广东高考基础写作提出建议

提出建议主题：给交友有困难的同学提建议。I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.[引出建议]Herearesometipstohelpyou.[列举建议]First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,Iamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriend.Second，youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,(理由)whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewiththesameinterests.Finally，youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion,(理由)lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.灵活运用超级模仿一、篇章结构引出建议→列举建议与理由(→希望)二、句式模板1.引出建议可以用：⑴Herearemysuggestionsonhowto...3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。三、语篇模板Itisknowntousallthatnothingismoreimportantthantokeephealthy.[引出]Thewaysforustokeepfitcanbesuggestedasfollows.[列举]Firstly,weshouldhaveahealthydiet,whichmeansavarietyoffoodincludingmeat,freshfruitsandvegetables.

Secondly,drinkmorewaterinsteadofalotofdrinks.Lastly,dosomeexerciseeveryday,suchasrunning,swimming,playingbasketballandsoon,fortheyhelptorelaxourselvesaswellasbenefitourhealthalot.二、根底写作假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助：[写作内容]请根据以上帖子内容,给Grow-up回贴,并包括以下要点：1.你对这一问题的看法(已给出)；2.告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲；3.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议:多与母亲交流;行动上证明自己已成年。Hi,Grown-up，...Hi,Grown-up，Asastudentofyourage,Iunderstandyoursituationandtheproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongusteenagers.However,youshouldunderstandyourmotheranditiswisenottodoanythingthatmayhurtyourmother’sfeelings.[引出建议]Suggestionsonhowtodealwiththeproblemcanbelistedasfollows.[列举建议]First，it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom，(理由)whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Second，youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswellbyyourself，(理由)provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadya“grown-up〞.It’sevenbetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework，(列举)suchascleaning，washingandcooking.◆课堂练习假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他比照赛非常担忧，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。[写作内容]1.说明回信的意图；2.向小明提出建议；3.预祝小明比赛成功。DearXiaoming，...Yours，LiHua[参考范文]DearXiaoming,YouhavetoldmethatyouareverynervousaboutthecomingspeechcontestandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionswhichIhopecanhelpyou.Inmyopinion,youshouldgetwellpreparedbeforethespeechcontestbypracticingbeforeamirror.Besides,youhadbetteruseabriefandconcise〔简明的〕languageinyourspeechsothatyoucanleaveadeepimpressiononthejudges.Whenyouaregivingthespeech,remembertokeepsmileandevenifyouforgetyourwords,don’tbepanic〔惊慌的〕andjustcontinueyourspeech,becausenoonewillnoticeit.Wishyousuccessinthespeech! Yours， LiHua[精华点评]建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯,使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者Youshould的句型表示建议,这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富,如范文中使用了youshould...,youhadbetter...,remembertodo等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候,可以用简明扼要的句型,如wishyougoodluck/wishyousuccess/mayyousucceed,使文章长短句结合得当。◆晨读背诵1.covertopicslike...涵盖的主题有……2.arouseone’sinterest激发某人的兴趣3.getinvolvedin参与，涉及4.bewell-received广受欢送5.makesomesuggestions提一些建议相关短语6.protectourenvironment保护我们的环境7.theenvironmentalpollution环境污染8.beofgreatbenefitto...对……大有好处9.getwell-prepared(for)(为……)做好充分的准备10.takeresponsibilitytodosth.有责任做某事11.thecomingspeechcontest即将到来的演讲比赛12.leaveadeepimpressionon给……留下深刻的印象13.takemysuggestionintoconsideration考虑我的建议14.havethechancetodosth.有时机做某事15.helpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish帮助学生提高英语水平1.Themainreasonisthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.其主要原因是父母的压力使他们几乎没有时间参加其他活动。2.ThereasonwhyI’mlateisthatImissedthebus.我迟到的原因是没赶上公共汽车。相关句式3.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyfortworeasons.我喜欢它,主要有两个原因。4.Inmyopinion,therearethreereasonsfor

this.在我看来,有三个原因。5.Myviewsarebasedonthefollowing

reasons.我的观点是基于以下理由。6.Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.其理由如下。7.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends’advice.因此,我建议你接受你朋友的建议。8.HereIhavesomesuggestions.这里我有几条建议。8.Itwouldbebetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.如果你能分担更多的家务,如扫地、洗衣、做饭,那就更好了。◆技巧点拨1.在建议建议的写作中,应开门见山指出写作目的,陈述建议或建议的内容。如：Iamwritingtogivesuggestionsabout...(建议信)或Inorderto...,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions(建议书)。2.建议建议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型,考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比方,在句中使用到advise,suggest或advice,suggestion等表示建议的词时,要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。◆典型例题广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目,新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在,John就节目内容向广阔中学生征求意见。[写作内容]假设你是学生李华,建议开办“广州全接触〞(All-roundGuangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信：DearJohn，Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou〞....Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration. Sincerelyyours, LiHua[例题导写]确定文体。建议信属于应用文信件类的范畴,写作的时候一般使用将来时或者一般现在时。建议信在于给对方合理并且能够接受的建议,考生应该注意使用一些委婉的语气。信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子：1.节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮食、名人。2.建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。3.建议邀请中学生参加节目,激发学生的收看兴趣。4.这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化,还有助于提高中学生的英语水平,这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。5.我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢送。词语翻译翻译或完成以下词或短语。句1：(1)包括……(节目)_____________(2)历史，教育，景点，饮食，名人____________________________________________________________History,education,scenicspots/touristattractions,food,famouspeople/celebritiescover/include句3：(3)激发某人的兴趣____________________________________句4：(4)提高英语水平______________________

句5：(5)受到欢送____________________________________________________________________________bepopularamong/withsb./bewell-receivedby/bewelcomedbyspark/stimulate/arouseone’sinterestimproveone’sEnglish难句翻译翻译以下每组句子并合并成一句。句2：(1)(这个节目将于)每周六、日(播放)。(1)Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekends./Isuggestthattheprogrambebroadcastonweekends./Itisagoodideatobroadcastitonweekends.(2)方便学生周末观看。(2)Westudentscanhavethechancetowatchit./Itwillbeconvenientforusstudentstowatchit.合并：Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.(因果关系,可以使用so...that...句型)句3：(3)(你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。(3)Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram.(4)(这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。(4)Itwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudents’interestinit.合并：

Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudents’interestinit.(补充说明关系,可以使用which非限制性定语从句)句4：(5)(这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。(5)ThisprogramcangetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhou.(6)(中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广州。(6)ThestudentscanintroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(7)(这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。(7)ThisprogramhelpsstudentsimprovetheirEnglish.合并：

NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(第5个句子和第7个句子是并列关系,因此我们可以用notonly...butalso...这组连词把它们连接起来,并且注意统一主语,第6句是作者提出建议的原因,可以用soasto引导出目的状语。)[参考范文]DearJohn，Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou〞.Thisprogramwillcovertopicslikethehistory,education,famousscenicspots,foodandfamouspeopleofGuangzhou.Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.Besides,youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouseotherstudents’interestinit.NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.Iamsureitwillbewell-receivedbythemiddleschoolstudents.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration. Sincerelyyours, LiHua连句成篇。考生把句子合并成篇章的时候,需要注意建议信常用的一些句型结构。如在建议信开头表示来信的目的,如：Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesuggestions./Thanksfortrustingme./Regarding...,I’dliketomakesomesuggestions等句型。在表示建议的时候,考生可以使用Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...等句型。另外,考生假设是使用虚拟语气的句子IfIwereyou,Iwould...,也会让文章增色不少。[能力提高]ToWhomItMayConcernAs1__studentofthisuniversity,Iwouldliketotaketheopportunitytoexpressmyappreciation2___yourkindassistanceasalways.Meanwhile,Ifeelthat3__wouldbe4_________(benefit)toexpressmyviews5____________(concern)thequalityofthelibraryservice.concerningaforitbeneficialInthefirstplace,Ifindthatmostkeyboardsofthelibrarycomputersareinpooroperation,6_____bringsmuchinconveniencetotheusers.Iwouldalsorecommendthelibrary7_________(improve)theefficiencyofbuyingnewbooksandacademicjournals.Last8____notleast,thestudyroomsneedtobefurnished9____abetterlightingsystem.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoserious10____________(consider). Yourssincerely, Johnwhichtoimprove

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withconsideration假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda来信说她家搬到了一个新城市，她几乎没有朋友，每天除了上课就是在家上网，感觉很孤独。请你给她写一封信，劝她多结交朋友，参加社会活动。

DearLinda,

Iknowit’shardtostartanewlifeinastrangecity.However,juststayingathomedoingnothingbutsurftheInternetisnotgoodforyou.You’dbettergooutandjoininsomesocialactivities.Bydoingthis,youcangettoknowmorepeoplearound,anditwouldbeagoodideatohelpothersifpossibleandshowthemyouareopenandfriendlyaswell.

Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyou.

Bestwishes!读写任务阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。ShiFangspendsmorethan4,000yuanamonthshopping,butsherarelygoestotheshoppingmall.“WhyneedashoppingmallifyouhaveTaobao?IamaTaobaoer,〞saysShi,28,afreelancewriter(自由作家)inBeijing.Taobao,China’slargestonlineshoppingsitehasbecomeanessentialpartofShiFang’slife.ShespendshalfofhermonthlysalarytoTaobao,loggingontothewebsiteeveryday,evenwhenshedoesn’tneedanything,simplyto“stayupdatedtothelatestitems〞.AgrowingnumberofChineseInternetuserslikeShihavediscoveredthejoysofonlineshopping.TheChinaInternetNetworkInformationCenter(CNNIC)announcedinDecemberthatmorethan87millionChinesemadepurchasesontheInternetinthefirsthalfyear,whichmeansoneoutoffourChinesenetizens(网民)haveonlineshoppingexperience.

Itisestimatedthattheannualconsumptionfromonlineshoppingwillreachmorethan250billionyuanthisyear,and80percentofthisiscarriedoutthroughTaobao.com,China’sfast-growinge-commercehub(电子商务中心)establishedin2003.

[写作内容]1.以约30个词概括短文的内容要点；2.然后以约120个词就“网购〞为主题发表你的看法,内容包括:(1)表达你自己或身边朋友的一次网购经历。(2)分析现实购物与网购的各自的好处。(3)对于购物你有何建议?ThepassagemainlytellsusthatmoreandmorenetizensinChinalikeShiFangbuygoodsontheInternet,amongwhichTaobaoisthelargestonlineshoppingsite.Almosttwomonthsago,Iwantedtobuymymotherabirthdaypresent,butIdidn’thavemuchtimetogoshopping.IsurfedtheInternetandfoundapinkhandbagwhichIthoughtwouldfitmymotherperfectly.Ipaidandreceiveditsevendayslater.Tomydelight,mymotherlikeditverymuch.Thereisnodoubtthatshoppingonlinehassomeadvantages.Firstofall,it’squiteconvenienttoshoponlineforweneedn’tgofromoneshoptoanother,sowecansavelotsoftime.Inaddition,,shoppingonlineisalsocheaperandmorecolorfultousandtheInternetprovidesuswiththegoodscominginallshapes,sizesandcolors,whichcanmeetourdemands.

However,traditionalshoppingalsohasitsownbenefits.Foronething,ourpersonalinformationmaybeletoutwhenshoppingonline.Foranother,whengoingshoppinginperson,youcanexperiencethecolor,shape,andqualityofgoodsandenjoydiscussingyourchoiceswithfriends.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheInternetandbuyinginstoresarebothimportanttousinourdailylife.Weshouldconsidercarefullyandchoosewhatwewanttobuyaccordingourownsituations.

◆课外作业由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存,为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动〞的环保活动,假设你是高三6班的一名学生,将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活〞的建议,以下是建议的内容：1.尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;2.少喝一次瓶装水；3.尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次；5.每周少开、电视一天。[写作内容]1.活动背景;2.建议目的;3.建议内容。Helloeveryone,IamLiHuafromClassSix,SeniorThree....Ibelieveeveryone,asamemberofthisglobalvillage,shouldtakeresponsibilitytotakepartintheglobalgreencampaign![参考范文]IamLiHuafromClassSix,SeniorThree.Wehumanbeingsareseriouslythreatenedby

theenvironmentalpollution,suchaswastegases,dirtywaterandwhitepollution.Inordertoencourageallofustosaveenergyandprotectourenvironment,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions.Itissuggestedthatweshouldwalkortakebikesifwegoout.Toavoidwhitepollution，wecanreducetheuseofbottledwaterandunrecyclabl