初中英语写作教学专题讲座课件

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英语写作是英语综合能力的具体运用是对学生进行全面考核的8七年级“写”的分级目标（三级目标）1、能正确使用常用的标点符号；2、能使用简单的图表和海报等形式传达信息；3、能参照范例写出或回复简单的问候卡和邀请卡；4、能用短语或句子描述系列图片，编写简单的故事。规范→准确七年级“写”的分级目标（三级目标）规范→准确9八年级“写”的分级目标（四级目标）1、能正确使用标点符号；2、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图片写出说明；3、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、规则；4、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的方式起草和修改作文。规范→准确→流畅八年级“写”的分级目标（四级目标）规范→准确→流畅10九年级“写”的分级目标（五级目标）1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改；3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；4、能简单描述人物或事件；5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。规范→准确→流畅→得体九年级“写”的分级目标（五级目标）规范→准确→流畅→得体11Whatisagoodcomposition?Whatisagoodcomposition?126分6分1314分14分14考生作文21212分考生作文21212分15考生作文315分考生作文315分163分3分17WRITINGspellinghandwritinggrammarpunctuationcreativityvocabularyWhatisthemostimportant?WRITINGspellinghandwritinggra18中考作文评分标准：第一档：（15---13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。中考作文评分标准：第一档：（15---13分）19导致学生扣分的问题：导致学生扣分的问题：20Theyhavedicidedtotryagain.Sheleavedherhometownwhenshewasyoung.Thisbookspentmetenyuan.Isthereanythingyouhavedifficultwith？词汇掌握不牢Theyhavedicidedtotryagain21Thereisasmallboylikesplayingfootball.Everythingaregoingverywell.Ithink

dosomesportsisveryimportantforus.语法错误Everythingaregoingverywel22Hebybiketoschool.

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汉语思维方式写作Heencouragedmetol23审题不准MysummervacationSummervacationiscomingthenextmonth.IhopeIcanhaveagoodtime.Mymotherisbusyeveryday,shegetsupearlyanddoeshouseworkandthengoestowork.Intheeveningwhenshecomesback,shehastocookforme.Sheisreallytired.Ilovemymother,soIwillhelphertodosomehousethissummer.审题不准Mysummer24标点符号使用不当Shelikesdancing、skating、surfing、boatingandswimming.Hesaidhecouldplayvolleyball,basketball……"Ihaveadream,"saidMartin。标点符号使用不当Shelikesdancing、skat25Ihopeyoucansendittomeassoonaspossible.Iloveyouverymuchandhopeyoucanhelpme.

语言表达不得体Playingsportscanchangestudents’healthandstudy.语言表达不得体Playingsportscanchan26词汇贫乏Myschoolisinthewestofthecity.Youcaneasilyrememberthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.Thepartyisagreatsuccess.Myschoolliesinthewestoftheschool./You’llhavenotrouble/difficultyrememberingthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.Thepartyisagreatsuccess.词汇贫乏27书写不规范书写不规范28Howtoimproveourteaching?Howtoimproveourteaching?291.Handwritingactivities2.Sentencewritingactivities3.Paragraphwritingactivities1.Handwritingactivities30中考阅卷感受：1.阅卷时间短；2.阅卷的速度快；3.阅卷老师的心理：给分中庸

最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生中考阅卷感受：最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生31如何打动和取悦阅卷老师？以卷面感人以内容动人卷面，体现了一种态度如何打动和取悦阅卷老师？以卷面感人32有一种态度叫“我出类拔萃”有一种态度叫“我出类拔萃”33有一种态度叫“我一丝不苟”有一种态度叫“我一丝不苟”34有一种态度叫“我努力做到最好”有一种态度叫“我努力做到最好”35有一种态度叫“你看着办”有一种态度叫“你看着办”36还有一种态度叫“恶心不死你”还有一种态度叫“恶心不死你”371）书写的规格（1）应按照字母的笔顺和字母在三格中应占的位置书写。（2）每个字母都应稍向右倾斜，约为5°，斜度要一致。

1）书写的规格38（3）大写字母都应一样高，占上面两格，但不顶第一线。（4）小写字母a，c，e，m，n，o，r，s，u，v，w，x，z写在中间的一格里，上下抵线，但都不出格。（3）大写字母都应一样高，占上面两格，但不顶第一线。（4）小39（5）小写字母b，d，h，k，l的上端顶第一线，占上面两格。（6）小写字母i和j的点、f和t的上端都在第一格中间，f和t的第二笔紧贴在第二线下（5）小写字母b，d，h，k，l的上端顶第一线，占上面两格。40（7）小写字母fgjpqy的下端抵第四线

（8）小写字母a，d，h，i，k，l，m，n，t和u，它们的提笔是一个上挑的小圆钩，不能写成锐角（7）小写字母fgjpqy的下端抵第四线（8）小41（9）书写单词时，字母与字母之间的间隔要均匀、适当，不要凑得过紧，也不要离得太远

（10）书写句子时，单词之间必须有适当的距离，一般以空出一个小写字母a的宽度为宜（11）标点符号要写在一定的位置上（9）书写单词时，字母与字母之间的间隔要均匀、适当，不要凑得42注意：英语中无顿号、

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3.ThiswordprocessingprogramismorecomplexthantheoneIusedtwoyearsago.初中英语写作教学专题讲座课件52例句那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。第一步：找出句子主干男孩出去例句第一步：找出句子主干男孩出去53第二步：确定主干的相关词汇 那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。boy,goout第二步：确定主干的相关词汇 那个16岁大的男孩子没54第三步：翻译句子主干那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。Theboywentout.考虑：时态语态第三步：翻译句子主干那个16岁大的男孩子没有55第四步：添加修饰成分The16-year-oldboywentout.The16-year-oldboywentoutwithoutturningoffthelights. 那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。__________________________第四步：添加修饰成分The16-year-oldb56Makingsentencesbygivenwords;Writingsentencesforthepictures;Reorderingthesentences;Completingsentences;

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It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.1.Ourparentsreallywishus65句式多变化句式多变化66Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.Wemetattheschoolgateand67Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcr68肯定VS否定在Mary的帮助下，我取得了成功。WithMary’shelp,Isucceeded.IcouldneversucceedwithoutMary’shelp.肯定VS否定69Weneedtohelppeople.Thepeopleareintrouble.Weneedtohelpthepeoplewhoareintrouble.运用从句。运用从句Weneedtohelppeople.Thepe70Theearthgoesaroundthesun.ItisafactthattheearthgoesaroundthesunTheearthgoesaroundthesun.71强调句；Wecanachieveourdreamsbyworkinghard.

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强调句；72加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEn733.Paragraphwritingactivities:

3.Paragraphwritingactivities74初中英语写作教学专题讲座课件75SmokingWriteacompositiononthetopicof“Smoking”SmokingWriteacompositionon76Tothinkfreelyandputdownallpossibleideasthatcometotheirminds.BrainstormingTothinkfreelyandputdowna77badforhealthcauselungcancerexpensivebadfornon-smokerspollutetheaircausefiredangerouswastemoneysmokinginpublicplaceindoorsmokingsmokinginpublicplacesbadforhealth78Mappingtoselecttheusefulideas

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Conclusion/OpinionTopi104写作注意的几个问题：1.尽量使用简单句，要牢记“避繁就简”原则，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，适当使用连词，如：and,so,or,but,What’smore;What’sworse,notonly…butalso,neither…nor等。4.字体一定要工整漂亮。写作注意的几个问题：1.尽量使用简单句，要牢记“避繁就105Homework现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点不一，请谈谈你对学生上网的观点。

Homework现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点106示例2初中英语写作教学专题讲座课件107词组短语法词组短语法108写不出好作文？不会写句子纯翻译，不注重语法不会用出彩的词组句型写不出好作文？不会写句子纯翻译，不注重语法不会用出彩的词组109词组&短语Helikesplayingbasketball.打篮球playbasketball喜欢做什么事情likedoingsth.他词组&短语Helikesplayingbasketba110请你建议带一些礼物advisesb.todosth.bringsomepresentsIadviseallofyoutobringsomepresents.请你建议带一些礼物advisesb.todosth111为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“Howtobehavewell?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景无需描述）短文要求如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两个个人看法。要求：1.不要逐词翻译。2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：dirtyobeypromiseBehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothers._________________________________________________________beontimekeeppromiseslietosb.bepolitetoothersgivesb.ahandtrafficrulesmakenoiseStep1:找词组为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办be112beontimelietosb.bepolitetoothersgivesb.ahandtrafficrulesmakenoiseStudentsshouldandDon’t

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Step2:写句子orthrowrubbishinpublic.keeppromises.beontimelietosb.bepolite113Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Studentsshouldbeontimean114First，……….Second，………Third，……..Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.Howto…….Howtobehavewell?Step3:加结构First，……….Second，………Third，…115Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.First，Second，Third，BehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothersStudentsshouldbeontimean116并列：and,also,notonly……butalso,neither…nor,Either….or,转折：but,however,ontheotherhand因果：becauseof，therefore，asaresult,重要性：firstofall,themostimportantis,总结：allinall,aboveall,afterall表自己观点：inmyopinion

递进：besides,What’smoreStep4:加关系词并列：and,also,notonly……buta117Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions..First，Second

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What’smore,becauseofkeepingawayfromtrafficaccident.notonlybutalsoStudentsshouldbeontimean118Studentsshouldnotonlybeontimebutalsokeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions..First，Second

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Allinall,Ithinksmileisanotherkeytobehavewell,becausewherethereisasmile,thereisafriend.Behavingwellisthesecretof120总结写作文步骤：1.找词组2.用词组写句子（没有语法错误）3.结构4.关系词5，利用名言或从句，使文章出彩。总结写作文步骤：1.找词组2.用词组写句子（没有语法错误）3121示例3视频示例3视频122批改批改123Thesummerholidaycomes.Moreandmorekidsbecomeunhappybecausetheyhavetoomanyactivitiestodo.Thechildrendon’thaveanylessonstodayfourafternoonsaweek.Let’sallgotheretoplay.Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.Weallknowitisimportantforkidstolearnhowtorelax.Itisnotgoodforbothkidsandtheirparents.ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroups.Youcangotoplaysoccer,playbasketball.WhenIgrowup，Iwilltrytomakethemlivemorehappily.helppoorchildrenliveabetterlife.Whatahardlifemyparentslive.（125词）Thesummerholidayc124Thesummerholidaycomes.Moreandmorekidsbecomeunhappybecausetheyhavetoomanyactivitiestodo.Thechildrendon’thaveanylessonstodayfourafternoonsaweek.Let’sallgotheretoplay.Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.Weallknowitisimportantforkidstolearnhowtorelax.Itisnotgoodforbothkidsandtheirparents.ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroups.Youcangotoplaysoccer ,playbasketball.WhenIgrowup，Iwilltrytomakethemlivemorehappily.helppoorchildrenliveabetterlife.Whatahardlifemyparentslive.（125词）happymoreSotheymoredosports.Theytodosports.Theykeephealthy.healthstudy.studentsTheyortheyTheywillSportsgoodtheynow!Iscoming9分Thesummerholidayc125HowshouldteacherscorrectwritingCorrectallthemistakes?NO.Howshouldteacherscorrectwr126对缺乏自信的孩子更需要激励Over-correction.Correctjustonetypeofmistakes.对缺乏自信的孩子更需要激励Over-correction127Howshouldteacherscorrectwriting2.ToagreeonalistofwrittensymbolsHowshouldteacherscorrectwr128统一批改符号，例如：

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1.Thereisamuttonandabuttonatthebottomofthebottle.2.Thereisaflyflyingoverthefryingpanandcryingforhelp.3.Heiskindofkind.积累一些能激发学生兴趣的句子或

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自编一些有意思的句子140Hewasacatinthepan.(误译)他是盘子中的一只猫。(正译)他是个叛徒。(误译)一只小鸟将此消息告诉我。(正译)消息灵通的人士将此消息告诉我。Alittlebirdtoldmethenews.Hewasacatinthepan.(误译)他是141Thatthatisnotthatthat.Isawasawsawingasaw.Acancancananothercan.Thatthatisnotthatthat.142积累：个人作文积累摘抄积累积累：个人作文积累143

积累常用的表达方式，形成正确的表达习惯。

有的表达方式结构固定，出现率高，使用时不需进行多少再加工，有利于学生对其进行整体记忆，使用较为方便。如：Doingsth.is….It’sagoodwaytodosth.IfIwereyou,….Wouldyouliketo…?Youaresupposedto….Iusedtobe….It’s+adj+todosth.

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英语写作是英语综合能力的具体运用是对学生进行全面考核的160七年级“写”的分级目标（三级目标）1、能正确使用常用的标点符号；2、能使用简单的图表和海报等形式传达信息；3、能参照范例写出或回复简单的问候卡和邀请卡；4、能用短语或句子描述系列图片，编写简单的故事。规范→准确七年级“写”的分级目标（三级目标）规范→准确161八年级“写”的分级目标（四级目标）1、能正确使用标点符号；2、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图片写出说明；3、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、规则；4、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的方式起草和修改作文。规范→准确→流畅八年级“写”的分级目标（四级目标）规范→准确→流畅162九年级“写”的分级目标（五级目标）1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改；3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；4、能简单描述人物或事件；5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。规范→准确→流畅→得体九年级“写”的分级目标（五级目标）规范→准确→流畅→得体163Whatisagoodcomposition?Whatisagoodcomposition?1646分6分16514分14分166考生作文21212分考生作文21212分167考生作文315分考生作文315分1683分3分169WRITINGspellinghandwritinggrammarpunctuationcreativityvocabularyWhatisthemostimportant?WRITINGspellinghandwritinggra170中考作文评分标准：第一档：（15---13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。中考作文评分标准：第一档：（15---13分）171导致学生扣分的问题：导致学生扣分的问题：172Theyhavedicidedtotryagain.Sheleavedherhometownwhenshewasyoung.Thisbookspentmetenyuan.Isthereanythingyouhavedifficultwith？词汇掌握不牢Theyhavedicidedtotryagain17