英语话题类作文的写作方法的探析 中英文对照.doc

有关英语话题类作文的写作方法的探析中英文对照about english conversation class composition writing methods of analysis contrast in both chinese and english一、话题类作文的概念a topic, the concept of class composition “话题作文”，就是由命题老师给出一个社会热点话题，然后学生以这个话题为为中心来进行选材写出文章，在写话题作文时，学生可以提出自己的观点，在内容和体裁上均不受限制，由于话题作为具有开放式的特点，与命题作文相比，可以提供更大的写作空间和发挥余地给考生。topic composition, is a social hot topics presented by propositional teacher, and student centered on the topic as for material selection to write articles, write topic composition, the students can put forward their own point of view, on the content and form are not restrictive, because of the topic, as has the characteristics of open, compared with the proposition composition, can provide greater writing space and room to play for the examinee. 二、话题类作文写作的五个切入点second, the subject class five point of composition writing （一）漂亮清晰的书写(a) beautiful clear writing 由于清晰的书写是英语文章“美丽的嫁衣”，所以，要想提高高考作文给分档次不但要写出内在质量很高的文章还要在平时的一点一滴中锤炼外在形象书法基本功，这样才能给予阅卷老师良好的第一印象，使阅卷老师愿意花时间仔细阅读这篇作文，如果这篇作文具备相当的质量，就可以在同等质量的作文中脱颖而出，因而在写英语作文时我们首要注意的问题便是漂亮而清晰的书写。because clear writing english article is pretty good, so, in order to improve the university entrance exam composition for along time not only to write high quality articles within and external image, in the usual little by little to temper calligraphy basic skills, so as to give read teacher good first impression, make the marking the teacher is willing to take time to carefully read the composition, if the quality of the composition has quite, can stand out in the composition of the same quality, so we first pay attention to when writing english composition problem is beautiful and clear writing. （二）精巧的导入（perfect leading in）(2) sophisticated import (perfect leading in) 导入部分为文章的第一自然段，这个段落相当于一个人的头颅，俗话说“人无头不走、鸟无翅不飞”，是否能写好文章的第一段落对文章的整体质量的优劣有着至关重要的影响，因此导入要精巧，学生必须开动脑筋，紧紧围绕中心话题，以简洁精炼的几句话将作文的主要内容进行一个总结，让阅卷老师了解你的写作目的，其次还要巧妙的以一种制造悬念的形式引出下文，吸引阅卷老师的阅读兴趣，使之产生一睹为快的欲望。import parts for the first paragraph of article, this section is equivalent to a persons head, as the saying goes, people dont walk without a, wingless birds dont fly, if you can write good articles quality of overall quality in the first paragraph of the article has a crucial influence, so the import to delicate, students have to use your head, tightly around the center topic, with concise refining the main content of the composition of a few words in a summary, for marking the teacher to understand your purpose, even next clever derivation below, in the form of a suspense to attract marking the teachers reading interest, the desire to make it produce the photos. （三）合理的扩展（reasonable enlargement）(3) reasonable extension (reasonable enlargement) 扩展部分主要指文章除开头和结尾以外的段落，既是全文的主体部分，也是整篇文章的重心所在，如果用人作比喻，第一自然段相当于人的头颅，那么这一部分就相当于人的身体，所以，对于这一部分，学生应结合所给的话题进行研究分析，做到对主题内容的合理扩展，在合理运用数据、论证等实际材料的同时，逐渐表明自己的观点。extension refers to article except the beginning and end of paragraphs, as the main part of the full text, is also the focus of the whole article, if as a metaphor of choose and employ persons, equivalent to the first paragraph people head, so this part is equivalent to the human body, so, for this part, students should be combined with the given topic for research analysis, to reasonable extension of the theme content, the reasonable use data, argument, etc. the actual material at the same time, gradually showed his point of view. （四）完美简洁的结尾（beautiful ending）(4) at the end of the perfect compact (beautiful ending) 结尾部分是文章的第三自然段相当于一个人的两条腿，所以结尾要干净利落不拖泥带水，既要表明自己的观点，有很深的见解，还要能给读者以启发，引起读者的深思，因而在结尾部分，学生必须具备良好的总结归纳能力，用简练的语言将自己的观点进行阐述，并提出具体的例证，使观点具备很强的说服力和引发思考的能力。ending part is the third paragraph of article is equivalent to a persons legs, so at the end to clean is not slow, both to show its point of view, and have deep insights, but also can give the reader a inspiration, set readers thinking, so in the end, students must have good ability of summarizing, the paper expounds his views with concise language, specific examples, and puts forward views with strong persuasive power and the ability to think. （五）漂亮的文笔和优良的遣词造句能力(5) beautiful style of writing and excellent written ability 为了使文章在阐述观点和哲理的同时具备良好的可读性，就要求学生具备良好的文笔写作水平和遣词造句的能力，所以，学生在写文章时，首先要注意运用多变的句型，就像炒菜要放葱姜蒜油盐酱醋全作料菜才有味道，精雕细酌后才能“出锅装盘” 一样。作文的句子也应该丰富多彩，学生应在使用简单句的基础之上，努力使用一些较高级的句式如状语从句、定语从句、倒装句、强调句式、非谓语动词等句型来提高自己文章的水平，使自己的文章更具可读性；其次，还要善于使用一些相关的谚语、歇后语和名人名言等来使文章增色，更具说服力。例如：rome was not built in one day.（冰冻三尺非一日之寒）； practice makes perfect.（熟能生巧）等；另外，为了增强文章的逻辑性及层次关系行文中也应多用一些“小品词”对扩展部分精心包装，如：firstly、secondly、thirdly、 whats more、 besides、 moreover、 on the one hand、on the other hand等，这些表示时间和逻辑顺序的词语会使整篇文章层次鲜明。in order to make based on the illustration of the point of view and philosophy at the same time have good readability, requires students to have good prose writing and phrasing ability, so that students in writing articles, first of all to pay attention to use varied sentence patterns, like cooking and put onion ginger garlic oil salt sauce vinegar has only all the ingredients of food flavor, carved fine action to out of the pot plate. thesis sentence should also be rich and colorful, students should be on the basis of using simple sentences, try to use some more advanced sentence such as adverbial clause and attributive clause and strue-ture, emphasize the sentence, a predicate verb sentence patterns to improve own level of the article, make your article more readable. to be good at using some related proverbs, secondly, xiehouyu and leaming to add to the article, more convincing. for example: rome was not built in one day. (rome is not build in one day); practice top service perfect. (practice makes perfect), etc.; in addition, in order to enhance the logic and hierarchy should also use some short term in writing extensions to elaborate packaging, such as: firstly, secondly, thirdly, what s more, fit, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, these time and logical sequence of words can make the entire article level is distinct. 三、范文点评加深写作技巧third, model essay comments on writing skills 话题；现在因为生活水平的提高，手机已经进入了中小学校园，许多学生拥有了手机：然而学生使用手机也带来了许多问题，如打游戏、发信息、考试作弊、浪费时间、精力、金钱、影响学习等现象。请你就这一话题，谈谈自己的看法。topic; now because of the improvement of living standards, the mobile phone has entered the school, many students have mobile phones, however, students use the mobile phone also brings many problems, such as play games, send messages, cheating in the exam, waste of time, energy, money and influence the phenomenon such as learning. please on this topic, talk about their own views. 范文：this viewpoint: nowadays with the development of society and economy，cellphones have poured into schoolgardens. more and more students come to school with cellphones. as for this，whether carrying cellphones to shool should be allowed or not is a problem for schools and teachers.nowadays with the development of society and pa, cellphones have poured into schoolgardens. more and more students last come to school with cellphones. as for this, been to their cellphones to shool should be allowed or not is a problem for schools and head. the ideas on it are different.some people think it is convenient to get in touch with others with cellphones，which also make them feel safe especially when they are in time of trouble. moreover，it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cellphones.but others think differently. firstly，the cellphone is not a must in school，as there are some ic phones there，making it easy to call others. secondly，many students often play e-games and send e-messages with their cellphones even in class，which affect their studies.and worse still，a few students use the cellphone to cheat in exams，which will surely have very bad effects on their studies，resulting a great waste of time，money and energy.the ideas on it are different.some people think it is convenient to get in touch with others with cellphones，which also make them feel safe especially when they are in time of trouble. moreover，it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cellphones.but others think differently. firstly，the cellphone is not a must in school，as there are some ic phones there，making it easy to call others. secondly，many students often play e-games and send e-messages with their cellphones even in class，which affect their studies.and worse still，a few students use the cellphone to cheat in exams，which will surely have very bad effects on their studies，resulting a great waste of time，money and energy. in my opinion，any coin has its two sides.the cellphone is indeed a useful tool for communication in our daily life，but it doesnt mean we can use it freely in school. as students we should use it in a proper way to make our life much more colourful.it s in my opinion, any coin has two sides, the cellphone is indeed a useful tool for communication in our daily life, but it doesn t mean we can use it freely in school. as students we should use it in a proper way to make our life much more colourful. 点评：comment on: 这篇文章是一篇学生佳作，文章运用“三段论”的形式，首段导入部分开门见山，中段扩展部分有理有据，结尾收尾部分构思巧妙。该篇文章句型结构多样：运用了简单句、并列句、复合句。文中运用了非限制性定语从句、非谓语动词等较高难的句式，显示了小作者扎实的写作功底。另外文中对于“小品词”的使用也很到位。尾段里用了“任何事物都有两面性”这一谚语，增强了文章的说服力。美中不足的是该文字数达二百多词应适当压缩。该篇文章属于a类文。this article is a student, article using the form of syllogism, the first period of the import parts cut to the chase, middle extension justified, at the end of final part are clever. a variety of structures: the article uses a simple sentence, paratactic sentence, complex sentence. in this paper, we use the non-restrictive attributive clauses and the predicate verb is a hard sentence, author shows a small solid writing skills. in addition this paper for the use of particle is also in place. in late with the saying everything has two sides, enhance the article convincing. fly in the ointment is the word count is more than two hundred words should be appropriate compression. this article belongs to a class. 由以上范文和教师评语，我们可以看出，一篇好的话题作文首先要逻辑清晰、思路分明，运用“三段式”的写作形式将文章进行总分总，让读者一目了然整篇文章的结构：要有精巧的开头，向读者展示整篇文章的中心和写作目的，合理的扩展，客观具体的向读者展示现存于社会上的不同观点，漂亮的结尾，提出例证表明自己的观点；其次还要注重遣词造句，运用多样性的句型和相关引用语句来使自己的文章在文采上更提升一个档次，在表意上更具说服力。fan wenhe teacher comments by the above, we can see that a good topic composition must first clear logic and thinking clearly, using the