定语从句与写作公开课

AttributiveclauseGrammarandwriting

2021/5/91Lead-inEnjoythesong-theoneyouloveIknowyouneedafriend

Someoneyoucantalkto

Whowillunderstandwhatyou'regoingthrough

Whenitcomestolove

There'snoeasyanswer

Onlyyoucansaywhatyou'regonnado

Iheardyouonthephone

Youtookhisnumber

Saidyouweren'talone,butyou'dcallhimsoon

Isn'thetheguy

Theguywholeftyoucrying'

Isn'thetheonewhomadeyoublue

Whenyourememberthosenightsinhisarms

Youknowyou'vegottamakeupyourmind

Areyougonnastaywiththeonewholovesyou

Orareyougoingbacktotheoneyoulove

Iknowyouneedafriend

Someoneyoucantalkto

Whowillunderstandwhatyou'regoingthrough

Whenitcomestolove

There'snoeasyanswer

Onlyyoucansaywhatyou'regonnado

Iheardyouonthephone

Youtookhisnumber

Saidyouweren'talone,butyou'dcallhimsoon

Isn'thetheguy

Theguywholeftyoucrying'

Isn'thetheonewhomadeyoublue

Whenyourememberthosenightsinhisarms

Youknowyou'vegottamakeupyourmind

Areyougonnastaywiththeonewholovesyou

Orareyougoingbacktotheoneyoulove

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Someone'sgonnacrywhentheylearnthey'velostyou

Someone'sgonnathankthestarsabove

2021/5/93PracticeoftheAttributiveclause

1.Aplaneisamachine___________canfly.

2.Thecar____________myuncleboughtlastweekwasstolen.

3.Theman_________iswalkingontheplaygroundismyoldfriend.

4.Thewoman_________yousawintheparkisourEnglishteacher.

which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that)2021/5/94

5.Isawawoman_______bagwasstolen.

6.Thereason______hewaslatewasthathegotuplate.7.Istillremembertheday_______IfirstcametoBeijing.

8.Itisanimportantday________Iwillneverforget.

9.Thepark__________theypaidavisittoisbeautiful.whosewhywhenWhich/thatWhich/that2021/5/95定语从句在写作中的应用2021/5/96Part1:高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：2013年全国高考新课标你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。Youknow,myuncleLiMingisgoingtothecitywhereyoulivetoattendaninternationalmeeting.我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。I’veaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepaintingyouhaveaskedforbefore.2021/5/972.2013年广东高考那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。Thosewhodosimpleandordinaryjobsarealsopromotingthedevelopmentofthesociety.正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。Asweallknow,cleaningstreetsisoneofthehardestwork.2021/5/98Part2:写作中定语从句的主要作用1.增加词数可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词的重复和句式单一。补充细节，以丰富文章内容。2021/5/99Part3:如何写出定语从句题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution:1>找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。

2>将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）Forexample:我们班是一个大家庭。这个大家庭包括17个男生和7个女生。

2021/5/910Ourclassisabigfamily.Thefamilyconsistsof17boysand7girls.Ourclassisabigfamily,whichconsistsof17boysand7girls.2021/5/911Practice:

把下面各题中的句子合并为一个含有定语从句的主从复合句1．a.Seeingthesechanges,wecannotforgetthem.b.Theygaveusunselfishhelpwhenwewereintrouble.__________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Seeingthesechanges,wecannotforgetthosewhogaveusunselfishhelpwhenwewereintrouble.2021/5/9122．a.Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtohostthecontest.b.ThecontestissponsoredbytheStudents'Union.________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Ifeelgreatlyhonoredtohostthecontest,whichissponsoredbytheStudents'Union.2021/5/9133．a.Theysenttheelderlysomefruits,cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.b.Theelderlyalwaysfeellonely.__________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Theysenttheelderlywhoalwaysfeellonelysomefruits,cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.2021/5/9144．a.Thelibraryisnotfarfromhere.b.Thewriteroftendoessomereadingthere.__________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Thelibrarywherethewriteroftendoessomereadingisnotfarfromhere.2021/5/9155．a.I‘vealwayslongedforthedays.b.Iwillbeabletobeindependentthen.________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：I'vealwayslongedforthedayswhenIwillbeabletobeindependent.2021/5/916Practice:1.我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。2.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。3.他居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。4.我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。2021/5/917我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。MybestfriendisLiMing.Hisnicknameishippo.MybestfriendisLiMing,whosenicknameishippo.2021/5/918Idon’tlikehisnickname.Thereasonisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.ThereasonwhyIdon’tlikehisnicknameisthatitdeeplyhurtshim.我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。2021/5/919她居住在开封，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。HelivesinKaiFeng.Peoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspotshere.HelivesinKaiFeng,wherepeoplecanvisitlotsofscenicspots.(注意此处不再有here)2021/5/920我们过去常常在一起上美术课，我不会忘记那段日子。Weusedtoattendpaintingclasstogether.Iwillneverforgetthedays.Iwillneverforgetthedayswhenweusedtoattendpaintingclasstogether.2021/5/9212.题干中只有一个孤立的简单句Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。Forexample:开封是一个历史名城。KaiFengisafamoushistoriccity.KaiFengisafamoushistoriccity,whichhasalonghistoryofmorethan2700yearsandlargenumbersofhistoricspots,suchastheIronPagoda,LongtingParkandsoon.有多久的历史？因何出名？2021/5/922Practice:即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。李明是一个热心肠的人。TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival.TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChinesetraditionalfestival,whichiscelebratedtohonorournationalhero,QuYuan.(节日的目的)2021/5/923李明是一个热心肠的人。LiMingisawarm-heartedman.LiMingisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayslendsahandtoothers.(具体化)2021/5/924直击高考（2013年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算（包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.Travelingisoneofmychoices,whichwillenrichmylifeandbroadenmyhorizen.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillmakeagreatcontributiontothesociety.Travelingisoneofmychoices,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,Travelingisoneofmychoices,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,Travelingisoneofmychoices,2021/5/925TranslatethefollowingEnglishproverbsintoChineseandthenpickouttheattributiveclauses.Godhelpthosewhohelpthemselves.

2.Hewholaughslastlaughsbest.3.Hewhodoesn’treachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.4.Hewhoiscontent(满足)isalwayshappy.2021/5/926Challengeyourself!2021/5/927根据下列句子，完成短文。众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了2008年奥运会。通过本届奥运会，中国完美地向世界展现了自己。英语作为一种国际语言，在和外国人的交流中起着重要作用。本届奥运会上友好的志愿者们很好地利用了这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。注意：要使用定语从句.playa…part/rolein,seizetheopportunity,makecontributionsto2021/5/928

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