高考英语书面表达专题课件.ppt

1、English Writing 英语书面表达专题,书面表达评分标准,1 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 2 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运 用能力。 4 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5 完全达到预期的写作目的。,怎样运用高级语法结构,1. 改变时态 The bell is ringing now. (一般) There goes the bell. (高级) 2. 改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般

2、) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级),3.使用过去分词,She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般) Followed by many students, she walked out of the room (高级),4.使用v-ing形式,If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一般) Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow. (高级),5.使用名词性从句

3、,To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般),What surprised him is that the girl knows so many things.,6.使用状语从句,I wont believe whatever he says. (一般) No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高级) The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般) The meal was so nice that we al

4、l enjoyed it very much,7.使用定语从句,The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般),The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级),8. 使用强调句、感叹句,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. It was in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began . We were glad to see th

5、e crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般) How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.,学会使用恰当的关联词,1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，bothand, as well as, together with, neithernor, also, not onlybut also, eitheror, as well. 2. 表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), in spite of, al

6、though, otherwise, while, after all.,3.表示因果关系,so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account (理由) of.,4.表示时间、顺序关系,first ,firstly, secondly, finally, later,in the end, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon.,5.递进关系关联词,besides, furthermore

7、(此外), whats more, in addition, moreover (而且), worse still, to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all,1. I turned on the TV. I watched it. 2. I bought my sister a present. She didnt like it.,并列句,并列句,I turned on the TV and watched it.,I bought my sister a present,but she didnt like i

8、t.,阅读下列各组句子,填入适当的 并列连词. 1.She tried hard,_she was unsuccessful. 2.Put on more clothes,_you may catch cold.,but,or,4.In the old days,he could_ read _write. 5.How great he is!He can_ read French _speak it well. 6.He knew nothing about the man,_ he didnt trust him.,neither,nor,both,and,so,请用合适的并列连词把每组句

9、子合并为一个并列句。 1.He was tired. He went to bed. 2.The child hid behind his mothers skirt. He was afraid of the dog.,He was tired, so he went to bed.,The child hid behind his mothers skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.,3.He made a promise.He didnt keep it.,He made a promise, but he didnt keep it.,4.Mary i

10、s opening the door. John is greeting her guests.,Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.,请用括号中所给的词把每组句子连接为一个复合句。,I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when),I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.,附图,1,2,3,4,书面表达六步法,审 题,1、体裁：,2、主要时态：,3、人称：,4、

11、要点：,记叙文,一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故,第一人称 I,时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。,图1,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road,7:15am, Feb. 2000,Park Road,图2,A car hit the man while he was crossing the road.,图3,I noticed the driver was a young woman and the car was yellow.,图4,AC864,The car numbe

12、r was AC864.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an old man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hi

13、t the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry.,The car didt stop and drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,词：, t

14、o ride a bike, to hit his bike and fall off,句：,A man was riding a bike along the street.,A car hit his bike and he fell off it.,文：,One day, I was on my way to school and a man was riding along the street.,One day, I was on my way to school a man was riding along the street. , a car ran fast towards

15、the man. The car hit the bike heavily and the man fell to the ground wounded. The driver caused an accident. He was frightened he ran away quickly with his car.,and(while),Suddenly,so,that,I saw what had happened and remembered the number of the car , I reported this to the policeman at once. , the driver was caught and he was punished for what he had done.,Because,as wel l,As a result,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,连接词,根据右边六副图的提示，写一篇短文,1. Play with water 2. Splash water here and there/ flow around on the ground,1.Pa