【课件】高考英语读后续写真题讲解课件 2021年06月新高考1卷

1、读后续写真题2021.6新高考1卷1试题再现2试题分析3写作思路4范文赏析目录CONTENTS2021试题再现历年高考英语读后续写真题分析01 A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make

2、French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put

3、 some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going sm

4、oothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the l

5、id starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touc

6、hed the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Para2 The twins carried the b

7、reakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 2021试题分析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析02on Mothers dayWhenWhereAt homeWhoThe twins, Jeff and JannaMom, DadMain IdeaThe twins were preparing the breakfast but they messed it up and burned the finger.WhatMain IdeaWhythey wanted to surprise their mom HowJeff noticed steam sh

8、ooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.(1) 读大意，抓中心主题 双胞胎Jeff和Jenna准备在母亲节为母亲做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的早餐，母亲节当天，他们先煮粥，然后把面包放进鸡蛋和牛奶的混合液中。但由于火太大，面包焦了，在第二块面包将要煎成功的时候，沸

9、腾的粥把火熄灭了，厨房里一片狼藉，Jeff的手也烫伤了，Jenna帮他用冷水冲手的时候闻到了面包烧焦的味道。(2)读人物，找续写人物 读续写两段的首句可知，Dad ,Mom和twins是续写内容的关键人物(3)读时态，选续写时态 通读全文可知，该故事主要是用一般过去时讲述的，故续写内容的时态也应一致。(4) 读结构，辨划分方式 弄清故事的结构特点及表现形式，选择合适的方式划分段落，常用的有4：以时空变化划分(指时间和地点)；以人物思想感情的变化来划分；按记叙内容的变化来划分；按描述角度的变化、事情发展的阶段来划分。 再看回真题，一开始，这对双胞胎在母亲节前就在策划给母亲的惊喜，而后是在母亲节当

10、天，两人在厨房为母亲准备早餐。而由续写两段首句可知，续写第一段这对Twins还是在厨房里，第二段是在楼上妈妈的卧室里，人物所处地点不断变化，由此可知, 题目是按照时空变化来划分的。 而我们在构思续写内容时也应在这两个地点的基础上进行拓展。(5) 读语言，定风格特色 挖掘文本语言表达风格，模仿原文语言写句子。使续写部分的语言风格与原文的风格相一致，以促进语言协同。此外，如果原文有较多对话, 续写也可出现对话；如原文没有对话, 尽量少用对话形式。elements1. personJenna & Jeff (twins), mother, father2. place3.time4. What ha

11、ppened5. How to doAt homeAt 6:00 am in the morningThe twins wanted to surprise their mother on Mothers DayThe twins planned to cook breakfast for their motherAction Vs. EmotionExcited 1.The twins planned a breakfast.confident2. The twins thought they knew the job. under control 4. The bread got burn

12、t.5. The porridge became a mess.panicked6. The second bread turned black. Losing confidence3. The beginning went well.fineWhat was the rest story?solutionA messClean itThe breakfast was ruinedCook it all over againOver-confidentReadjust the situationNot sophisticated in houseworkStart to learn.2021写

13、作思路历年高考英语读后续写真题分析03The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Gratitude to mothers hard work.There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.Housework needs to be learned, mastered and shared by every family member.Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had tu

14、rned black as well. ThemeHow pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. Implication from the two sentencesPara1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. . What woul

15、d the twins say to their mother?Would their father help them out?What would Father do in order to help ?Was the situation at that moment?What did they understand and realize from this incident?2021范文赏析历年高考英语读后续写真题分析04Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Thei

16、r father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again.

17、In between, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 oclock, every thing was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing

18、 the house chores. Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother. Their mother beamed from ear to ear, praising and appreciating childrens nice act of gesture. However, the twins lowered their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didnt turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence, confessing “Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job. ” Jeff cut i