浅析大学英语四级写作

大学英语四级写作记叙文记叙文是以记人、叙事、写景、状物为主要内容，以记叙、描写为主要表达方式的一种文体，通常分为三类：1. 以人物为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物来写一件事或两件事。2. 以事件为主的记叙文。即以事件为中心组织材料，围绕中心事件可以写一个人或几个人。3. 以写景状物为主的记叙文，应注意的是，在一篇记叙文中，写人、写景、写事往往是交织在一起的，不可截然分开，但各有侧重。写记叙文通常应遵循以下几点：1. 交待要素，即人、时、地、事。2. 按事件发生的先后顺序叙述，做到完整具体。3. 重点突出，目的明确，不要玩弄词藻，讲清言明即可。写作时还要注意，用第一人称时主要是本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事；用第三人称时则主要是他人的经历和事情。记叙文所记的都是过去发生的事，所以原则上通常都用过去时态写，但有时也用历史现在时和戏剧现在时。范文1：一对外发行的英文报纸有“人物剪影”栏目，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员王楠。提示：1. 王楠：1978年10月出生于辽宁。2. 身高1.62米，体重54公斤。3. 7岁开始打球，1989年进入辽宁队，1993年入选国家队。4. 训练刻苦，与队友相处融洽。5. 喜欢上网，交友。网址：.6. 在国际比赛中获得几十枚金牌，为国家争得了荣誉。注意：1. 题目自拟；2. 不要逐条翻译提示，可适当增加细节，使短文连贯。3. 词数100140Wang NanWorld Champion in Ping pongWang Nan， a world champion in Ping Pong， is 1.62 meter tall with the weight of 54 kilograms. She was born in Loaning Province in October 1978. She began to play ping pong at the age of seven. She worked in Loaning Team for three years before she came to the national team in 1993. She trained hard and got along well with her teammates. Wang Nan has won scores of gold medals in international table-tennis games and won great honor for our motherland. She likes going on the net and she enjoys chatting with friends through the Internet. You can find more information about her at Wangnanwang-nan net.范文2：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Most Favorite Programmer. You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.我最喜爱的电视(或无线电)节目是2.这类节目的内容和特点3.我喜欢它的原因My Most Favorite ProgrammerThe News Report has always been my favorite TV program. Almost everyday I turn on the TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program. This has become a part of my life.The News Report contains a large amount of information C from the international political. situation to the latest foot-ball game. And the most important character is its fast pace. Because of this fast pace, news programs can contain much information in a short time.In my opinion, the News Report is more than a TV program. It is a way of communication. From this program, people can know and understand world affairs. The world thus becomes smaller. I especially appreciate this benefit of watching the news.范文3：今天是教师节，请根据以下提示写一篇记叙你的英语老师的短文，约220词左右。1. 李老师教课生动活泼，印象深刻。2. 上课前班长通知说李老师要动手术，暂时不能来上课，谁能代课还未决定。3. 同学们悄然无声，似乎都担心她不再来上课了。4. 李老师走进教室，她说不愿意耽误同学们的功课，要求医生推迟了手术时间。并说新老师明天就来，希望同学们同老师很好地相处，她病愈即返校。Miss Li is our English teacher. She always impresses us deeply with her lively English class.One day when the first bell rang， the monitor stood up and said， “Our English teacher is going to have an operation today. It has not been decided yet who will give us the lesson. ”The class turned silent at his words. It seemed that no one would believe him. In fact， all of us were afraid that Miss Li would no longer be with us. At this moment， Miss Li appeared at the door. She looked tired and pale.“Ill be missing you badly， ”she said in a low voice， “I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I dont want you to miss a single class. ”She went on， “A new teacher will take my place and I hope youll get on well with him. Ill come back as soon as Im better. ”Hearing this， all of us were moved to tears. What a good teacher we have.议论文议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法、主张的一种文体。写议论文要把握三性和三要素。三性指准确性、鲜明性和生动性。三要素指论点、论据和论证。论点的基本要求：观点正确，概括全面，见解新颖，有实际意义，要恰当地综合运用各种表达方式。论据的基本要求，真实可靠、充分典型。论证的基本要求：推理必须合乎逻辑，论证要讲究顺序，论证要符合正确的推理形式。简而言之，英语议论文共有三大特点： 1、 观点鲜明的开头； 2、 紧扣主题的结尾； 3、 有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。 这三点当中，第1、2点早已为绝大多数中国学生所熟知，因为开头点题和结尾扣题同样也是汉语文章的要求。但在长时间的学习过程中，这样的要求被很多学生以为是“老土”而得不到足够的重视。如果将这种思想带到英语议论文写作当中，直接的后果就是中心分散、观点不明确，加上中国学生普遍英文表达能力不强，这些因素就为整篇文章的失败埋下了隐患。 另外，英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落的中间或者最后，在英文应试写作中更加如此。正因为没有“主题句”的思想，所以中国学生在写英语文章时经常“想到什么，就写什么”，这在英语议论文中是不能接受的。 (二) 中心统一 在中心统一这个问题上，英语议论文和汉语议论文的概念也有所不同。中国人在写议论文时常常遵循“中庸”的原则，其具体的表现就是认为世界上没有任何事情是绝对的。当他们在文章中表扬一件事物或一种现象的时候，总要指出其不足；同样，在批评一件事物或一种现象的同时，也总不忘记指出其也有合理之处。这种做法从道理上来讲并没有什么不妥，但却不符合英语议论文的写作习惯，因为英语作家在写议论文时关注的是自己的辩论技巧和其结果对公众的影响力。换句话说，如果作者告诉大家两面都有道理也就等于说两面都没有道理，因为读者在读了文章之后仍旧不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在这种情况下到底该怎么做。 所以，既然四级考试考的是英语文章，大家就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思路和习惯：表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持；表示反对就彻彻底底地反对，而不能采取“墙头草两边倒”的做法。 (三) 段落的连贯性文章引用自： 在确定好一条条的扩展句后，怎样把这些句子流畅而连贯地组合在一起呢？这便是关联词发挥作用的时候了。在英语中，句与句之间、段与段之间一般都有连词或关联词连接，通过这些词读者能够很清楚地明白文章前后的逻辑联系。适当使用关联词是四级写作必备的技能，大家应该要引起特别重视。常用的关联词分为四类：1、列举类列举法常用在议论文中，当作者提出一个论点后，可通过列举出一系列事实对其进行说明或论证。列举类关联词有：first(ly), second(ly),. finally; for one thing, for another; on the one hand, on the other hand; moreover; furthermore; whats more; in addition; besides; first of all; in the first place, in the second place; (at)last; then; next; the last but not the least2、举例类举例法是用事例或数据对中心观点进行说明论证的方法，举例类关联词有：for example; for instance; such as; like; take.for example; a case in point; namely; in other words; that is; especially; in particular3、比较和对比比较是把两种或两种以上的事物进行比较，以辨别出它们的相似之处；对比是将这些事物进行对照，辨别其差异而指出各自的特征和本质。这类关联词有：but; however; yet; otherwise; while; in contrast; by contrast; on the contrary; similarly; likewise; like; conversely; rather than; instead; on the other hand; equally; nevertheless; nonetheless; unlike; still; in the same way; compared with.4、因果类as a result; since; because(of); thanks to; due to; owing to; for this reason; hence; thus; therefore; on this/that account; on account of; consequently5、总结类总结法是指在表达了一个观点或举了一个例子后，进行总结、给出概括，这类关联词有：in this case; according to; in a word; in brief; in short; to sum up.范文1：“Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?”Some people think that certain numbers will bring good luck to them. Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers. There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers. However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck. They believe in their own rather than” lucky numbers”. They dont do things according to certain numbers. As far as I am concerned, I think it is a persons own business whether he believes in a certain number or not. The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well. As to the belief in numbers, it is his personal choice. 范文2：Career or Family: which is more important? When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in ones life. It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. Whats more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate. In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that ones life can become better and better. Therefore, its not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.范文3：Just at the Beginning“We are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a book whose pages are infinite.”I do not know who wrote those words, but I have always liked them as a reminder that the future can be anything we want to make it. We can take the mysterious, hazy future and carve out of it anything that we can imagine, just like a sculptor carves a statue from a shapeless stone.We are all in the position of the farmer. If we plant a good seed, we reap a good harvest. If our seed is poor and full of weeds, we reap a useless crop. If we plant nothing at all, we harvest nothing at all.I want the future to be better than the past. I dont want it contaminated by the mistakes and errors with which history is filled. We should all be concerned about the future because that is where we will spend the reminder of our lives. The past is gone and static. Nothing we can do will change it. The future is before us and dynamic. Everything we do will affect it.Each day will brings with it new frontiers, in our homes and in our businesses, if we will only recognize them. We are just at the beginning of the progress in every field of human endeavor.说明文说明文是以说明为主要表达方式用来说明事物，阐明事理的一种文体。它通过揭示概念来说明事物的特征、本质及其规律性，给人准确的科学知识或正确思想。一般可分为实体事物说明和抽象事物说明两大类，词典、教材、论文、实验报告、产品说明书、广告、解说词及科学小品等都属于说明文。按写作方法,英语说明文主要分为下面六种类型:1.例证法 这是用具体例子来说明人或事物的特征、本质及其规律的方法,所用例子必须有代表性、典型性,能体现人或事物的本质特征。这是用特殊来说明一般的方法。通常在主题句后,用Forexample或Forinstance等短语引导出具体的例子。例如:Ourlifetodaydependsverymuchonenergy.Forexample,machineshavemadeourlifeeasierthanitusedtobe.Themachinesuseenergy,andenergyisneededforheating,lighting,communications,carryinggoods-everything.Factoriesuseagreatdealofenergytomakethethingsthatweuseandbuyandsell. 这段主要是讲能源问题。第一句为主题句,概括地说出我们目前的生活很大程度上依赖能源。接着用举例的方法从三方面说明能源的作用。2.定义法 下定义就是给说明对象一个明确概念。这是科学而严密的说明方法。它既能揭示事物的本质特征,勾勒其大概,描绘其轮廓,同时也能确定事物的范围和界限。下定义是多方面的,可以给人、事物、思想等下定义。例如:Anidealteachermusthavethefollowingcharacteristics.Heshouldknowhissubject,buthecanmakemistakesifheiswillingtolearn.Hispersonalityisasimportantashisscholarship.Anidealteachermustbeenthusiastic.Heshouldbeabitofanactorandheshouldntbeafraidtoshowhisfeelingsandexpresshislikesanddislikes.Anidealteacherisonewhogrows,learns,andimproveshimselfalongwithhisstudents. 本段的展开是通过对一个模范教师下定义的方法,关键词idealteacher在文中多次重复,能加深读者的印象。3.分类法 分类法是对同属不同类或同类而不同种的人或事物,根据不同性质进行分门别类地说明的方法。分类是人类认识客观世界的重要手段之一。分类必须遵守分类规则,使分类对象具有统一属性,依据同一分类标准,并使分类的子项相互排斥,不互相包蕴。例如:Asfaraspoliticalviewsareconcerned,peoplefallintothreecategories.Firstaretheconservativepeople.Conservativesareopposedtosuddenorgreatchanges.Secondaretheliberalpeople.Thesepeopleareinfavorofprogressandreform.Buttheiropinionsoftenseemtooidealistic.Thirdarethemoderatepeople.Themoderateskeepeverythingwithinreasonablelimits.Theyaremorepracticalinthishardworld.Inmyopinion,mostpeopleseemtobelongtothisgroup. 本段把人按政治观点分为三类:保守派(conservativepeople)、自由派(liberalpeople)和温和派(moderatepeople),并对他们各自的特征进行了简要的分析。4.因果关系法 事物变化的原因和结果是紧密相关的。如果某个现象的存在必然引起另一个现象的发生,那么,这两个现象之间就具有因果关系。因果关系包括由果推因(由结果去推测原因)和由因推果(由原因去推测结果)两种情况。因果关系符合人们的日常思维逻辑,因而在写作中得到广泛应用,常用because,as,since,so,nowthat,if.then,thereasonisthat.等表示因果关系。例如:Ofthefourseasons,Ilikespringbest.Ipreferspringbecauseitisaseasonofmuchjoyandgaiety.Newlifeburstsouteverywhere.Plantswearagreencoagainandcolorfulflowersblossomingardensandmountains.Theoldcomeoutdoorsforfreshairandtheyoungplanforoutdooractivities.Lifebecomessoenergeticandhappy. 第一句为本段主题句,末句是总结句。在主题句后,作者用了四个句子阐述自己喜欢春天的理由。5.比较对照法 有意识地把两种相反、相对的事物或同一事物相反、相对的两个方面放在一起,用比较的方法加以描述或说明,指出其相同点,这种写法叫做比较;指出其不同点,叫做对照。比较和对照各有不同的侧重,但两种方法经常结合使用。进行比较对照通常有两种方式。第一种方式采用先A后B的结构,即A1,A2,A3.; B1, B2, B3.。第二种方式采用AB交错结构,即A1,B1;A2,B2;A3,B3.。第一种方式采用先A后B的结构实际上是把一个段落(或一篇文章)分割为两部分,先全面讲A,再全面讲B,这样做较难收到强烈的对比效果。多数人认为第二种方式比较好,因为把对比的双方AB逐点交错,可以避免行文的单调沉闷,对比的效果也会更鲜明突出。例如:Itiseasytobeawinner.Awinnercanshowhisjoypublicly.Hecanlaughandsinganddanceandcelebratehisvictory.Peoplelovetobewithwinners.Winnersareneverlonely.Unlikewinners,losersarethelonelyonesoftheworld.Itisdifficulttofacedefeatwithdignity.Loserscannotshowtheirdisappointmentspublicly.Theycannotcryorgrieveabouttheirdefeat.Theymaysufferprivately,buttheymustbecomposedinpublic.Theyhavenothingtocelebrateandnoonetosharetheirsadness.这段采用先A后B的对照方式,阐述胜利者和失败者的不同特征。这种写法较易操作,但行文往往比较平淡单调。再来看看AB交错的比较方式:Ilikehavingatwinsister.Whensheshappy,Imhappy.Whenshefeelsunhappy,Ifeelthesame.Often,Iknowwhatshesgoingtosay.Sometimes,Iknowwhatshesthinking.Ilikewhatshelikes.Ihatewhatshehates.Welikethesamemusic,thesamefoodandthesamebooks.这段采用AB交错的比较方式,阐述孪生姐妹的相同特征。这种写法较流畅自然,给读者的印象也更鲜明突出。6.过程分析法过程分析法就是把事物发展过程分为若干步骤,然后逐一加以分析说明。这种写法在说明文中使用得相当广泛。过程分析与叙事和因果关系等写法有密切关系,但彼此又有明显区别:叙事研究的对象是Whathappens;因果关系研究的对象是Whyithappens,而过程分析研究的对象是Howithappens。例如:Thereareseveralstepstoplantatree.First,digaholelargeenoughforthetree,buttheholeshouldnotbetoodeep.Second,putthetreeintheholesothatitisstraight.Third,puttheearthbackintotheholeagain.Pushitdownhardwithyourfootseveraltimes.Finally,waterthetreewell,asoftenaspossible.这段分析了植树过程中的几个步骤。全段层次分明,连接词语(first,second,third,finally)的使用加强了语句的连贯性。还必须说明的是,在实际写作中,我们很少单独采用上述几种方法中的某一种。不少段落(或文章)的写作都是综合使用各种不同的写作方法。同时还应明确,在写作中有意识地侧重使用某一种方法是有好处的。此外,上述这些说明文的写作方法在议论文中也常被采用。如何使用这些方法,写出一篇好的文章来,还需在平时认真积累,勤加练习。范文1:以“早起是好习惯”为题写篇议论文。请围绕以下几点来写：早起与健康；早起与学习；早起与一天的活动。(字数80120，要求自拟标题)Getting Up Early Is a Good HabitGetting up early is a good habit. It is very important to our health, our study, our life and so on. First, getting up early helps to keep us strong. We can do morning exercises in the open air in the morning and breathe fresh air to build our bodies. Second, getting up early helps us to memorize what we have learned in class by reading aloud in the morning. Third, getting up early can help us to find enough time to prepare our work of the day. If we stick to getting up early every day, it will do us a lot of good.7范文2：Writing: 1. 校学生会将组织一次暑期志愿者活动，现招募志愿者。 2.本次志愿者活动的目的，内容、安排等。 3.报名条件及联系方式。 Volunteers NeededA voluntary activity in the summer vacation will be organized by the University Students Union. The Student Union will open free English classes for the youngsters in S.O.S Childrens Village. The classes will last for a week. Currently, we will recruit 5 volunteers to work as English teachers. The volunteers are requested to speak fluent English. Those with English teaching experience are preferable. Besides the English skills, we expect the volunteers to be patient, open-minded with a loving heart. The Childrens Village will provide the volunteers with three meals a day and transportation from and to the university during the class days. Those who are interested in taking part in the activity, please send your resume to the email address before June 30th. The office of the Student Union will contact the chosen candidates for an interview before July 10th. 范文3：MY COMPUTER I have a computer which was bought by my parents for my birthday present. Its a new one ,its name is Lenovo which was made in China. It can store and work with large quantities of information and can do hard mathematical problems fast and help a person work with word and pictures. With this computer I have learn lot of knowledge of computer, besides it I can use it for learning and interment such as chatting with others, watching TV and playing games. It was so useful that I can help but like it very much.图表作文第一段：The table/graph/chart shows, as far as _(is/are)concerned, _.第二段：（第二段分为三种情况：1、一直上升；2、一直下降；3、一部分上升，一部分下降。下面针对这三种情况进行结构模仿）。1、（以1978年到1998年城镇乡村收入的稳步较长图为例）。a.一直上升According to the figures show in the graph, we can see that_, had been increasing at a steady rate from the year of 1978 to 1998. In addition, during the period, _had raise from 349.9 Yuan to 5425 Yuan, more than 5 times .Meanwhile, _had also grown from 133.6 Yuan to 2100 Yuan.b. 一直下降According to the figures show inthe graph, we can seethat_, had been decreasing at e steady rate from the year of 1978 to 1998. In addition, during the periond,_had reduced from 349.9 Yuan to 5425 Yuan, more than 5 times .Meanwhile ,_had also gone down 133.6 Yuan to 2100 Yuan.2、以从1995年到1999年西安人的日常生活支出（食物、服装和娱乐）的变化为例c. 一部分上升，一部分下降：According to the figures in the graph, we can see that_hadbeen increasing by 9% and 7%, respectively from the year of 1995 to1999. However,_(the expenses on food)had been decline by30% ,during the same period. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely toone another.第三段：There are several reasons for that phenomenon. On the hand, _;On the other hand,_,_.注：横线部分为自己需填充的内容，这只是整篇文章的格式,红色横线部分视考题而定，可填充的内容经济类/发展类/旅游类/文化交流类：1. The policy ofreformation and opening spreader widely in China should be taken into account firstly, when considering the reason for the steady increase of the citizens income.2. The people of China has the spirit of working hard in order to improve their living.3. Chinas rapid economic development lays the base. 4. In the past twenty five years, remarkable changes have taken place in Chinas tourism rank in the world.5. The economy of China has developed so fast in twenty years that China now becomes more and more important in the world. 6. Im confident that with the development of China the numbers of visitors and the foreign exchange earrings will certainly continues to increase in the future. 7. With the rapid development of technology and the global economy ,the world is becoming international, cultural exchanges are becoming more and more frequent ,which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.食品类：1、In order to live a healthy long life, we have to restrict our calorie intake eating the food with less fat. 2、We should make our diet more nutrit