高考英语一轮复习 书面表达特训 专题04 高考英语书面表达中的高级表达-人教版高三英语试题

高考英语书面表达中的高级表达一、使用主从复合句复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。高考写作中用到的复合句包括下列几种：(1)定语从句I’mwritingtoexpress/convey/extendmysincere/heartfeltgratitude/appreciationtoyouforyourtimely/generoushelp/assistance/whatyouhavedoneforme,withoutwhichIwouldn’thavemadesuchrapidprogress.Wepaidavisittothecitymuseumandsomeplacesofinterest,whichmademehaveabetterunderstandingof(haveadeeperinsightinto)theEnglishsociety,cultureandhistory.ItalsohelpstolistentoChinesesongsandwatchChinesemovies,whichcanenableyoutogainabetterunderstandingofChinese.To

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(2)状语从句Thedoctorarrivedthereintime.Theboywassaved.Itwasnottoolate.→Theboywassavedbecausethedoctorarrivedtherebeforeitwastoolate.MusicissoappealingtomethatIalwayslistentomusicwheneverI’mfree,whichbringsmeintoadifferentworld.(3)名词性从句(包括主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和同位语从句)Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatsmokingisharmfultoourhealth.Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Iholdafirmbeliefthatyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.XiaoMingwasalwayslateforschool.Histeacherdidn’tknowwhy.→Histeacherdidn’tknowwhyXiaoMingwasalwayslateforschool.如果考生驾驭句子的能力较强，则还可以恰当使用复杂的复合句（就是从句中还包含从句）。例如：IwanttoknowwhetheryouwanttomeetMissTangwhenshecomesbackfromJapan,wheresheworksasanengineer.(本句包含3个从句)二、使用高级词汇1、巧用习语(idiom)英语中有大量习语，如果运用得当，则可大大增加文章的感染力。考生要在平时的学习过程中不断积累。例如：①

Whatsheexplaineddoesn’tholdwater.她的解释站不住脚。②

Manyfamiliesstruggletomakeendsmeet.很多家庭只能勉强维持生计。③

Idon’tknowwhysheisalwaysinlowspirits.我不知道她为什么总是情绪低落。④

HeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaid.他对我的话一点也听不进去。⑤

Thissentencedoesn’tmakesense.这个句子讲不通。2、用短语代替单词英语中同义词众多，在表达的时候，尽量用短语代替单个的词。例如：①IhavemadeupmymindtostudyEnglishbetterthisterm.(同义词：decide)②Ihavenoideahowtoenlargemyvocabulary.(同义词：don’tknow)③Aburningcigaretteendresultedin/ledtothebigfire.(同义词：cause)④SincemychildhoodIhavebeenfondofmusic.(同义词：like)⑤Wewilltakethematterintoaccount(consideration).(同义词：consider)3、善用小词在写作中巧用、活用某些小词，常常会起到画龙点睛、四两拨千斤的作用。(1)动词：see,find,have,take,get,strike,run,cover,fail,go,make,manage,keep,stay,do(行，可以),help(有用),work(起作用),count,etc.例如：①

2005sawthesuccessfullaunchofShenzhouVIinChina.②

Chinahasahistoryofmorethan5,000years.③

SaddamHusaingothangedonthe30thofDecember,2006.④

HowdoesShenzhenstrikeyou?⑤

Ihavetoearnmorethan6,000yuanifIwanttocovermyexpensesinShenzhen.⑥

WhenIreceivedthenewsthatIgotthefirstplace,wordsfailedme.⑦

Thisishowthestorygoes.⑧

Afterafewyears’training,shemadeanexcellentteacher.⑨

Mary’smotheraskedhertoseizetimetogooverherlessonsforthefinalexam,butitdidn’thelp.⑩

Itistheabilitytodothejobwellthatcounts.(2)名词、形容词、副词、介词等：amust,ahit,asuccess,abetter/bestchoice/seller,arrival,stay,top,new,pretty(相当地),terribly,badly,in(时尚的),out(过时的)，beyond,under,ondisplay/onsecondthought(s),atthenewsof/atthesightof,etc.例如：①

Englishisamustforus.②

Ofallthe2006filmsZhangYimou’sCurseoftheGoldenFlower(满城尽带黄金甲)wasthebestseller.③

ImadelotsoffriendsduringmystayinFrance.④

WendyWangmustbeoneofthetopstudentsinourschool.⑤

Thiskindofworkisquitenewtome.⑥

Iamgoingtofindaniceapartmentprettysoon.⑦

Doctorswerebadlyneededinthatareaaftertheflood.⑧

Shortskirtsareinagain.⑨

Hislectureisbeyondmyunderstanding.⑩

ShenzhenMetroLine3isstillunderconstruction.OnmyarrivalIfoundthefrontdoorwasopen.AtthenewsofhisdeathIwasshocked.4、使用名词表达动词意义①Hisfailureintheexamagainmadehismotherveryworried.②OnarrivalhomeIfoundthefrontdooropen.③Livingneartheairportmayleadtopeople’slossofhearing.④Noonecanentertheofficewithoutpermission.⑤Therailwaylineisstillunderconstruction.5、使用形容词（短语）做状语或者使用非谓语动词结构等①Theyreturnedhome,safeandsound.②Fulloffear,Iwalkedinthedarkness.③WhilewalkingalongthestreetsImetJane.④Westartedoutveryearlyinordertocatchthefirstearlybus.⑤Iarrivedhome,reallyexhausted.6、使用表示过渡的连接词高考“基础写作”的评分标准中特别强调句子间的连贯性。之所以把衔接和连贯作为重要标准来要求，是因为衔接和连贯是构成语篇的最基本条件。常用的连接词有：and,but,so,besides,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,inaddition,however,therefore,suddenly,finally,while,also,too,thus,yet等等。例如：①Hethoughtheunderstoodtheproblem;however,hewasmistaken.②Theycostalotofmoney;thusyoushouldusethemcarefully.③Idon’tlikethedress;moreover,it’stooexpensive.④Iwaslateforthefilm;whatwasworse,Ileftmyticketathome.7、使用比喻、拟人等修辞手法比喻性结构新鲜活泼，形象具体，能给读者留下较深刻的印象，具有强大的感染力。例如：①TheGreatWallrunsacrossChinalikeahugedragon.②Tofinishtheworkaheadoftime,Ihavebeenasbusyasabeerecently.③Heisaluckydog.④Duskfoundhimcryinginthestreet.(拟人)8、使用英语中的谚语和汉语一样，英语中也有大量谚语。若能在写作中恰当运用，会给文章增色不少。现例举几条励志类的谚语。①Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.②Timeandtidewaitfornoman.③Practicemakesperfect.④Alazyyouth,alousyage.⑤Wellbegunishalfdone.⑥

Nopains,nogains.⑦

Lookbeforeyouleap.⑧

Itisnevertoooldtolearn.⑨

Failureisthemotherofsuccess.⑩Hewholaughslastlaughsbest.9、英语作文开头优美的万能句①句型分类直接抛出观点类这一方法就是开门见山，直截了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。模板句型：1）、Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginning/comingtorealize/accept/(beaware)that.。.2）、Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof..。.故事引出类这种方法就是先讲一个较短的、与文章内容稍有关联的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的主题。模板句型：1）、Ihaveafriendwho...Shouldhe....?Suchadilemmaweareoftenconfrontedwithinourdailylife。2）、Onceuponatime,therelivedamanwho....Thisstorymaybe(unbelievable)，butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow。观点对立引出类这种开头是针对一个问题先给出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。模板句型：1）、Whenaskedabout...,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat….ButIthink/viewabitdifferently。2）、Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat.....Theyclaim/believe/arguethat...ButIwonder/doubtwhether...。.引用名句类这类开头是先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章要展开论述的观点，在实际写作中运用还是比较多的。模板句型：1）、"Educationisnotcompletewithgraduation.“ThisistheopinionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopinion。2）、Weoftenhearsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis"...."。现象分析类这一类开头是先引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后在进行分析评论。1）、Recentlytheissueoftheproblem/phenomenonof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus/intopublicattention。2）、Inflation/Corruption/Socialinequality...isyetanotheroft