartoons as quickly as possible.Lets have a competitionCome on! Choose me! 213546People lack communication.Picture1Protect animals.No buying, no killing.Picture2People cant afford heavy medical fees. Picture 3One false move

6、may lose the game.Think twice before we do anything.Picture 4Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.Picutre5Picture6Children suffer from too heavy burden. .谋篇 -OrganizationStep1. Description Describe what you have seen in the picture briefly.Step2. Analysis Figure out the inner meaning

7、of the picture.Step3. Solutions Give your ideas about the picture.发现问题解决问题分析问题Step 1 DescriptionTo what degree should we describe the cartoon?Properly, brieflyExamplea country boycryinglong for educationa city boyenjoy all the benefitsof educationAs is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in

8、 the picture,In the picture, there are Sentence structures:a country boycryinglong for educationa city boyenjoy all the benefitsof modern educationAs is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,In the picture, there are a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, longing e

9、agerly for school education. In contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits of modern education . As is vividly shown in the picture,Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results) Clues：描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。(referring to the given Chinese words)Indicate:education inequ

10、alityFacts:drop out of schoolsuffer fromlow standards ofcomparativelybetter opportunitiesResults:lower enrollment rates in rural countryworsen the problemSentence structures:1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society.2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is very commo

11、n in our daily life.3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that5. Indicate:education inequalityFacts:drop out of schoolsuffer fromlow standards ofcomparativelybetter opportunitiesResults:lower enrollment rates in rura

12、l countryworsen the problemSentence structures:1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society.2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, it is very common in our daily life.3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of4.The picture indicates that we/ Nowadays, it is a com

13、mon phenomenon that The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities. Comp

14、aratively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, schools in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem. Step 3 Solutions (your opinions /suggestions)the governmentall citizensI

15、ndividual(从大到小)be aware ofOnly in this waysocial justiceharmonious society(从意识到行动)As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view,2. It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to3. The government should make laws to4. We

16、 should raise peoples awareness of5. Everyone should make great efforts to Only in this way can weSentence structures: Can you think of some sentence structures to form your last paragraph?Sentence structures:1. As far as Im concerned, /In my opinion, /From my point of view,2. It is high time we too

17、k some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to3. The government should make laws to4. We should raise peoples awareness of5. Everyone should make great efforts to the governmentall peoplebe aware ofOnly in this waysocial justiceharmonious society From my poi

18、nt of view, to solve this problem, the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Moreover, all citizens in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever they can to help. Only in this way can we have more social justice and t

19、hus have a more harmonious society.Whatever the picture is, just remember:Proper descriptionAccurate analysisReasonable solutionsOnly if we keep these rules in mind can we make it.Conclusion: 表达技巧巧用衔接词引用公式化语言转换优化优美句型1) 引用公式化语言Part 1 Describe the picturePart 2 Interpret the picturePart 3 Give your op

20、inions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the picture1. As is described / illustrated / conveyed / revealed / shown in the picture, 2. The picture is talking about / shows3. As can be seen in the picture above, 4. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon 5. The picture above is about Part 2

21、Interpret the picture1. It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.2. It is the exact reflection of3. The picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that4. Simple as it is, the drawing sets us thinking too much.5. This is a satirical / ironical

22、 (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon that our animal friends, frogs, are in great danger.Part 3 Give your opinions1. From where I stand, it is time that some effective measures should be taken to solve the problems.2. As far as I am concerned, / Personally, / In my opin

23、ion, / From my point of view, / On my part, / On a personal note3. Through the above analysis, I believe4. Judging from what have been argued above, it is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to2) 巧用衔接词1) 表示平行或选择关系 as well as, together with, not onlybut also., rather than2) 表示转折关系

24、 however, in spite of, otherwise, while3) 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand.4) 表示因果关系 therefore, as a result (of), owing to, due to, thanks to 5）表示时间、顺序关系 firstly, secondly, , for one thing . for another, eventually6）表示递进、强调关系whats more, in addition, worse still, moreo

25、ver, furthermore, above all7）表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on8）表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion1) _education is beneficial to us students. 不可否认，教育对我们学生是有 益的。2) _ education is very important to us. 全世界都知道，教育对我 们是非常重要的。3

26、) _education concerning quality leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问，我们有关素质的教育是令人不满意。3) 优美句型There is no denying thatIt is universally acknowledged thatThere is no doubt that4) _using the frogs to kill harmful insects _it wont create any pollution. 使用青蛙捕捉害虫的优点是它不会制造任何 污染。5) _ people found what enviro

27、nment meant to us. 直到多 年之后人 们才发现环境对我们来说意 味着什么。 _people find what environment meant to us.6) _we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，经不起浪费。An advantage ofis thatIt was not until many years later thatNot until many years later didSo precious is time that7) _always stay healthy. 只有借着做运动，我们才会始终保持健康。8) _, I

28、m still unable to find a suitable place to live in. 虽然我已经很努力 了，但是我依然找不到合适的居住地。9) _ignore the value of reading. 我们 绝对不能忽略读书的价值。 10) _that the authorities concerned _ proper steps to solve the environmental problems. 该是有关 当局采取适当的措施来解决环境问题的时候了。11) We _ lay _much emphasis on education. 我们在怎么强调教育也不为过。Onl

29、y by taking exercise will weHardworking as I amOn no account can weIt is time took can nevertoo12) _good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in our life. 显然，良好的人际关系在我们的生活中扮演着重要的作用。13) We should _protect our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的去保护我 们的环境。14) Protecting frogs _protecting our environme

30、nt. 保护青蛙与保护环境息息相关。15) _some effective measures, we can finally protect the earth. 因为一些有效的措施，我们最终才能保护地球。It is obvious thatspare no efforts tois closely related toThanks to16) _ we are admitted to universities. 过不了多久我们就会被大学录取。17) _Mo Yan has won the Nobel Prize in literature. 我印象最深的就是莫言获得了诺贝尔文学奖。18) _

31、we have to protect frogs _they are friends of man. 我们必须保护青蛙的原因是它们是人类的朋友。19) _effective actions we take, _life we will live. 我们的措施越有效，我们的生活就会更好。 It will not be long beforeWhat impresses me most is thatThe reason whyis thatThe morethe better 下图描述的是目前社会上所存在的一种社会现象：酒后驾车。请描述这幅漫画并谈谈你认为应采取哪些措施禁止酒后驾车。Lets try it!StepsContentsDescription (Para 1)Analysis (Para 2)Solution(Para 3)“kiss” the wall; is caught by; drink so much;cant stand normallya great danger;forbid drinking;raise awareness towards safety;make stricter laws s