电话英语(2010年12月大学英语四级写作提高笔记).doc

2010年12月大学英语四级写作提高笔记43. as for me， im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation， for the following reasons：就我而言，我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点，有以下原因：44. it is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.人们普遍认为高校是不可能在毕业的时候教会他们的学生所有知识的。 45. even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.即使最优秀的毕业生，要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。46. it is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology， and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。47. now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。48. an investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望。49. for the majority of people， reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。50. for people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style， it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. just as an old saying goes： it is never too late to learn.对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老51. there is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.对于大学或高中生打工这一现象，校园里进行着广泛的争论。52. by taking a major-related part-job， students can not only improve their academic studies， but gain much experience， experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。53. although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades， it must be admitted that， shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.近几十年，管人们的生活有了惊人的改变，但必须承认，由于学费和书费日益飞涨，资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。54. consequently， the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.因此，业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。55. from what has been discussed above， we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job， which will benefit students and their family， even the society as a whole.通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论：业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响，我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作，这将有利于学生和他们的家庭，甚至整个社会。56. these days， people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. many experts point out that， along with the development of modern society， it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.现在，越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果，无法避免。57. it is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society， which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动58. at the same time， along with the benefits of such machines， employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able tol ever be ours.58. by doing结构。这个结构的意思是通过(做)，但翻译实践中不能拘泥于这种释义，不少情况下需要灵活变通。the hippos, by depositing dung in the water, fed the fish that support the storks that destroy the rare trees.59. 下面例句为一倒装句，主语很长，而且又含有非常复杂的句型。这是以形容词作表语的倒装，翻译实践中多把倒装部分译到最前面。no less obvious is the fact there are great numbers of people so constituted or so brought up that they cannot get so much pleasure out of processes and experiences resulting in a poorer life less full of meaning.60. whatof句型i can not say of myself what johnson said of pope: he never passed a fault unamended by indifference, nor quitted it by despair. i do not write as i do; i write as i can.151. on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。152. it is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。153. those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规则的人应该受到处罚。154. there is no one but longs to go to college.人们都希望上大学。155. since the examination is around the corner， i am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃作运动。156. it is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色157. summer is sultry. thats the reason why i dont like it.夏天很闷热，这就是我不喜欢它的原因。158. the progress of the society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。159. we should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们知道努力的价值。160. taking exercise is closely related to health.作运动与健康息息相关。161. we should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。162. the condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我们的交通状况令人不满意。163. smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。164. reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。165. overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。166. pollution poses a great threat o our existence.污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。167. we should do our best to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。168. weather a large family is a good thing or not is a very popular topic， which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well.家庭人口多好还是家庭人口少好是一个非常通俗的主题，不仅是城里人，而且农民都经常讨论这个问题169. as is known to all， fake and inferior commodities harm the interests of consumers.众所周知，假冒伪劣商品损害了消费者的利益。170. today an increasing number of people中间段(例论法)* 作者根据个人经历或所闻所见，列举事实说明或支持文章主题。从而使读者确切地了解其观点的含义或依据。* 例证的组织可按时间顺序、典型性、重要性等进行排列。一般说来最典型、最重要的例子放在最前面(以引起读者兴趣)或最后面(以加深读者印象)。* 具体写法手段有：条件法/具体细节法/对比法/科技法/历史法，下面一例就是具体法代表：主题：北京天气坏in spring, the weather in beijing can be very bad. it is often windy and dusty here. in spring, the wind may blow all day long, the air is then filled with fine dust which sometimes shuts out the sun. there is no escape of the fine dust. it gets into, your eyes, yours nostrils, and your hair and penetrates through the closed windows.结尾段结尾是文章的总结和思想的最后升华，它应起到再次肯定和强调主题的效果。高分作文的结尾段应短小有力，言简意赅，又意味深长。具体说来结尾段主要有以下4种表述方法：(1) 重述或总结前面的主题。将前面各段的内容，换一种方式进行总结、再述。(2) 提出一个与主题相关的问题。这一问题的答案其实在文中已描述清楚，可以说明知故问，目的是要读者同意作者本人的观点。如“as the reasons listed above, why dont you choose the public school for your child?”(关于公立、私立学校的主题)(3) 提出预测或希望作者对上面的阐述观点作一些补充和例外情况的说明，这样显得文章活泼、生动又不失客观、说明性。如：关于“电视广告”一文结尾“in a word, tv advertisement, i think, are a newborn thing in the development of our economy, of course, there is much room for improvement in the tv ads. i believe the tv ads will benefit both the advertisers and comsumers.”又如关于5天工作制的主题：“i hope someday we will have a four-day work policy”。(4) 提出建议或改进措施。作者就上面问题进行分析、比较之后，往往提出一些解决方法供读者参考，这种方法同样也具有一定的渲染力。写作必背句子汇总1. television and radio are almost the most powerful media compared with other means of mass communications like newspaper and magazine.2. and media, is i understand, couldnt be implementing the principles of fairness, objectiveness, all-roundedness and above all, the responsibility without any supervision.3. if a country is democratic, media censorship would be simpler because the government only needs to care for the programs social effect, such as the possible consequence of a movie about drug on teenagers.4. where was the censorship which may prevent such a disastrous test?5. it can and will warn the government of some problems, like corruption, so that people can trust their governors more if they see the problems solved.6. and this attitude letting the audience decide whats good for them with their own eyes, ears and minds, will guarantee a social stability in the long run.7. like the tangible environment, that is the air we breathe, the water we drink and the food on our dinner table, the worlds energy resources are the common wealth of all human beings on the globe.8. the disequilibrium between nations makes it unavoidable and indeed very necessary to have worldwide cooperation.9. the cooperation enables different nations, no matter energy rich or poor ones, to sensibly explore and make use of their energy resources by adjusting the supply and demand, and thus to avoid the so-called over-exploration and blind-consumption of the resources.42. in this case, it is better for all nations to work together and take concrete measures, such as restricting the total amount of adult materials on the whole flowing into the internet, keeping close track of the adult materials and setting up firewalls, drawing regulations to prevent as well as to control such problems, conducting continuous further research and experiments on the subject, and at the same time, educate children and adults as well with the consequences that adult materials have on children.43. another aspect of the saying that “public buildings reveal much about the society that builds them” is about what kind of new buildings are constructed most nowadays.44. as a mirror, it reflects the governments and peoples value about education.45. in fact, making plans, like setting goals, can make me aware of where im heading, avoid indulging in time-wasting activities, help me make the right decisions and more importantly, be ready for success.46. people must live together and cooperate to survive the sometimes fierce nature they might be threatened by coldness, hunger and even worse, the attack of ferocious animals.47. its not wrong to say that the primary duty and concern of a corporation is to make money, but itll be wrong to infer then conflict is inevitable when the corporation must also acknowledge a duty to serve society, because making money is a means, not an end.48. to quote fortune magazine, “business education has become largely irrelevant to business practice mba lack creativity, people skills, aptitude for teamwork and the ability to speak with clarity and conciseness all hallmarks of a good manager.”49. an old chinese saying goes, “history mirrors the present and the future”. such people do not gain the trust of others through their verbal and nonverbal behaviors either, because, without literature, they cant get their messages cross properly.50. whether we are at work, at home, or anywhere else, our lives are tied to machines.51. this kind of being tied to machines gives some people an impression of being chained.52. the digital revolution sweeping through every corner of the business community is have its share of impacts both large and small in our lives.53. and believe it or not, at the end of that article “on not answering the telephone”, the same author says, “i have just been handed a slip of paper to say that somebody is waiting to speak to me on the telephone.”54. i agree with the opinion that job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service.55. by and large, rewarding employees primarily for years of service does a lot harm than good to both eh employees and organization.56. government does have the responsibility to support art sand fulfil its role as the principal sponsor of art and cultural development of the nation.57. as we all know, ideas originate at the grassroots, and spring up in the streets, pass from galleries to museums and from clubs to concert halls, then return to the streets via radio, tv, and movies.58. the boundary between private and public is one threshold where acts of communication, including those carried out through artworks, can become not only offensive but illegal, and as david price argues “conduct becomes prohibited when the threshold is crossed and private choices encroaches upon public domain”.59. but it is often difficult to judge what is offensive and what is not, and what is private and what is public.60. today more and more governments are taking as their responsibility to keep the delicate balance of safeguarding freedom of expression while minimizing the very real risks posed by expressions which harm or threaten to harm.61. they think it is too much to expect young people to bridge the gap between intellectual knowledge and the kinds of citizenship skills, attitudes and values they will need in the “real world”.62. their utmost goals are in the pursuit of excellence in both academic and other domains of education, and are delivering educational outcomes that meet the needs and expectations of the society.63. if schools are to serve the entire society, then it is by no means appropriate.64. while a powerful business leader may play an important part in the course of a community or a nation, however, a government official has a far more decisive role and thus has more opportunity to influence the community and the nation.65. so, the energies of the former group are directed toward leading people of a region or a nation to a commonly-recognized blueprint.66. thirdly, government officials influence the direction a community or a nation takes through changing the way people think about what is desirable, possible, and necessary.67. while there are many strategies for managing a business or an enterprise, for example, downsizing, teamworking, reducing layers of management etc., the best strategy remains to be the searching for the most capable people and the offering of the biggest possible authority to them42. in this case, it is better for all nations to work together and take concrete measures, such as restricting the total amount of adult materials on the whole flowing into the internet, keeping close track of the adult materials and setting up firewalls, drawing regulations to prevent as well as to control such problems, conducting continuous further research and experiments on the subject, and at the same time, educate children and adults as well with the consequences that adult materials have on children.43. another aspect of the saying that “public buildings reveal much about the society that builds them” is about what kind of new buildings are constructed most nowadays.44. as a mirror, it reflects the governments and peoples value about education.45. in fact, making plans, like setting goals, can make me aware of where im heading, avoid indulging in time-wasting activities, help me make the right decisions and more importantly, be ready for success.46. people must live together and cooperate to survive the sometimes fierce nature they might be threatened by coldness, hunger and even worse, the attack of ferocious animals.47. its not wrong to say that the primary duty and concern of a corporation is to make money, but itll be wrong to infer then conflict is inevitable when the corporation must also acknowledge a duty to serve society, because making money is a means, not an end.48. to quote fortune magazine, “business education has become largely irrelevant to business practice mba lack creativity, people skills, aptitude for teamwork and the ability to speak with clarity and conciseness all hallmarks of a good manager.”49. an old chinese saying goes, “history mirrors the present and the future”. such people do not gain the trust of others through their verbal and nonverbal behaviors either, because, without literature, they cant get their messages cross properly.50. whether we are at work, at home, or anywhere else, our lives are tied to machines.51. this kind of being tied to machines gives some people an impression of being chained.52. the digital revolution sweeping through every corner of the business community is have its share of impacts both large and small in our lives.53. and believe it or not, at the end of that article “on not answering the telephone”, the same author says, “i have just been handed a slip of paper to say that somebody is waiting to speak to me on the telephone.”54. i agree with the opinion that job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service.55. by and large, rewarding employees primarily for years of service does a lot harm than good to both eh employees and organization.56. government does have the responsibility to support art sand fulfil its role as the principal sponsor of art and cultural development of the nation.57. as we all know, ideas originate at the grassroots, and spring up in the streets, pass from galleries to museums and from clubs to concert halls, then return to the streets via radio, tv, and movies.58. the boundary between private and public is one threshold where acts of communication, including those carried out through artworks, can become not only offensive but illegal, and as david price argues “conduct becomes prohibited when the threshold is crossed and private choices encroaches upon public domain”.59. but it is often difficult to judge what is offensive and what is not, and what is private and what is public.60. today more and more governments are taking as their responsibility to keep the delicate balance of safeguarding freedom of expression while minimizing the very real risks posed by expressions which harm or threaten to harm.61. they think it is too much to expect young people to bridge the gap between intellectual knowledge and the kinds of citizenship skills, attitudes and values they will need in the “real world”.62. their utmost goals are in the pursuit of excellence in both academic and other domains of education, and are delivering educational outcomes that meet the needs and expect