2024届高三英语八省八校T8联考（应用文）讲评：对考试舞弊的看法和请求课件

2024届T8

应用文对考试作弊的看法和请求试题呈现：【24届高三八省八校（T8联考）应用文】假定你是李华，在外教课期末考试中发现有人作弊，你认为这会影响考试公平，请你给外教John写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1.描述情况2.你的看法3.你的请求注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。试题分析：这是一篇具有相当难度的应用文写作任务，紧扣人与自我的话题语境，突出诚信做人和公平处事的价值观。1.情况描述：既要考虑到记叙文的特点（描述学生舞弊的情况，不能只简单提及“有人”舞弊而没有更细的介绍，不足以让外教信服）2.你的看法：又要考虑到议论文的特点（描述你的对舞弊一事的看法，不能只简单地说它造成对考生的不公平，还可以拓展一点，如舞弊会打击其它学生学习积极性，同时对老师也是一种不尊重等）试题分析：这是一篇具有相当难度的应用文写作任务，紧扣人与自我的话题语境，突出诚信做人和公平处事的价值观。3.你的请求：还要考虑语用问题（此请求不完全等同于向对方写建议，只需做到点到即止，具体该怎么处理，外教应该自有分寸）常见问题：忽视了要点一（情况描述），而错把重点落在表达看法或发表议论；在写作要点二（你的看法）时，没有高度概括自己的观点，用过多篇幅去表达对舞弊的看法写信给外教时，没有注意书信的基本礼仪，如开头的问候，简要介绍自己身份，还有期待回复等等。高分积累描述情况1.我所目睹的是，一些学生为了获得更高的成绩交换答案和使用电子设备作弊。2.他们一边用手机寻找答案，一边假装在试卷上写字。3.我发现有个学生有不诚实的行为，想要通过查看一些参考资料来作弊。WhatIwitnessedwasthatsomestudentsexchangedanswersandusedelectronicdevicestocheatinordertoachievehighergrades.Theypretendedtowriteonthetestpaperwhilesearchingforanswersontheirphones.Ispottedastudentengagingindishonestbehavior,attemptingtocheatbyreferringtosomereferencematerials.高分积累你的看法1.我认为这种行为对其他努力备考的学生是不公平的。2.根据我的判断，这种行为不仅极大地损害考试的公平性，而且还摧毁那些勤奋学习的同学的努力。3.而且，我认为这种不诚实的行为是对老师以及其他同学的不尊重Ithinkthisbehaviorisunfairtootherstudentswhoareworkinghardtopreparefortheexam.AsfarasIcanjudge,

notonlydoesthisbehaviorgreatlyjeopardizethefairnessoftheexam,butalsoruinstheeffortsofthose

whohavestudieddiligently.What’smore,Ifindthisdishonestbehaviouracompletedisrespectforteacheraswellasotherstudents.高分积累你的请求1.恳请您调查此事，并采取必要措施维护考试的公正性。2.因此，我热切地请求您采取必要的措施去解决这件事，并且确保考试的公平性。Pleaseinvestigatethismatterandtakenecessarymeasurestomaintainthefairnessoftheexam.Hence,Ikindlymakearequestthatsomeappropriatemeasuresshouldbetakentoaddressthisissueandensurethefairnessoftheexamination.

AnofficialversionDearJohn,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.

I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingto

report

anincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessedduringthefinalexam.

Regrettably,

Inoticedseveralstudents

engagein

dishonestbehavior

duringtheexam,suchas

exchanginganswers

and

usingelectronicdevices.

Inmyopinion,

thesecheatingbehaviorhasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairnessoftheexam.

Therefore,Ikindly

request

that

you

lookintothismatter

and

reconsiderthescores

alreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

(98words)

Yours,LiHuaApossibleversionDearJohn,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Iamwritingtoinformyouaboutanincidentthatoccurredduringthefinalexamforourclass.

WhileIwastakingtheexam,Ispottedastudentengagingindishonestbehavior,attemptingtocheatbyreferringtosomereferencematerials.AsfarasIcanjudge,

notonlydoesthisbehaviorgreatlyjeopardizethefairnessoftheexam,butalsoruinstheeffortsofthose

whohavestudieddiligently.Hence,Ikindlymakearequestthatsomeappropriatemeasuresshouldbetakentoaddressthisissueandensurethefairnessoftheexamination.

Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.（116words）Yours,LiHuaApossibleversionIhopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iwantedto

bringtoyourattentionasituation

thatIwitnessedduringthefinalexamofourcourse.I

noticed

thatsomestudents

wereengagingin

cheatingbehaviors,whichIbelieve

hadanegativeimpacton

thefairnessoftheexamination.Duringtheexam,Iobservedseveralstudents

exchangingnotesandwhisperingtoeachother.

Itwasobviousthat

theyweresharinganswersandhelpingeachother

inanattemptto

cheat.This

notonly

compromises（危害）

theintegrityoftheexam

butalso

underminestheeffortsofthose

whohavestudieddiligentlyanddeserveafairevaluation.Istronglybelievethat

itiscrucialforusto

maintainalevelplayingfield

（保持公平竞争）inorderto

ensurefairness

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investigate

thismatterfurtherand

takeapprop