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读后续写系列(五)人与自然之保护环境思路1.保护环境前:环境碰到了什么问题?(What?Why?)2.保护环境时:主角采取的行动?其他人采取的行动?(How?Feeling?)3.保护环境后:环境的变化?带来的影响?人的反应/感悟(feeling?),结尾升华(人与环境和谐共处)二.动作类素材积累:
利用:takeadvantageof、makeuseof、employ解决:solve、address、findasolutionfor参与:takeapart、getinvolved采取行动:takeactionstodo使我感到高兴的是:tomygreatjoy\delight难以置信:couldn’tbelieve、bedifficulttobelieve捡垃圾:pickuplitter\garbage\trash、takegarbagesaway鼓励人们培养环保意识:encourageotherstodeveloptheenvironmentalawareness.三.好句积累●保护环境的具体行动①呼吁人们:1.IwanttogetasmanypeopleinvolvedaspossiblesoItryhardtoconvinceotherpeopletotakeactionwithmetoproctecttheenvironment.我想让尽可能多的人参与进来,因此我努力尝试说服其他人跟我一起采取行动保护环境。Idecidedtodosomethingtoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheearth.②具体行动:1.Welearntomakemanycardstohandouttopeople,withsomewordsaboutenvironmentprotectionwrittenonthem.我们学会制作许多卡片分发给人们,上面写着一些关于环境保护的文字。2.We’vesetupsignsaroundthelaketoremindpeopletopayattentiontotheenvironment.Othermembersofmyfamilyalsogotothelaketopickupgarbageonweekends.我们在湖边设置了标志,提醒人们注意环境。我的其他家人周末也会去湖边捡垃圾。IoftenwenttothelibrarytoreadnewspapersorsurftheInternettolookforsomegoodmethodsofimprovinglivingenvironment.Ioftentalkedtomyclassmates,friendsandrelativesaboutourearth,exchangingmyopinionswiththem.我经常去图书馆阅读报纸或浏览网络,寻找提高环境保护的方法。我经常与我的同学,朋友,家人谈论我们的地球,与他们交换我的观点。●采取行动后的影响Undertheirappeal,moreandmorepeopleareinvolvedinprotectingtheenvironment.在他们的呼吁下,越来越多人参与到保护环境中。Manydayshavepassed,andthesurroundingshaveimprovedalot.Thankstoourefforts,thelakehastakenonanewlook.许多天过去了,周围的环境也有了很大的改善。由于我们的努力,这个湖有了新的面貌。Thesurroundingsareclearerandthereisnomoregarbagefloatingonitswater.周围的环境更加清澈,水面上也不再漂浮垃圾。Eventually,
his
efforts
paid
off,
with
acres
of
naturallygrown
land
being
home
to
manyplants
and
animals.最终,他的努力得到了回报,几英亩自然生长的土地成了许多动植物的家园。●环境描写It
was
a
perfect
outing
wherethecolors
ofthedeepbluesky,
thelight
green
river
water
and
themild
late
May
sunshine
mixed
to
createamagic
scene,whichtotallytookourbreathaway.这是一次完美的郊游,深蓝色的天空、浅绿色的河水和五月末温和的阳光混合在一起,创造了一个神奇的场景,让我们赞叹不已。Icouldn'thelpthinkingnowonderitwasregardedasaspiritual
place
where
peopleliveinharmonywithnature.All
these
fortedeveryone'ssoul.我不禁想,难怪它被视为一个人们与自然和谐相处的精神圣地。这一切真的安慰了每个人的灵魂。四.结尾及主题升华句:1.we
should
take
the
natureas
our
intimate
friend.
Preserving
nature
is
not
only
preservingour
home,
but
the
civilization
of
human
munity
as
well.我们应该把自然作为我们亲密的朋友。保护自然不仅是保护我们的家园,也是保护人类社会的文明。Wearealllivingunderthesamebluesky.Therefore,allofushaveadutytoprotectourenvironmenttomaketheworldabetterplace.To
sum
up,
the
world'
s
endangered
animals
are
an
importantresource
and
we
should
protectthem
by
setting
aside
some
landfor
them.总之,地球上的濒危动物是重要的资源,我们应该通过为它们留出土地来保护它们。五.案例分析(一)保护环境Itwasalovelyspringmorninginthemountainsofmyhome.Herewasfullofnaturalatmosphere.Theskywasblue,thesunwaswarm,andtheairwasfresh.Asdrivingalongthewindingroad,Icouldseethousandsofwildflowersinbloom.WhenIturnedround,IsloweddownasIsawsomevolunteerspickingupgarbagealongthesideoftheroad.IjustsmiledasIsawthemdoingsomecleaninginspringforMotherEarthandmymindsuddenlyfloatedbackintimetoanotherspringmorninglongago.Whenmychildrenwereyounger,Iusedtowalkalongasmallroutearoundthelakenearmyhome.ItwasalsoonaspringmorningthatInoticedmuchgarbagelyingalongtheroute.Thenextday,Ibroughtabiggarbagebagandstartedtoslowlypickupthegarbagealongmyway.Allkindsofdesertedobjectslayalloverthefloor.Therewerepopcans,plasticwaterbottles,wrappersforcandybars,emptychipbags,piecesofbrokenfishinglineandevenanoldshoe.EverytimeIstopped,Ipickedupapieceofgarbage.AndIevenfishedsomegarbageoutoftheedgeofthewater.BythetimeIcircledthelake,thegarbagebaghadbeennearlyfull.Tiredbuthappy,Iputthebaginanemptygarbagecan.IstoppedbeforeIheadedhomeandtookonelastlookatthelakeasthesunset.ItlookedmorebeautifulthaneverandIfeltliketheangelswerelookingdownuponitwithmeandsharingmysmiles.Ialwaysthinkthatattimesthisworld’sproblemscanseemoverwhelmingandyoumaywonderwhatyoucandotomakeadifference.Butthetruthisthateverygoodthingyoudomattersalot!IdobelieveeverytimeIstoptopickupasinglepieceofgarbage,Icanmakeadifference.Asmychildrenareadultsnow,Idecidetospendmoretimeprotectingtheenvironment.Paragraph1:Ibegintoencourageotherstodeveloptheenvironmentalawareness.Paragraph2:Manydayshavepassed,andthesurroundingshaveimprovedalot.【答案】Ibegintoencourageotherstodeveloptheenvironmentalawareness.Iknowthatthereispowerinnumbers,andIwanttogetasmanypeopleinvolvedaspossible.I’veconvincedmychildrentotakeactionwithmelikeIdidbefore.Welearntomakemanycardstohandouttopeople,withsomewordsaboutenvironmentprotectionwrittenonthem.We’vealsosetupsignsaroundthelaketoremindpeopletopayattentiontotheenvironment.Othermembersofmyfamilyalsogotothelaketopickupgarbageonweekends.Manydayshavepassed,andthesurroundingshaveimprovedalot.Thankstoourefforts,thelakehastakenonanewlook.Thesurroundingsareclearerandthereisnomoregarbagefloatingonitswater.Thereislittlegarbageoneithersideoftheroadalongthelake.Itissurprisingthatmanypeopletaketheirgarbageaway.Fewpeopledropgarbagehere.Iampleasedtonotethatmorepeopleactivelyvolunteertopickupthegarbage.Thisgivesusmoreconfidencetoprotectournearbyenvironment.续写线索:鼓励其他人发展环保意识——分发卡片——周末捡垃圾——环境改善——获得信心词汇积累:行为类:开始:begin/start培养:develop/foster注意:payattentionto/keepone'seyesopen情绪类:高兴:pleased/glad惊人的:surprising/astonishing案例分析(二)参加演讲呼吁保护环境OnahotSeptemberafternoon,PeterandhisfriendIsabelwereontheirwaytothelibrary.WhentheypassedbyTubmanpark,Isabelsuggestedcuttingthroughittogettothelibrary.Astheyenteredthepark,thesightoftheswings(秋千)andthemerrygoroundbroughtbackafloodofmemoriesoftheirchildhoodspentthere.Butnoweverythinglookedsoold,sad,anddirty.Litterlayonthegroundnexttoanoverflowingtrashbin.Therewerestillyoungschoolchildrenplayingtherebuttheyhadtoavoidthetrashthatlitteredtheplayground.Alittleboytoldthemthatthecitytooktheothertrashcansawayandtheremainingonenevergotemptiedoften.Astheyheadedtowardthelibrary,thetwohighschoolstudentswrinkledtheirforehead.Inthelibrary,theyencounteredMrs.Evans,theirkindheartedfifthgradeteacher,retiredyetstillpassionate.Mrs.EvanslistenedasIsabelandPetereagerlyexplainedwhatthey’dseen.Finally,sheremendedthemtogototheCityHalltovoicetheirconcerns.Thenextday,IsabelandPeterwentintothebuildingoftheCityHallbutweremetwithanimpatientofficer.Theywereinformedthatthecitycouldn’thelpwiththeirproblemduetoatightbudget.Discouraged,theyleftandturnedtoMrs.Evansforhelp.Underherguidance,theydecidedtoaskGoGreen,anonprofitorganizationwhosegoalistoprotecttheenvironment,forhelp.“Thisgroupisgoodatraisingmoneyforprojectsjustlikeyours,”saidMrs.Evans.ShepromisedtoarrangethemtopresenttheirideastoGoGreen.Hearingthis,theirfacelitup.Twomaintasksremainedahead:researchingwaystocleanuptheparkandpreparingaconvincingpresentation.AsIsabelwasgoodatresearchingwhilePeteralwayshadatalentforspeaking,theycooperatedquitewell.Isabellearnedfromasciencemagazinethatanewtypeoftrashbincansqueezethetrashdownwithoutbeingemptiedoften,whichsavestime,money,andenergy.Basedonthis,Peterpracticedhispresentationoverandoveragain.Paragraph1:Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.Paragraph2:Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.【答案】Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.Finally,itwastimeforhimtodothepresentation.StandinginfrontofseveralexpertsfromGoGreen,Peterwasnervousinfearofscrewingthingsup.Butunbelievably,whenhebegantospeak,everythingwentsosmoothly.Hisvoicewasclearandinfluential,andhisspeechwaslogicalandwellorganized.PeterendedhispresentationwithadeepbowandwentouttowaitforGoGreen’sdecision.Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.TheirideaswereapprovedandGoGreenagreedtoprovidethemoneytheyneededtopurchasethetrashbin.Petersmiled.Itmeantnotonlytheireffortspaidoff,butalsoTubmanparkwouldrestoreitscleannessandtidiness.PeterandIsabeldecidedtotellMrs.Evansthisgoodnewsfirstandthenworkedoutthenextsteptheyneededtotake.续写线索:感到紧张——顺利完成报告——得到好消息——与埃文斯夫人分享快乐词汇积累:①难以置信地:unbelievably/incredibly②兴奋地:excitedly/withexcitement案例分析(三)人与植物MywifeandIneverhadagreenthumbwhenitcametokeepingplantsaliveformorethanafewweeks.So,whenIwasdiagnosedwithcancer,wedidn'teventhinkaboutaddingaplanttooursmallapartment.Butoneday,myfriendgaveusabeautifulplantasagift,insistingthatitwouldbringlifetoourhomeandasenseofcalmnessduringthistoughtime.Surprisingly,theplanttookoffandgrewbeautifully,anditbroughtasenseofjoytoourhomethatwedesperatelyneeded.TendingtotheplantgavemeasenseofacplishmentatatimewhenIsometimesfeltuseless.Iamaphysician,andtakingcareoftheplantmademefeellikeacaregiveronceagain.Itwasnicetobeablelonurturesomethingandwatchitgrow.SincemydiagnosisinAugust2018,fartoooften,itseemed,Ihadtorelyonhelpfromotherpeople.Theenormouschangeleftmefeelingaimlessandunsettled.Wateringtheplant,assmallanactasitwas,connectedmetoacorepartofmyoldidentity.Plantsandpeoplecouldstilldependonme.Forthenextfewmonths,Iwasrecoveringfromsurgeryandreceivingradiation.Despitemyongoingtreatments,wefoundsomepeacethroughtendingtotheplant.Thesimpleactofwateringandwatchingitgrowgaveussomethingtofocusonoutsideofmyhealth.Itbecameasmallbutmeaningfulpartofourlives.Paragraph1:Then,mysteriously,itbegantoshowsignsoflosingliveliness.Paragraph2:AsIbecamelessanxious,Ibegantosearchonlineforhowtocareformyplant.【答案】Then,
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