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2010中考英语写作高分之写好文章的结尾4要点2010-03-25 14:08:56 来源：E度论坛 我要投稿 怎样写好文章的结尾文章的结尾没有固定的模式，同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下，记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语，以使文章首尾呼应，结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。1. 自然结尾，点明主题随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。2. 首尾呼应，升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.3. 反问结尾，引起深思这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can Dont you think learning English is great fun?4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers life will be better and better.另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。2010中考英语写作高分 写好开头4方式2010-03-25 14:07:04 来源：E度论坛 网友评论0条我要投稿 怎样写好文章的开头开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?1. “开门见山”式开头一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。. 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us. 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I dont think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but2. 回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget (永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.3. 疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Dont you think planting trees is 再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore？4. 倒叙式开头在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. Its a story.2010中考英语写作提高5分的38个“魔鬼句型”2010-03-25 14:04:22 来源：E度论坛 我要投稿 中考英语写作主要考查学生写句子的功底，而大家的英语水平都不相上下，如果在考试中写上几个亮点句子，不仅会让改卷老师眼睛一亮，他还会非常爽地给你一个更爽的分数。我把这三十八个句型称为“魔鬼级句型”，学会使用它们，不仅会上你的英语写作水平有一个量的积累，更有一个质的提高，从而和别人的文章拉开档次。一、the + est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。Yao Ming is the tallest basketball player that I have ever seen.姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员Liu Xiang is the most hardworking sportsman that I have ever seen.刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员。二、Nothing is + er than to + VNothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to potect our environment.没有什么比环保更重要的事。Nothing is more important than to gain knowledge.没有什么比学习知识更重要的事。三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。We cannot emphasize the importance of education.我们再怎么强调教育的重要性也不为过。四、There is no denying that + S + V .(不可否认的)例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。There is no denying that Lin Zhiling is the most charming actress I have ever seen.不可否认，林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员。五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 (全世界都知道)例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。六、There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫无疑问的)例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。七、An advantage of is that + 句子(的优点是)例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create(produce) any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。An advantage of taking exercises is that it can make us keep healthy.锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康。八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子(的原因是)例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provideus with fresh air.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此以致于)例句：So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。So beautiful is Xi Shi that we all like her.西施是如此美丽，以致于我们都喜欢她。十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然)例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by nomeans satisfactory.by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。十一、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V(愈愈)例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。十二、By +Ving, can (借着，能够)例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。By reading, we can broaden our horizon.通过阅读，我们可以扩大视野。十三、 enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (使能够)例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。Travelling enable our life to be enriched.旅行能丰富人们的生活。Watching movies enable our horizon to be broadened.看电影能开阔视野。十四、On no account can we + V (我们绝对不能)例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。On no account can we ignore the importance of education.我们绝对不能忽略教育的重要性。十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是的时候了)例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solvethe traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。十六、Those who (的人)例句：Those who break the law should be punished.违法的人应该受处罚。十七、There is no one but (没有人不)例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.没有人不渴望上大学。There is no one but longs to be a millionaire.没有人不渴望成为百万富翁。十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不)例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled togive up doing sports.由于考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in ourlife.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。二十、That is the reason why (那就是的原因)例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I dont like it.夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。Winter is cold. That is the reason why I dont like it.冬天很冷。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式.(过去年来，一直)例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for theexamination.过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。二十三、It pays to + V (是值得的。)例句：It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。二十四、be based on (以为基础)例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让明白事)例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。二十七、be closely related to (与息息相关)例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成的习惯)We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing.我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因为)例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。Thanks to Miss Qins help, I passed the examination.多亏秦老师的帮助，我通过了考试。三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么!)例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事!What an important thing it is to be honest!How important a thing is to be honest!诚实是多么重要的事!三十一、Have a great influence on (对有很大的影响)例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。三十二、do good to (对.有益)，do harm to (对有害)例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。三十三、Pose a great threat to (对造成一大威胁)例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。Noise poses a great threat to our living.噪音对我们的生活造成一大威胁。三十四、do ones utmost to + V = do ones best (尽全力去)例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。We should do our utmost to help others.我们应尽全力帮助别人。三十五、Among various kinds of ，= Of all the ， 在各种之中?例句：Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。三十六、 In my opinion， = To my mind， = As far as I am concerned， = I am of the opinion that子句 就我的看法;我认为例句：In my opinion, playing copmuter games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.就我的看法玩电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。三十七. Of all the people I know， perhaps non deserves my respect more than 在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比更值得我尊敬。例句： Of all the people I know， perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Wang, my English teacher.在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比我的英文老师王老师更值得我尊敬。三十八. 据说 It is said (that)子句一般认为 It is thought (that)子句大家都知道 It is known (that)子句据报导 It is reported (that)子句一般预料 It is expected (that)子句据估计 It is estimated (that)子句一般相信 It is believed (that)子句例句： Its known that Hangzhou is a beautiful city.众所周知杭州是座美丽的城市。要求：1. 根据提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中；2. 条理清楚， 语句通顺，标点正确，书写清