外研版初中英语Module 11 Way of life Module task-------Writing course课件.ppt

module 11 way of life module task-writing course,giving advice to friends who are visiting a foreign country,module 11 way of life module task -writing course,giving advice to friends who are visiting a foreign country,christmas,accept a present,a present,they can accept presents with one hand.,open a present,they can open it immediately.,they must say “thank you!”.,make noise,they cant make any noise at table.,they must eat with knives and forks.,they can visit friends with flowers, chocolate or wine.,flowers chocolate wine,the most unpopular present,a white flower,they cant send white flowers to others.,send a white flower,arrive,arrive on time,theyd better arrive on time.,they have to arrive on time.,in england,they can accept presents with one hand.,they can open the presents immediately.,they cant make any noise at table.,they must eat with knives and forks.,they can visit friends with flowers, chocolate or wine.,they mustnt send white flowers to others.,认真审题，找出文章需表达的要点。 read the given topic carefully and find out the requirements(要点，要求） from it.,step 1,审(search),hello, miss li. this christmas were going to england. we have never been there before. can you give me some advice ? what can ido? what must i do? what mustnt i do?,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列(list),step 2,what can ido? what must i do? what mustnt i do?,mustnt,accept presents with one hand,send friends some flowers,arrive on time,take some presents,use a knife and fork,send white flowers,make noise,ask others age,use the mind- map (思维导图）,visit friends,accept presents with one hand,send friends some flowers,arrive on time,take some presents,use a knife and fork,step 3,写 write,句子结构：主语+情态动词+动词原形,visit friends,step 3,写 write,mustnt,send white flowers,make noise,ask others age,you mustnt send white flowers to others.,主语+情态动词+动词原形,you mustnt send white flowers to others, because it means bad luck.,连词：because/ so/ but/ however/ or,you can visit friends but _.,remember to take some presents.,you can take some presents, however, its not good to _ _.,send white flowers,写 write,step 3,send white flowers to others,you cant send white flowers to others. you mustnt send white flowers to others.,主语+情态动词+动词原形,you mustnt send white flowers to others, because it means bad luck.,连词：because/ so/ but/ however/ or,its impolite to talk loudly at table,so you mustnt make any noise at table.,try to use the words or phrases you know. 避开生词,mustnt,send white flowers,make noise,ask others age,its not good to talk loudly at table, so you mustnt make any noise at table.,加(add),加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开 头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,add a beginning and an ending to the body.,step 4,christmas is the most important festival in england. people send presents to friends in christmas. when someone sends you a present, you can open it immediately. its a good idea to send your friend a present. but pay attention not to sending your friends white flowers. you must use a knife and fork for food. you mustnt talk loudly at table.,hello, kimi. england is a very good place to visit. but english traditional customs are very different from ours. here is some advice for you:,in short, when in england, do as english do.i hope you can enjoy your trip!,beginning,body,ending,spring festival,pay a new years visit 拜年,sweep the floor,take some fruit,send a clock,break something,cut hair,wear new clothes,enjoy the dragon and lion dance,play fireworks,eat dumplings,get lucky money,have a family dinner,use chopsticks,mustnt,use black paper for hongbao,talk happily and loudly,accept presents with both hands.,group work: work in groups of four, discuss what we can/ must/ mustnt do. make lists by yourselves.,hello,boys and girls.i am coming to china to visit a friend in boluo this spring festival.can you tell me something about chinese traditional customs? what can /must/mustnt/ i do in china?,请用英语给奥巴马写一封信，告诉他到博罗家庭过 春节的一些礼节。what can he do ? what must he do? what mustnt he do?,要求： 1.词数80左右，短文开头过渡已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。,search 审,list 列,write 写,add 加,writing pratice,eat jiaozi wear new clothes cut your hair sweep the floor pay a new years visit have a family dinner play fireworks give hongbao to children take some fruit and candies talk happily and loudly send a clock use chopsticks break something ,can cant must mustnt need to neednt may youd better have to ,useful expressions:,_,dear obama, im glad to hear that you are coming to visit boluo this spring festival.we have lots of traditional customs in spring festival.,yours, tom,beginning,body,ending,查（check by yourself）,read your passage aloud, then check it by yourself.,1.要点齐了吗？ 2.句子结构对了吗？ 3.句子连贯吗？ 4.单词都写对了吗？ 5.有没错误的语法？ 6.书写整洁吗？,step5,朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求,第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。 第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。 第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。 （以上为及格线） 第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。 第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。,评分档次和要求：,dear obama, i m glad to hear that you are coming to visit boluo this spring festival. we have lots of traditional customs in spring festival. in spring festival, when you visit your friend, you must take some fruit. you mustnt send a clock to your friend. its bad luck.you must give lucky money to children, because it can bring good luck to them.you can have a meal with them, but please use chopsticks. we use chopsticks for food in china. in a word, when in china, do as chinese do! i hope you will have a good time in boluo. yours, tom,sample,different countries have different traditional customs. we should respect others customs. so when in rome, do as romans do. in china,