大学英语四六级考试写作部分精解

1、大学英语四六级考试写作部分精解从句到段：段落的展开基本句法掌握之后， 接下来就要训练段落写作， 这是因为段落是文章的基本组成部分，要写出好文章，必须在段落写作上多下功夫。段的基本组成是句子， 好的段落应该是该段中所有的句子都围绕着一个主题展开，且句与句之间应该是紧密相连，形成统一的整体即 unified and coherent 。那么怎样将一个段落展开呢？下面介绍英语中几种常用的方法。(1) 时间顺序 按时间顺序写作就是按照事物发展在时间上的正常顺序或先后顺序展开段落。在讲述故事或回忆事件时，先发生的先写，后发生的后写。请看下面的例子：my heart gave a leap when i

2、heard the announcement that our train would soon arrive at its destination-beijing. like other passengers, i began to collect my things and put my mug, towel, atlas, apples, and other things into my bag. to the tune of a beautiful song the train pulled into the station and gently stopped by a platfo

3、rm. i walked out of the train and was carried forward by the stream of people into an underground passage and then into a big hall. as i stepped out of the station, i was dazzled by the bright autumn skies of beijing. though i had been on the train for more the thirty hours and spent an sleepless ni

4、ght, i didnt feel tired at all, and i believed my days in this glorious city would be as sunny as the skies.(2) 空间顺序 按空间顺序组织材料通常用于描述一个地方、 事情或人物外貌等。其文章内容应按照由近及远、由远及近、自下而上、自上而下、按顺时针方向或逆时针方向排列，例如：in the middle of the rectangular-shaped courtyard stood three magnolia trees(), all in full bloom. a little

5、 girl was hoping among them, now gazing at a bud, now collecting fallen petals. under one of the trees stood her parents, who, while keeping an eye on her, were examining the snow white blossoms with great interest and admiration. in front of another tree a young couple, fresh and bright as the flow

6、ers, were posing for a picture. at the end of the courtyard a group of youngsters had gathered behind an artist painting a flourishing limb, which looked so charming and real that a boystooped to sniff at a half-open flower. at the opposite end a few elderly men and women stood admiring the leafless

7、 flowering trees and the people looking at them.(3) 列 法 通 列 一系列的 据 主 句中的 点 行广泛、全面的 述或解 ，列 的 序可按照所列各点的内容的相 重要性、 、空 来排列，例如：the other side of city lifein the eyes of many people, city life is attractive with all its advantages and convenience, yet they dont see the other side of the picture. first, wit

8、h the expansion of the city, housing has become a serious problem for city people. then, there is the problem of pollution: harmful gases from vehicles and poisonous water from factories pollute our surroundings; noise continually disturbs your peace and rest and drives you mad. thirdly, modern city

9、 life puts a high pressure upon people; you have to hurry to and from work; you have to dodge in so as to avoid bumping into the flood of people, bicycles, cars, buses ; all day long you are under great stress. fourthly, big cities also cause some social problems. of which high crime rate is the mos

10、t serious one. people are justifiably in fear of becoming victims of burglary, robbery, murder and other crimes at any time. they should find some ways to cope with all these problems.(4) 例法 在主 句中 要、 概括地 明一个段落的主 思想之后， 可以用具体的、生 的事例来支撑 主 ， 向目 者展示并使他 具体感受主 句中尚未展开的内容和 ，例如：this term several useful and in

11、teresting courses have been offered. an introduction to european culture, for instance, gives us a lot of background knowledge of the history of european philosophy, literature, and arts. from time to time we see slide shows of famous paintings and hear tapes of famous pieces of music, and they make

12、 the lectures all the more interesting. american society and culture is another course that attracts a large audience. the teacher, who visited the united states not long ago, discusses new trends and changes in american life as well as american history and traditions. we like these and other course

13、s very much, because they help us not only to improve our english but also to broaden our vision.(5) 比较和对比 比较 (comparison) 主要是指出两个或两个以上不同种类的事物的共同点或相似之处， 如人物、地点、事物、思想、观点等。对照 (contrast)主要是指出它们的不同点。 相同的或类似的特征可以组成比较， 不同的特征则可以组成对照。 不仅如此，比较和对比常常同时使用， 这是因为比较中往往隐含着对比。比较和对比常有两种形式，即整体比较和对比contrast)与逐项比较 (alte

14、rnating comparison)(block comparison and ，例如：although ulysses s. grant and robert e. lee were fierceadversaries during the civil war, their lives, both military andnonmilitary, has a great deal in common. grant descended from afamily whose members participated in the american revolution. hereceived

15、his commission of second lieutenant from west point andserved in the spanish-american war. he was later summoned bypresident lincoln to assume command of the union forces during thecivil war. after the civil war, grant suffered financial problems andwas forced to declare bankruptcy. lee also descend

16、ed from a familywhich engaged in the american revolution. he, too, received hiscommission from west point and later fought in mexico during thespanish-american war. his fame as a military strategist during thecivil war, when he was the commander of the confederate armies, iswell known. although it i

17、s not always pointed out by historians he, likegrant, had financial difficulties after the civil war and was compelledto declare bankruptcy. by securing a post as president of washingtoncollege, he was able to avoid additional poverty.(整体比较)the same qualities that make people good houseguests make t

18、hem good hospital patients. good houseguests can expect a reasonable amount of service and effort on their behalf, and hospital patients can also. guests have to adjust to what is for them a change, and certainly hospital patients must do the same. no one appreciates a complaining, unpleasant, unapp

19、reciative house guest, and the hospital staff is no exception. hose guests who expect vast changes to be made for their benefit are not popular for long. certainly nurses and other personnel with their routines feel the same way about patients in their care. just as house guests must make adjustment

20、s to enjoy their visits, so patients must make adjustments to make their stays reasonably pleasant and satisfying under the circumstances.(逐项比较 )(6) 原因和结果 因果分析是常用的拓展段落的方法之一， 一定要注意推理的逻辑性因果关系必须表达清楚， 不能因果混淆， 更不能因果倒置， 要避免牵强附会和循环论证。 一个原因可能造成一个或多个结果， 也可能在一大段文章中涉及到一连串因果关系。 一个结果也可能由多种原因所引起， 通常先写结果， 后写多种原因；但

21、也可先写原因后写结果。另外，如果哟啊强调原因或结果，可用倒装或强调句型加以突出。例如：the surge of demand for oil will soon begin to send shock waves through the american economy and transportation system. the impact of these tremors can already be anticipated: to the consumer they signal the end of a long love affair with the car, and to de

22、troit they offer an early warning that its 1985 growth aims are dangerously unrealistic. unless we exercise foresight and devise growth-limits policies for the auto industry, events will thrust us into a crisis that will lead to a substantial erosion of domestic oil supply as well as the independenc

23、e it provides us with, and a level of petroleum imports that could cost as much as $20 to $30 billion per year. moreover, we would still be depleting our remaining oil reserves at an unacceptable rate, and scrambling for petroleum substitutes, with enormous potential damage to the environment.(7) 定义

24、法 有时候为了避免混淆或误解， 我们必须对一个词、 一条术语或谚语、一个概念通过下定义加以说明、解释。通常有三种方法下定定义：给出同义词、用一个带有定语从句的复合句或用一整段文章，而以第三种方法最为常用。1997 年 1 月份四级考试的作文 practice makes perfect 就是一篇极为典型的定义型文章。再看下面的例子：a liberated woman is simply a woman who controls her own life, rather than allowing it to be controlled by other people, traditions,

25、or expectations. a liberated woman can be found pursuing any line of work, including housework, or no work at all. she may or may not be married; she may or may not have born children. she may belong to any race; she may have attained any age. she need have only one trait in common with her liberate

26、d sisters: she makes her own choices, whether they be the colors on her walls or the advanced degrees she seeks. she acts of her own volition, responsible to herself, and not out of fear of what her mother, lover, or neighbor might say.(8) 分类法 所谓 分类 就是根据人物和事物的特征将他们 / 它们分别归入各自不同的范畴。 在写这一类段落时， 一定要抓住各个

27、类别的典型特征， 不要异类相串，混淆起来。例如：according to xiao li, the fifteen students of his class fall into three groups. seven of them work hard and study well. they always get good marks in examinations and are often praised by the teachers. li calls them good students. the monitor, the secretary of the youth leagu

28、e branch, and the captain of the class volleyball team, are quick in finding out what their fellow students are interested in or what they should do as a collective. they always organize proper activities at the proper time, so li calls them good organizers. four other students are very kind to thei

29、r classmates, always ready to lend them a helping hand. they help to clean the classroom and the corridor even when they are not on duty. li says that they are good fellows. what about yourself? someone asks him. im a group by myself-a good observer.从段到篇：四种体裁掌握了前面八种段落展开的 天龙八部 ，在面对任何级别的英语考试的作文时，相信大家都

30、可以从容落笔，应付如裕。不过，大家仍然要谋篇布局， 从篇章的角度对自己要写的内容作宏观的整体上的把握，这就要求大家区分各种体裁， 以采用不同的方法去应对。 英语文章的体裁可分为四类，即：(1) 记叙文 (narration)(2) 描述文 (description)(3) 说明文 (exposition)(4) 议论文 (argumentation)和中文无异。限于篇幅，在此就不一一举例详细论述，只说一下写作要领。先说记叙文。所谓 narration 就是叙述一件事或一连串事件， 像四级曾经考过的 a morning walk( 晨间漫步 ) 即是一例。在写这类作文时，要注意以下几点：首先，在一开始