高三书面表达指导专项--描述路线方位和介绍地点.doc

高三书面表达指导专项（二）-描述路线方位和介绍地点一， 例文分析：A下面是光明中学的示意图。请根据示意图和图后的说明写一篇100词左右的短文，登到该中学的网页上。Guangming High School is in the west of the city, with the Chengxi River running nearby. It covers an area of 130 mu. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and two large buildings on both sides the library on your right and the teaching building on your left. Walking on further, you will find the gymnasium, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. Behind it, there lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildingsthe dining hall, and two dormitories for the students and teachers. All the buildings are surrounded by bushes and flowers.思考下列问题：1 作者是以什么逻辑顺序来描述光明中学的？2 作者在描述方位时采用了什么样的空间顺序？选择的参照物是什么？3 作者用了哪些描述方位的短语？请画出这些短语。B比较下列两篇描述南极洲的文章：（1） Antarctica, which is the coldest continent in the world, lies in the extreme south of the earth. it has an area of about 140,000 square kilometers. It is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year long. But it is a very rich continent. It has many well-known animals such as penguins, whales and it is also rich in mineral resources including iron, coal and so on. Up to now only some visiting scientists live there. Maybe one day lots of households will live there.（2）Antarctica lies in the farthest south of the earth with an area of about 140,000 square kilometers. Covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round, it is the coldest continent in the world. Many well-known animals such as penguins, whales live there, and it is also rich in mineral resources including iron, coal and so on. That is why people say it is a very rich continent.Up to now only some visiting scientists live there. Maybe one day many more poeple will live there.思考下列问题：1. 你认为哪篇文章较好？为什么？2. 作者主要运用了什么时态？3. 怎样表达面积和人口？C欣赏下面一篇文章，看看好在什么地方。Jiuquan lies 300 kilometers west of Jiayuguan, a final stop of the Great Wall, which is usually thought to be a place where sand stretches beyond the horizon. It was true that there was nothing here but Gobi desert 30 years ago. But things have been changing and the place has become a pleasant habitat since the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Center was set up. It is hard to imagine a riverside town with flourishing vegetation appearing in this poor desert. Even the desert around it has been turned into an eco-friendly town with flowers, grass and other plants thriving in late autumn. To everyones joy, since 2000, no sandstorm has invaded the area.D阅读下一篇文章并回答问题。假定你叫张华，你的同学李明即将去上海学习。现由你写一封便函给你们的朋友Jim，约他聚会。内容要点如下：（1）.聚会时间：本星期五下午3点30分；（2）.聚会地点：东风路225号，李明家。（3）.按下图所画路线告诉Jim怎样去李明家。注意：（1）便函用英语写，并注明便函的时间：2003年4月9日；（2）内容包括说明部分和要点；（3）字数：100字左右。 April 9th 2003 Dear Jim,Our friend Li Ming will leave for Shanghai to study. So we are going to have a get-together at 3:30 this Friday afternoon. He lives at No.225 Dongfeng Street. It is not very difficult to find your way to his home. Take a No.2 bus, the stop of which is on the left of your university gate, and get off at the second crossing. There is a cinema across the street. Turn right at the corner, and you will find Dongfeng Street. Li Mings home is 200 yards down the street on the right. There is a post office opposite to Li Mings home. Yours, Zhang Hua1. 指路时常用什么句式？2. 画出表方位的词语和指路时的常用语。二， 总体指导：1. 要把一个地点介绍清楚，必须言之有序，富有条理。所谓“言之有序”，即要符合人们认识事物、欣赏事物的习惯。有的适宜按空间顺序，一般为由上至下或由下至上，由远及近或由近及远，顺时针方向或逆时针方向等来介绍；有的宜按逻辑顺序，由概括到具体、由理想到本质、由主要到次要、由整体到部分等来说明。2. 描述方位时，确定要介绍物体或位置的参照物。3. 要注意方位词的准确运用4. 指路时常用祈使句。5. 介绍地方时，对地理位置、人口、文化、风俗习惯、历史、工农业生产、旅游景点、地方特色等做一下统筹安排，找准切入点，使文章重点突出，详略得当，结构紧凑，意思明了。句式应多变，避免都用it 开头。6. 这类文章主要用一般现在时。三好的表达方法： A方位 1. There is a tall shelf on the left of my room. （on the right of, in the front of, near the window, ） 2. Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. （On the right of the room,） 3. Next to it is a bed. （In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of ） 4. They are opposite the door. （on the left / right of the room.） 5. The office building is in the east of the campus. （in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of, ） 6. The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square. B描述国家，城市等 7. China is located in Asia. （be situatedbe surrounded by, lie to the east of ） 8. It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers. 9. The population of this city is 100,000. C 路线 10. When you come out of （get to reach） 11. Cross the street（river）（keep walking along walk down） 12. Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. （the second traffic lights, the first crossing, ） 13. Take the first turning on your left. （take the path which crosses the river.） 14. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right. 15. Youll see （find）itD表位置：1. Be located at / in . /lie at /in Our school is located at(位于) the foot of a green hill.Our school lies at the foot of a green hill.2 . standThe building stands in the center of 3. 把方位状语提前，引起全倒装1）In front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on its right.2）Behind the garden is the classroom building.3）At the back of the school are the students dormitory and the dinning-hall, in front of which lies the large sports field.4)The teachers dormitory stands between A and B.5) Next to it lies a big library.6) On the left of it it is.； on the right is ；behind it stands 7) Between the two buildings is .8) In the northwest/northeast is9) To the right of the building areand to the left E路线图描述1）It is not very difficult to find your way from the Friendship Hotel to the station.2）When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you see the traffic lights.3）Turn right at the third crossing/turning, and you will see a post office at the corner. The museum is next/opposite to it.4）Go straight ahead until you get to the end of the street.5）Please get across the bridge and go eastward.6）No.25 Bus will take you right there.7）It will take you about 10 minutes to get there.8）Its about 10 minuteswalk /ride from here.9）No.25 Bus will take you right there.四，范文背诵： 1. 假如你是李明，你收到了美国朋友Robin的来信，他在信中说他将于6月3日和他妹妹到北京来看望你，对此你表示高兴和欢迎。但你碰巧要去珠海出席一个会议，无法接他们。为此，你向Robin深表歉意并在信中告诉他从机场到你家如何走，说明你家在403室，你母亲到时会在家中迎候他们，最后告诉他们你将于6月5日回京。要求：1短文必须包括文字说明的所有重点。2短文必须按图中所示的交通路线和交通方式说明。3书信格式正确。4字数：100字左右。 MMay 25,2004Dear Robin, Im very glad to learn from your letter that you and your sister will come to Beijing and visit me on June 3rd. But Im terribly sorry that I cant meet you because I have to attend a meeting in Zhuhai. Now let me tell you the way to my house. When you get out of the airport, you can take Bus 359 to Dongzhimen. Walk across the flyover to the west until you see a bookstore on your right. Turn left there and go straight ahead. Then you can see a bank, and then a cinema on your left. The apartment building I live in is next to the cinema. Find Room 403 and my mother will be meeting you at home. Ill be back on June 5th. Best regards to you all. Yours truly, Li Ming2. 假定你是一名导游，请根据“龙门山旅游区示意图”向一个新西兰访华旅游团作一简要介绍，说明旅游区的位置、景观、环境特点及有关的服务设施等情况。说明：1避暑胜地龙门山位于东海之滨，风景优美，夏季气候凉爽宜人，森林里有许多珍稀植物；2现代化娱乐及服务设施齐全，每年接待大量国外游客。注意：1文章须包含图示全部内容。 2字数：100词左右。 3参考词汇：风景scenery。 4文章开头已给出。,Ladies and gentlemen,Im glad to tell you something about the Touring Region of Longmen Moutain.Longmen Moutain is 30 kilometers away from here, Donghai City. Its on the coast of East Sea. The mountain has very beautiful scenery. The air is fresh and its cool and pleasant in summer. So its a wonderful place for your summer holidays. There is a forest in which you can see many rare plants. You can go horse-riding, play golf at the foot of the mountain or go swimming on the seaside if you are interested. All the services there such as hotels, shops, cinemas, and hospitals are satisfactory. This touring region receives a large number of visitors at home and abroad every year. You are sure to have fun if you pay a visit.Thank you.3. 最近，美国华盛顿中学将参观你们学校。请根据下面的示意图所提供的信息，向客人介绍你们学校的概况(规划)。注意：1. 开头、结尾已为你写好2. 词数:100左右。 绿 化 带绿化带绿化带校门图书馆(刚建成)艺术馆2006年筹建，配有 音乐室、 画室等 办公楼科学楼设有化学实验室、物理实验室、生物实验室、电脑室拟于今年底配建两间语音室教学楼正在施工中，今年秋季投入使用数学楼1995年建成，共有40个教室，每个教室配有多种教学设备体育馆2005年8月动工，预计2006年8月竣工运动场 绿 化 带Welcome to our school. This is the diagram of our school. As you can see, Trees are planted around our school to make it look more beautiful. Entering our school, you can find our school library on your right, which has just been completed. Opposite the library an art museum with music and drawing classrooms and so on will be built in 2006.Behind the library is the office building, west of which lies the science building with chemistry, physics, biology labs and computer classrooms. Two language labs will also be added at the end of this year.Here are two teaching buildings one of which was built in 1995, with 40 well-equipped classrooms; the other is being built and will come into use this autumn. In front of the playground a stadium will be put up in August this year and completed in August, 2006.Now, please allow me to show you around our campus.4. 以Tianan men Square为题写一篇短文。1我和张新上周六上北京去参观了天安门广场。 2广场面积44万平方米。3广场布局如图。4谈感受。参考词汇：天安门城楼：Tianan men Gate Tower毛主席纪念堂: the Chairman Mao Memorial Hall人民英雄纪念碑： the Monument to the Peoples Heroes人民大会堂North历史博物馆天安门城楼人民英雄纪念碑毛主席纪念堂 Tian anmen SquareZhang Xin and I arrived in Beijing last Saturday. On the same day we visited Tiananmen Square.It is one of the largest squares in the world, covering an area of 444,000 square meters. On the north of it is the red Tiananmen Gate Tower. On the south is the grand Chairman Mao Memorial Hall. At the center stands the Monument to the Peoples Heroes. On one side of the square is the Great Hall of the People and on the other the Museum of Chinese History.Millions of people dream of visiting the square. Everything there reminds us of the history of our struggle and inspires us to work still harder.5. 你和Jim是小学同班同学，他六年前读完小学就回英国了。最近，你收到他的来信，在信中他问起昔日就读的小学的情况。因此你于几天前回了趟小学，请你参考以下图表，给Jim写一封回信。注意：字数100120左右，开头与结尾已给出，不算入字数内。 参考词汇：植物园botanical garden.Dear Jim,How glad I am to get your letter! It has been 6 years since we left primary school.A few days ago, I paid a visit to our primary school and was delighted to say that great changes have taken place there. The old-3story building has been replaced by a new 8-story one. At the back of it stands a new dormitory building for students, while in the past no students lived in the school. Still remember the woods where we had so much fun? Im sorry to tell you it has been turned into a new library and a botanical garden. To my surprise, the only place that remains the same is the sports ground, our favorite spot. Hope youll come here again! Yours Li Ming6. 假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐(to have a picnic)。你们的英国朋友Peter也应邀参加。请你根据下面的示意图，给他写封短信，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。词数80100。June l