【学增分技巧】-《三维设计》高考英语(江苏专用)大一轮复习-配套写作专题ppt课件：6书面表达常见错误及对策

写作进阶提升之六写作进阶提升——书面表达常见错误及对策1常见错误有以下几个方面：1.审题错误抓不住文章的所要写的要点例文

（1）中国学生通常过生日的方式，如生日聚会、生日礼物、生日祝福等；（2）我认为有意义的庆祝方式以及这样做的目的或理由。2Chinese

BirthdayFirst

let

me

show

you

something

about

theChinese

birthday.

Usually

it

includes

threeparts:

party,

gift

and

good

rewards.

On

thebirthday,

we

often

wear

our

favorite

clothes

,which

makes

us

very

happy.

We

alsowillorganize

a

birthday

party

in

the

evening.Atthe

party,

we’ll

prepare

lots

of

delicious

foods,especially

the

birthday

cake.

Then

we

willeatthe

cake.

We

sing

and

dance

together.

Atlast,

we’ll

take

the

gift

to

the

person

who

wasborn

on

that

day.

In

the

gift

there

will

be

acard,

on

which

are

our

best

wishes.32.格式错误不熟悉常见应用文的格式需要熟练掌握的应用文有：书信、日记、通知（分书面通知和口头通知）4Receiver’s

addressDateDear

…,Body

of

the

letter…Sincerely/Truly

Yours,Writer’sname5Saturday,

February

14th.

2007,

SunnyThe

body

of

the

your

diary…6Boys

and

girls,

may

I

have

your

attention,please?

/

Attention

please,

everyone.………That’s

all.

Thank

you!口头通知书面通知Notice……Student’s

Union73.词法错误用词重复如：return

back;repeat

again;Chinesestudents

in

China

have

our

own

way

tocelebrate

birthday.用词不当如：把bring写成“take”，“get”，“fetch”等把欢迎某人到我校写成welcome

youtovisit

our

school正确的说法是：You

are

welcome

to

visitour

school.或Welcome

to

our

school.83)词性混淆不及物动词当成及物动词：例如：is

happened/is

belonged

to/come(to)the

city/return

(to)the

place把形容词用作动词如：例如：This

will

happy

the

foreign

visitors.Please

ready

a

small

gift.不可数名词用成可数名词：例如:make

a

great

progresswhat

a

fine

weatherday!9D.形容词和副词的使用错误例如：work

hardlytalk

friendlyDon’t

take

it

serious.4）虚词错误冠词的漏用和误用

例如：Send

him

a

email.介词使用错误例如：They

had

to

wait

the

bus

underthe

hot

sun.under

the

sun:普天之下105）拼写错误把礼物present写成peasant

–parents,pleasant,如把present写成parents那行文就成了please

bring

along

your

small

parentsfor

this

purpose.Remember

to

wrap

itup.sign

your

name

and

write

a

fewwords

of

good

wishes.11注意同形词:model-medal-mental-metaleffort-effect-offer-affectabroad-board-broad-aboardstrict-strike-stick注意易拼错单词：modern,government,destroy,true,official等124.

句法错误1）连词错误如：because

与

so;

although/though

与

but同时使用。或两个句子之间没有连词，如：HelikesEnglish,

I

like

Maths.2)

汉式英语如：“晚会将在主楼花园顶上举行。”写成”

Theparty

will

in

the

main

building

roof

gardenheld.”“操场上有五个学生在踢足球。”写成

“On

theplayground

there

are

five

students

playfootball.”把There

will

be

a

party写成There

will

have

aparty.133）句子前后不一致学生常常容易在文章中的时态、语态、人称、主谓一致出现错误。如：The

place

can

solve

the

problem.The

book

was

disappeared

last

week.Mr

Smith,

with

his

wife,havearrived

in

Shanghai.I

will

go

to

visit

you

as

soon

as

I

willreturn

to

China.You

should

work

hard.

If

not,

wewill

fail

to

pass

the

exam.14四．对策

１．词汇是保证，语法是基础，句型是关键

２．如何写好句子写好句子有许多方法和技巧，谈谈句子的基本结构及与汉语的一些区别。A.确定主语英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语（祈使句除外）。动手写句子首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别。其中

几点请学生注意：15A.汉语中的主语不一定是英文中的主语。例如：北京八月多雨。英文中不说“Beijing

rainsmuch

in

August.”而说“It

rains

muchinBeijing

in

August.”英文中主谓语有时需要倒装，汉语则不需要。例如：Only

then

did

I

realize

how

importantit

is

to

studyEnglish16B.动词是关键英文中没有动词就构不成句子，但英语动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面。注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用。注意非延续性动词的用法。注意一些不可用作被动语态的动词。注意一些动词的特殊用法。注意那些汉译意思相同实际用法不同的词。注意动词的时态及时态的一致。注意部分常用动词及动词词组的辨异，否则，差之毫厘，谬以千里，以下是一些容易混淆的动词词组。17be

tired

of

因……烦恼be

tired

from

因……感到累wear

穿（状态）put

on

穿（动作）be

compared

with

与……比较be

compared

to

把……比作be

made

from

由……制作（改变本质）be

made

up

of

由……构成be

made

of

由……制成(不改变本质)find

找（结果）look

for找（动作）look

at看（动作）

see

看（结果）be

used

toused

to习惯于过去常常183．用好“启、承、转。合”的词语和句子1）

“启”---创造良好开端常用表达

“

启”

的过渡词语和词组有:

in

thefirst

place,

first

of

all,

firstly,generally

speaking,

to

start

with,

tobegin

with等。常用表达

“

启”

的句型有:

as

is

known

toall/

as

we

all

know;

as

the

proverbsays;

it

is

often

said

that…;

as

a

newways

of…;

there

have

been

manychanges…;

it

is

clear/

obvious等。

19例句：（天津）As

we

all

know,we

are

what

weeat.Therefore,it’s

very

important

forus

to

form

healthy

eating

habits.(北京）It’s

often

said

that

allworkwithout

play

makes

Jack

a

dullboy.As

the

proverb

says,

no

pains,

nogains.202）“承”---顺势承上启下常用表达“承”的过渡词语和词组有：

secondly;in

addition;besides;furthermore;moreover;what

is

more;what

is

worse,for

example;in

otherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,at

the

same

time,no

doubt等21常用表达

“启”的句型有:compared

withthat…;

as

far

as

I

know;

It

is

truethat…;

It

is

known

to

all

that…;

It

canbe

easily

proved

that…;

the

reasonwhy….;

There

is

no

doubt

that…;

It

isno

wonder

that…;

what

is

more

seriousis

that…等。例句：（湖北）It

is

known

to

us

that

somestudents

cheat

in

examination

at

school.(福建) As

far

as

I

know,Englishlearning

should

start

from

childhood.223）“转”---巧妙转折过渡常用表达“转”的过渡词语和词组有：but,however,on

the

other

hand,on

thecontrary,in

any

case,or,or

else,while,

despite,

in

spite

of,

regardlessof,

instead常用表达

“转”的句型有: Every

coin

hastwo

sides.

But

for…,

I

would

never…;another

example

is

that…;

Takingeverything

into

consideration;

That’swhy

I

feel

that…等23例句：But

for

his

help,I

would

neversucceed

in

my

experiment.Taking

everything

into

consideration,you

have

to

work

much

hard

thanbefore

to

win

the

competition.244）“合”---完美结束全文常用表达“合”的过渡词语和词组有：in

aword,in

general,in

short,aboveall,finally,in

conclusion,at

last,insummary,as

a

result,above

all,on

thewhole等常用表达

“合”的句型有: something

mustbe

done

to….;

it

can

be

safely

concludedfrom…

that…;

in

my

opinion;

we

candraw

the

conclusion

that…

it

may

bebriefly

summed

up

as

follows等25例句

We

can

draw

the

conclusionthatgood

manners

arise

from

politeness

andrespect

for

others.Something

must

be

done

/somemeasures

must

be

taken

to

improve

ourenvironment.It

may

be

briefly

summed

up

asfollows:

it’s

high

time

that

ourgovernment

took

some

measures

toimprove

our

environment26A.”启“

根据所给提示句型完成下列句子：First

of

all,

you

should…首先你们必须在用餐前洗手。3.2.

Some

of

us

think

that

it’sbetterto…我们有些人认为看电影比读原著好。3.

To

some

extent,

the

way…我们的交际方式在一定程度上取决于我们27的文化。B.”承“2.

(此外）, we

should

improve1.What’s

mor（e

加之，而且），I

have

a

lotof

homework

to

do.Besidesour

study

methods

and

getwellprepared

for

the

exam.3.What